Hi peoples! I made a few more chapters, hope ya enjoy! :D
Chapter to the rose of a Heroin
ok jazzie-kun pleas dont get mad at me cause your not in it yet. You'l apear soon dont worry. Uh-huh.
StarKit wock up and sunlit was in the branches. Branches DONT glow, dear.
She closed her eyes againstill tired. Put a Space near the 'st' and she's ill!
Butter mom wouldn't let her sleep not today. Buttermom: I just like Butterfingers okay!
"Sweety its time to get up" said Dawnsparkle; her eys shinning. "Today is important today."
"What is it Mom" said StarKit awake right away. Buttermom : Don't you sass me you...
Then the she cat rememembered what today was. Gasp! She doesn't even know her own 6th bday!
"Ohmigosh its my serimony today!' she squelled excercisedly. Yes, GET SOME FREAKING EXERCISE!
Today was the day she was an apprentice! Good grammar!
She flicked outside not even waiting for her Mom. But her Mom cot up to her quick. Throws cots on head
"Sweety you know the clans don't except cat slike use sometimes." She said. Your name is against the laws of Sanity
StarKit glared. She didn't lake beig told that. Tell your mother dat! She named u!
Just because her Mom was a usedto be Shadowclan cat and her dad was jayFeather the medicine Cat didn"t mean she ws different! That gives them bad naming choices, I bet Hollyleaf, Jayfeather and Lionblaze would be Crowleaf, Grayfeather and Goldenblaze if Squrrielflight wasn't there!
"StarPaw come here." Said FireStar from the leg. WOT!
He jumped down. Okay, sure~
"StarKit it s tome for you to become an apentice: he said. Nope!
"Your a strong brave cat and because of that I will mentor with you." Double NOPE
Ever body gasped. StarKit did too. Se herd hear mother say "Wow!". Triple NOPEE!
Firehert liked her shoulder. You hate the rest of her, I agree!
He whispered in her ear "youll be the best their ever was StarPaw I know ti." STOP WITH THE LYING!
Surpised she walked away when they were done howling for her./ We're WOLVES!
Then she went ofer to JayFeathern and DawnSparkle who were very prod. Good job! You began ur Prodding!
"Daughetr where very happy but he have to say something said Jayfeather his chest puffed ouit. Child not to be proud of
"You see there is this prophcy Good
Starcaln gave me it said that out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of
the evil tiger and holly." HOLLYTUFT AND TIGERHEART
StarPaw gasped. What does it mean? You'll die today!
lol I update fast dont i. REVEIW or ill hit over the head with a frying pan! XDD jk Sure, I trust u!