Chapter 5 the trials

"Welcome Finn to the chamber of trials here within the Nightosphere." Hudson said.

"So what do I do here?" Finn asked. Said as he looked around the barely visible room that is only lit by a single torch in the canter of the room.

"This is known as the Chamber Of Trials and you will be tested here to see if you are worthy to become the next king of the Nightosphere. " Hudson said.

"Ok so let's get to the trials Hudson!" Finn said excited.

"Before we start would you like to see what you look like in your new form?" Hudson asked.

"Yes but vampires can't see their reflection in mirrors or on cameras." Finn replied.

"I have a mirror that will allow you to see your reflection take a look." Hudson said as he pulled a small hand mirror of out of his pocket.

"How do I know it won't curse me or anything?" Finn said as he took the mirror from Hudson.

"Since you may one day be my son in law I would not do that and plus Marceline would flip if I did anything like that so trust me." Hudson said with a genuine smile.

"Ok." Finn said as he looked into the mirror.

(Finn looked into the mirror to see that his hair was no longer blonde it has become a jet black color, his skin turned to a greyish blue , his eyes were crimson red , and he had sprouted two fangs one in each side of his mouth.)

"So this is what I look like now?" Finn asked.

"Yes." Hudson said.

So can I start the trials now? Finn asked.

"Yes just enter the door in front of you and the trials will start but beware should you fail the price will be death." Hudson said in a dark disturbing voice.

I understand." Finn said as he walked through the door into the room.

(Finn walked into the room and the door slammed shut behind him and disappeared.)

"What where is the door it's gone?" Finn yelled.

"I told you when you entered the door that the trials would start so there is no turning back now Finn just so you know I will act as your guide though the trials." Hudson's voice echoed though the chamber.

"Ok then I understand what is the first trial?" Finn asked.

"Lust." Hudson said.

"Ok so what do I have to do to pass?" Finn asked.

"It's simple just walk through the chamber without looking at any of the women." Hudson said as the room was lit up by torches reviling hundreds or naked women fully exposed some laying on the floor and some sitting on stones.

"I failed then because I looked." Finn said.

"It does not start till you cross that redline on the floor." Hudson said.

"Oh ok." Finn said as he looked down and saw the line.

"When you're ready to start cross the line." Hudson said.

"Ok give me a moment." Finn said. As he ripped the sleeves off his shirt and tied them together to make a blindfold and tied it around his head and made sure he couldn't see.

"Are you ready?" Hudson asked.

"Yes." Finn replied as he walked over the line and began to walk.

"Finn this test is known as a test of loyalty to the woman you love so walk you must walk that path that is true and holy." Hudson said.

"Marceline is everything to me so this trial is nothing but a waste of time because these women are shit compared to her." Finn said with a serious voice as he walked straight down the path.

"Hey honey want to have some fun." A woman said as he grabbed Finn's pants leg.

"Fuck you bitch!" Finn said as he slapped her hand away and kept walking forward.

(Finn walked until he smacked in a door.)

(Finn removed his blindfold and opened the door and walked inside.)

"What trial is this?" Finn said as the door closed behind him.

"This is the trial of greed this is a test of your heart to see if you can continue on the holy path without being tempted by greed." Hudson's voice echoed.

(The room light up and reviled a lot of gold, weapons, blades, and other cool stuff.)

"Go ahead Finn you can take anything it's yours." Hudson said.

(Finn walked up to the gold and took handfuls of gold and some blades and walked toward the door.)

(As Finn got near the door he saw a little girl standing there and stopped.)

"What are you doing here little girl?" Finn asked.

"I came here come I could get money so I could get food do you have any money mister?" The little girl asked.

Finn dropped his backpack to the ground and emptied his pockets and said "here I don't need this you can have it."

"Thank you mister." the little girl said as he grabbed the gold and disappeared.

(The door opened reviling the next trial.)

"Good job Finn." Hudson's voice echoed as Finn walked through the door.

(Finn walked through to see an everything burrito sitting on a table in the room.)

"Finn this is a test of your anger so can you resist getting angry?" Hudson said.

(The room lit up and showed a man and a little girl.)

(The man began to hit the girl calling her "A little fucking lire.")

(The little girl cried and screamed.)

(Finn watched as he felt his blood began to boil as he balled up his fist.)

"Remember don't let your anger take over Finn." Hudson's voice echoed.

"He is right." Finn thought to himself.

(Finn began to laugh and smile as he watched the man beat the girl.)

"What is so funny asshole?" The man said as Finn began to walk toward him.

"Nothing your about to get the beating of your life you fucking asshole." Finn laughed as he stopped in front of the man.

(Finn throws a punch square in the man's face knocking him to the ground as Finn jumped on his chest and began punching him in the face while laughing and smiling.)

(After a couple of minutes Finn got up and began to walk toward the door.)

"Thank you so much mister." The little girl said.

"No problem." Finn said as he looked back with a blood covered smile and turned back on his path to the door.

"I didn't think you would get past that one Finn I'm surprised." Hudson's voice echoed.

(Finn walked through the door into a room with a family playing a new bemo game.)

"This is a test of envy this will let me know if you can be happy for others and no want to take something form someone to gratify yourself." Hudson's voice echoed.

"Easy." Finn said as he walked straight past the family to the exit door.

"What how that was Frog Slayer 2 a game you been wanting forever." Hudson's voice echoed.

"I already have the game I bought it last week." Finn said as he walked through the door into a dark cave.

"This final trial it's of sacrifice it will test to see if you are willing to give up your life for someone you love." Hudson's voice said as he walked out of the shadows.

(The room lit up reviling Marceline tied to a cross in the center of the room with a man in all black coat and a black hat standing with a wooden stake to her heart.)

"Marceline!" Finn yelled.

"Let her go!" Finn screamed as he ran up and tried to punch the man but was knocked back by a force field.

(Finn tried again and again but kept getting knocked back.)

"Why can't I hit him?" Finn yelled.

"It's because you're not supposed to kill him Finn." Hudson said.

"What else am I supposed to do if I can't hit him?" Finn asked.

"I can't tell you Finn you have to figure it out for yourself." Hudson said.

"So you're going to let your only daughter die?" Finn asked.

"It's not my problem I really don't care at all." Hudson said as he disappeared.

"FUCK YOU ASSHOLE!" Finn screamed.

(Finn looked back at Marceline with tears in his eyes.)

"What do you want?" Finn asked as he fell to his knees sobbing.

"A life" The man said.

"What?" Finn asked.

"I want a life be it your life or her life." The man said.

"Can't we work something out?" Finn said.

"10 seconds to decide. The man said as he began to count down.

"10"

"9"

"8"

"7"

"6"

(The man began to count.)

"5"

"4"

"3"

"2"

"Take me Finn." yelled.

"Very well." The man said as he snapped his fingers.

(Marceline drooped from the cross and was sent flying across the room and Finn popped up on the cross.)

(Marceline sat there and stared in horror as she saw Finn on the cross.)

"Marceline I love you." Finn said just before the stake was stabbed into his heart causing blood to come out of his mouth.

"Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo" Marceline screamed as Finn died slowly.

(Tears began to roll down Marceline's face as he dropped to her knees sobbing.)

(The man disappeared and Hudson appeared before Finn.)

"Was she real?" Finn asked.

"Yes she is my real daughter and she was in real danger but you made a noble choice." Hudson said.

"At least she is safe." Finn said as he felt everything begin to go dark.

"When you see her ask her about Bonnibel's past." Hudson said as everything went dark.

( A.N. Well that's the end of chapter 5 let me know what you all think. Also thank you to the people who have read this far so let me know if you want me to continue ) -lightangel16