Mr(or miss) Mishi Goiku I am sorry that you find this story so unentertaining and think that these kids at 8/9 should be shown with a 12/20 year old vocabulary even if hermione is an avid reader they are kids and shal be written as such their vocabulary will progress with time I know Harry is mentally older but he has to pretend to be a kin not very hard considering he was never very avid in his studying therefore he would not really have encorpated such words into his vocabulary if you dont like it don't read it your comment was not constructive criticism and as such will be disregarded the only reason i'm mentioning you is because you complimented my creativity thanks for that so now on with the story
"Hedwig Can you just go hunt till I call you" Harry asked, a little bothered by the attention he was getting with her here she nodded and flamed away "Why'd you do that" Hermione asked. "Because I can shock mum, dad and series when she flames in" "That is evil" "I know" They laughed "so Herpo how do you like Hedwig jellish your not my only familiar" "No I admire her quite a beautiful specimen of a phoenix she is" "Herpo do you have a crush" "Of course not" I know cross species is not a problem with magical creatures" Herpo just huffed and went silent (If you guys are wondering why Herpo is out in the open basilisks ,when familiars, can become a tattoo on their masters back/arm/etc it is like that for all magical creatures). "What'd you say?" Hermione asked "Accused him of cruising on Hedwig" "Harry their different species" "magic Hermione, magical creators don't have that problem" Hermione sputtered but did not dispute the fact knowing that's how new dragons and the dutch were made. When they got to the leaky cauldron they meant up with Harry's parents "How was your day Harry, Hermione?" Lily questioned "Great Harry got me ice cream and some productivity jewelry and a broom and a wand" Hermione said excitedly and very quickly. Harry wanting to get a word in well his parents were still shocked he started talking "I also got uncal Series a broom you to dad and of course one for myself I've also gotten a phoenix her name is Hedwig" . Said phoenix flamed then said parents then froze with shock "I also got myself a wand." "Umm where did you get the money you must've cleaned out your trust vault for the year" James sputtered "I just took half of my trust vault for the year and used the Gryffindor for the rest ,I also got the protective jewelry from there" Harry said. "Well at least you only took half" Lilly said "Dad I have a gift for you It's a firebolt it will come out in about 5 years I used the potter shares in nimbus to get a discount I also got one for Sirius and me and Hermione Now that were done with that lets go home Hedwig" Harry called grabbing his mom and Hermione well she grabbed his dad they disappeared in a flash.
Time skip 1 1/2 year
"I've done it" Harry yelled bursting out of one of the many rooms in Potter Manor "Done what honey" Lily asked well cooking lunch "I've finished my broom" Harry said gesturing to the feather duster looking thing a brief intro to the lightning bolt (What harry will name his broom) it is a broom shaped stick of whomping willow wood Which he refused to say where he got it from (cough a potter house elf helps him take it from the school cough) the back had a collection of phoenix feathers the entire thing had verais runs and numbers running along the inside and 20 derbuilty runs on each individual feather and hundreds on the handle along with a rune to turn off the speed buffers and many of the standard safety enchantments that a professional flyer could do without he could allys turn them off but when he did that he was only twice the speed of a fire bolt and not seven times of course he had it on it the moment not wanting his mum to destroy it for being too unsafe at the words that his broom was finished reached the tired ears of Sirius , James and Remus they jumped up not tired anymore and grabbed harry put him on prongs back (in deer form) and shifted themselves and were in the yard quicker than Lilly could yell at them for transforming in the house "Come on harry try it out Harry mounted the broom and took off just as Hermione and Lily came out "JAMES POTTER I told you to get me when Harry finished his broom so I could check over the charm work You know i can't get around quickly at the moment" Lilly yelled well gesturing at her bulging belly which james was responsible for "If it wasn't for Hermoi- " Lilly stopped short seeing her son whipping around at roughly 126 mph around the Potter Quidditch pitch. Harry ,seeing his mum, flew down to her and Hermione"Did you see that ha ha I was right feathers beat twigs Remus owes me 5 sickles ( harry potter money is so messed up I dont even know how to value it cause remember the weasleys have 5 kids going to hogwarts at once and 1 gallon and assorted sickles /knuts for all of them plus food and tuition fee books clothes mortgage taxes (do wizards pay taxes?) but their only worth like 20 pounds really? I mean really?! its so messed up) "Harry you did not "do" it that broom is so unsafe" "Nonsense Hermione that's the slow version when I activate this rune it deactivates the slowing enchantments that's when it gets fun" "Harry show us that" James and Sirius exclaimed at the same time "Harry I don't think th-" but Lily didn't get a chance to finish her sentence. Harry took out his wand after flying through the air at breakneck speeds and paused to pull out his wand when an idea struck him cast sticking charms and write runes on his and hermione's holsters to keep their wands to be getting grabbed or summoned. He then held his wand out behind him willing it to shoot out blue smoke, he then proceeded to fly around and spell out the words "See Its Fine" in the sky flying down behind his mum and Hermione putting his arms around both their necks saying "see the sky agrees with me" they both jumped not knowing he had gone behind them
A month latter (8 months to hogwarts fyi)
"Hmm what am I going to do about this scar the goblins know about removing soul pieces from items but not about humans" "I may be able to help with that Harry Hedwig told him "How" He asked "There is a ritual that could use the soul piece to help us both quite well."