I'm finally free I'm so sorry I know you all hate me now *sniff* I'm so so so terribly sorry please forgive meeeeee!
Chapter 24:
Natsu leaps from there hiding spot "We won't allow you to continue" he says coolly. "That mark, there from fairy tail!" Sherry exclaims. Reiti turns his head slightly to look at her "What are you waiting for go destroy the village". Natsu narrows his eyes "And why must you do that?" Reiti held out a fist "All who appose our plans are our enemies" was his simple reply. Images of a small town being destroyed and people being brutally murdered filled his mind. He glared at the man in front of him "That's your reason" he stated more than questioned.
Gray suddenly ran towards Reiti fist in hand, "Sop this useless ritual!" he yelled placing his hands on the ground. Ice spiked up from the earth, Reiti hmphed and placed a single hand down countering the attack. The two ice masses shattered, gray glared while Reiti kept his calm façade. "Leon do you know what your doing?" gray growled behind gritted teeth. 'He knows this person?' Natsu thought. Leon smiled" fu fu it's been a long time, Grey". Happy and Lucy's jaws dropped "EEEEEH?" they yelled.
"What are you doing?" gray repeated Leon ignored the question, "Is it a coincidence that you're here? Well it doesn't matter" he turned back to Sherry and the other two "Go I can take care of my self" "Yes sir!" "Ooon!" Natsu leaped forward to stop them, "No Natsu stay back!" Grey yelled. Natsu was suddenly encased in ice, "Happy!" Grey shouted. "Aye!" the cat responded lifting Lucy into the air." Eeeh were leaving Natsu?" she asked more confused than worried. "Why do you care?" he questioned back. She stayed silent thinking about her actions a second time that day.
The ice shards surrounding Natsu smoothed out and he was now incased in a frozen ball, he looked down at himself 'I look ridiculous' he thought then he melted it and wiped of the access water. He glanced at Grey who's mouth was hanging open and Leon who also looked surprised. "Ill leave you here then" he said then jumped down the side of the cliff. Getting over the shock Grey turned to Leon with renewed anger,"you know Ul gave her life to seal Deliora so why are you trying to destroy what she left us?!"
Leon removed his mask, "stop trying to kid yourself, Grey, you killed Ul after all" Grey clenched his fist and Leon continued "how could you live like that".
His white hair waved in the wind.
I hope that was longer and before I continue the character meeting thing I want you to check out this review from anon692 I really don't know ho to respond
Nice story idea but some of your spelling is wrong and centring your writing makes it look funny and most people have it on the left to right format
Nothing bad to comment about but I forgot to give a response and then he or she sent this message
For fucksake learn to take criticism ,it is a nice quality to have , all i was doing was pointing out alk the problems in the story that i found in thea hope that it could help you ,but you in your infinate glory decide no there is nothing wrong with my story this guy is a flaming bastard who knows nothing, if i wished to flame you i would have writtten a long as fuck paragraph and reposted it so many times that you delete the story or just something incredibly hurtful, so please this is not a flame this is criticism learn to tell which is which as criticism might give you some help with your writing
Um wow I still don't understand what was wrong here and I'm sorry if my spelling is incorrect my editor must not be working right and for a fact I like centering my words I thought it was easier to read…sorry :(