The Jade and Onyx Arc, Part Two: The Exposed

by Amy47101

Jade has been taken hostage by Kristoff and Andrew, leaving the dexholders with confusion and a comatose Red. As Green temporarily takes charge of the dexholders, Onyx struggles under the two-week time period he has to find Jade. When a girl as mysterious as Orange suddenly appears and Opal reunites with Onyx, the horrid truth behind the N.O. will be exposed.

7. JAOAP2 Chapters 1-6 Rewritten!

So, I haven't been updating this as much as I think I should, and I kept on mulling over why. Then it hit me; I'm unsatisfied with the direction this story is going. So, I'm not going to delete the whole story, but I am going to revise and rewrite the chapters. Many things are probably going to be cut out, but the biggest thing being Blue's gijinkaness. I thought it was a good idea when I started, then I'm thinking it's not.

So, all in all, I plan on keeping Green's wizardry in, and I might introduce another character. Bare with me people, this will be better than the last, and I highly suggest re-reading the newly written chapters. Thank you, and as always...

Amy47101 signing off! ^.^