Thanks for the review Willowsmoke! I shall take your advice! ^^
Chapter five: Feelings
Tigerpaw was exhausted.
Thistleclaw had taught him three different moves already, and he had said that no other mentor would teach him those moves, since he figured them out himself. Goldenpaw and Lionpaw were chatting together next to him. Annoying Lionpaw! Goldenpaw is okay, but Lionpaw drives me crazy! Lionpaw was talking about how he had a dream he was flying like an eagle. Goldenpaw sat here, listening and grooming her smooth fur, her beautiful amber eyes glowing...
Tigerpaw shook his head. Where did those thoughts come from?While his denmates talked on, he focused his mind on a move Thistleclaw had taught him. You focus on your opponent, dart from the side, twist paws around his body, unstable him, see Goldenpaw's warm smile... Feel her soft fur...
Tigerpaw shook his head again. What's wrong with me? Why do I keep thinking about her? Stop thinking about Goldenpaw! Battle moves, battle moves, battl- "Hey Tigerpaw!" Lionpaw's obnoxious voice sounded beside him. "Are you arguing with yourself or what? You keep shaking your head!" Tigerpaw felt himself burn beneath his fur. "Of course not!" He spat. "I was just thinking! You should try it sometime!" He cut himself short as he was about to say, 'you lazy lump of foxdung .' It would've been very disrespectful. Lionpaw rolled his eyes. Goldenpaw just smiled at him kindly. Tigerpaw looked at her, drowning in the depths of her beautiful golden eyes.
Tigerpaw sighed. " Just go to sleep you two. You're gonna wake the whole camp up with your chatter." He turned away from the apprentices, and drifted off to sleep, seeing Goldenpaw in his dreams.
Tigerpaw has a cruush! Goldenpaw and Tigerpaw sittn' in a tree... Anyway I guess I'm starting to realize that I usually don't write a lot but update often! So... yay or no yay? That is the question. XP