This is not the last chapter, it is a afterword, therefore: Do not read this, unless you've read the whole fanfiction (Or wish to receive spoilers, for both the fanfiction and the Live Action Death Note movie.)
Looking back at this fanfiction, I must say, I'm not impressed - B's plot and personality is stupid, I guess I can excuse the change in his plot by the fact that he got rather involved in the Kira case in the end, but, I can't excuse his too kind nature, I dislike him, it is unlike him to be like this (In my opinion).
The lines could have been filled a lot more out than they have been, it seemed rushed.. Like most of my works, I tend to get to a point where I just need to empty my head to not forget what I wish to write, and the result I wish for.
The end is a little lame, it is almost identical to the trick L himself pulled at Kira in the live action movie, I promised my mother to watch the live action movie with her when I was done with this fanfiction, which was a mistake, if I had seen how identical the ending was to that, I would probably had used some more time on making the fanfictions ending more.. Unique. (Not to mention I re-write it six times).
It's hard to build a story with the main character being B, with that little we know about him, you force your personal opinion into him, making him how you see him, which makes him hard to work with, I don't wish to provoke people who might think of him differently then I - Though I must admit, as said earlier, he became way too kind - I re-read Another Note after this fanfiction and confirmed this - To be honest, the whole fanfiction is based on whatever I can remember from six years back, when I originally both saw and read Death Note and Another Note, my memory might be good, but.. I guess it failed a bit in the end.
Sigh, it's typical me, I was so proud of the story before I started working on the smaller things, looking at how unrealistic this was (Ignoring that the whole series is about a killing note book), I'm a little disappointed in myself, that said, I'll leave this here, I won't delete the whole thing just because I dislike it, I just hope people who read it, enjoy it more than I do.
Otherwise, I hope they take this long note as an apology for my apparent confidence in my own memory - I'm trying to improve, I hope my upcoming improvement might lead me to more fanfictions, hopefully also some new ones with Death Note, considering writing a good fanfiction to this series (My all-time favorit) is a lifetime goal.
It took me weeks to get to the point where I choose to add this note, since it's unlike me to explain or apologize for anything I've done in a fanfiction, but this means so much to me, I felt like I was bound to it - Sorry B, I guess I misjudged you.. I know you're tougher than this. - And sorry for sharing my troubles with those who might be reading this, I hope it won't happen again.