Freedom Among Slaves: A Mage's beginning

by FinalThorn

What would have happened if (Female, Mage) Hawke had been born as a noble living in Kirkwall? This details her life from discovering her magical talent to the start of Awakening. Only follows the bare bones of the games' story. Discontinued - see last chapter.

13. Discontinued

I'm discontinuing this story for several reasons.

1. Hawke was, in my opinion, becoming a Mary Sue.

2. I am unhappy with the quality of this story.

3. I have unfortunately lost the original files, so I cannot just go back and fix things. I cannot recover the files either, as the laptop I was using had to be returned to factory settings. It was a long time coming, to be honest.

4. My writing style has improved since. (I hope!)

BUT, I have my own laptop now, and now that I have the time, I shall be rewriting this story under a different name. I am really sorry for the inconvenience.

Thank you to everyone who reviewed, followed or favourite. Your support means a lot to me. The rewrite will be posted under the title "Freedom in Blood" for those of you who wish to read it.