Fifth

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Jack hit the floor hard, his body shuddering under the force and pain from the spear that drove through his chest. He looked up and saw Daniel and Teal'C come into view, talking to him frantically. He could feel pressure on his chest as Teal'C applied pressure to the wound. He stared at Daniel as he spoke but he couldn't hear what he was saying. All his senses were overwhelmed with the pain in his chest and the intensity of breathlessness that consumed him. It was like everything was in slow motion as Daniel and Teal'C tried to save him.

Suddenly he felt something trickle down the side of his mouth, he reached up and wiped it with his hands before inspecting it. His fingers were red… blood red.

"Oh, this can't be good" he murmured. He started to feel his body going cold… icy cold. He could feel the trembling of his body as it tried to combat against the chill he was feeling. He could feel himself becoming more and more tired. He closed his eyes for a second but could hear someone yelling at him through the deafening silence.

"…ack!...JACK!" Jack's eyes snapped open locking on Daniel's as he sucked in a gulp of blood and air. "Hold on Jack…." Daniel pleaded.

"Save Carter" he stuttered through the pain and breathlessness.

"Jack you…." But Jack didn't hear the rest as his eyes rolled back in his head and his body succumb to the violent shaking of convulsions as his lung filled with blood and started to collapse.

Authors Notes

Hi everyone, sorry it's been so long.

I know its small but I hope you like it.

Hope to update soon xx

Thanks everyone for reading!

P.S This ISN'T a tragedy story