Hey everybody, I wanted to thank you for the reviews, I'm happy that you found my story interesting. I hope I won't deceive you in the next chapter if I do please tell me my errors.
Oh and if you're going to negatively review my story at least tell me why.
So thanks again!
I now have 4 great oc's on my waiting list ;P!
Disclaimer; I do NOT own the inazuma eleven characters (even though I would love owning Kirino and Shindou, they are awesome!) nor do I own the oc's from other writers.
Enjoy !
Chapter 2
Mark Evans was strolling down an empty street lightened by a dozen of identical lamp posts, he had just finished practice with the boys. He smiled at the thought of Tenma and Shinsuke still practicing when he was leaving.
Those boys were something, they reminded him of the old times when him, Jude, Axel and himself would stay out until dark practicing their play. Well more exactly, his friends watching him get pummeled by a swinging tire. His thoughts were interrupted when he realized he was near his destination.
He glanced right then left, before crossing a street. He stopped in front of a tall residential building, looked frew all the names and rang the bell beside "Yamazaki".
Mark counted 8 seconds before someone finally answered the bell. He immediately recognized the girly energetic voice coming out from the speaker. "Who is it?"
"It's Mark, we need to talk." A few seconds later the door unlocked and closed itself behind him.
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A few hours later, We stood in a straight line next to the field, tension was obviously in the air while the coach asked which side we chose to fight for. I had answered that I was going to continue fighting for the real football. Shindou, Sangoku and Shinsuke answered the same. To my surprise Kirino-sempai joined us. We were now five against 11, piece of cake!
Kurama's group turned in our direction and Hamayi shouted the obvious:
"Hey guys, you're getting way over your heads, were talking about you five against the Five Sector, its mission impossible!"
"Actually, it's us six against the Five sector…" said a feminine voice coming from behind the coach. We all jumped in surprise and looked around us searching for the voice's owner. Mark stepped aside, and we were finally able to see him… huh… I mean her .
A girl, probably my age but a few inches shorter than me, was standing in front of us. Already regretting attracting everybody's attention.
She was playing nervously with the tip of her chocolate brown hair which was tied in a left sided braid, woven with snowflakes incrustations. Her bangs were swept from right to left just above her eyes (braid like Elsa's in Frozen). Her sky blue eyes were timidly staring at the ground.
The coach stepped up and declared: "This is Yamazaki Honoka, and she'll be playing with us during this match!"
"Heeeeeeeeeeeh!?" The team and the managers exclaimed.
Don't get me wrong it was great having a new team mate, but…uh…well, now wasn't the time. Oh, well. It's not like we could change the coaches' mind. Might as well go with it.
"Great now we have one more player to fight against Five Sector!" I beamed, Kurama glared at me and turned back to the coach.
"Coach, are you sure? I mean she…she's a girl…" he complained.
In less than two seconds he was surrounded by Eva and Midori who had dark auras around them. The bluenette was in quite a life threatening situation.
Eva grabbed him by the collar and asked (more like scared the heck out of him)"What do you mean by she's a girl?"
Luckily Kirino came to his rescue and diplomatically explained
"What he meant was that she's a girl… that we know nothing about including her football skills." Shindou added "Now please girls put him down." Most of us were sweat dropping at the scene except Hayami, who was cowering in front of the two manager's dark expressions.
When the boy was finally back on the ground, every body's attention returned on the new girl and the coach.
"This subject is not discussable, now boys…and girl we have a match to play! Good luck!" After his "speech" the coach left us in our spot to go talk with Otonashi-san.
I was the first to walk up to the girl and greet her, everyone else was chatting in different groups still indecisive on what to do.
"You're name's Yamazaki, is that it?
"Yes, but you can just call me Honoka."
"Welcome to the team Honoka, I'm Tenma, I'm a middle fielder" I smiled at her, she smiled back and replied. "Glad to be part of this team, I'm a forward by the way." Shinsuke barged in their introduction and started asking many many questions.
"Wow, that's so cool. Do you have any super techniques? Do you go to Raimon, because I never saw you before? In which year are you? I'm in First year. Where did you learn how to play soccer...?"
"I…hum…well…" In the end, Honoka just got dizzy trying to answer him, he finally stopped when Shindou told us to take our places on the field, the coach informed us that Honoka was going to replace Kurama for the game.
Yeah I know, bad ending and bad English but hey I'll get better in time. I'm sure my story is readable
So thanks for the oc's but well now i have at least six of them, so...hum... stop sending! The factory is closed!
