This is my first fan fiction, so give me a break...

also don't expect chapters to come out rapidly, I'll make them when I make them, I tend to be creatively stumped often, I will also be changing the personalities of some of the characters slightly. NO FLAMES. Enjoy!

Quick Disclaimer: I do not own any aspect of the black rock shooter or soul eater.

I originaly created this for my group friends group, Otaku, but some of them have problems...

Fluffy: Cant read openoffice, sry.

Me: GOD DAMNIT

So yay, now I'll be posting on fanfiction for now on, and a lot of questions came up, a lot of them were really stupid so I decided only to answer a few...

Quick Q/A

Q: Why aren't you making them faster?

A: Why can't you read?

Q: Whose personalities are you changing?

A: answers come to those who wait patiently

Q: Lesbian relationship?

A: Possibly, you will have to wait and see :)

Q: Why is you're grammar so bad?

A: IDK, why can't people read the bold text up top?

Q: Awesome so far, can't wait for more!

A: Not a question, but thank you!

Q: You're fight scene sucks

A: I don't see you writing anything better, so stfu please

OK with that done, LETS GET ON TO THE STORY SHALL WE!

The Flaming Soul

Chapter 2: The Girl of Blue Eyes

"Yes! Finally we're here, ah smell that food" said Soul as they were driving through the city "but you probably want us to investigate and ask the witnesses right?

"We can do that later, I guess we can get something to eat now" Soul was surprised by her response.

"Ok, what gives? You've been quite for the whole trip, and you were acting weird at home" Soul said bluntly as they pulled over

"Nothing Soul, just a little tired, thats all"

"Maka, Ive been your partner for at least 3 years now, I know when your lieing now spill it". She only sighed and looked toward the church. "Oh..." Soul then turned to Maka and rested his hand on her shoulder " Maka, I said this back then and I'll say it now, it wasn't your fault, you know as well as I do that a weapon must protect its meister, no matter the cost". Maka sighed again

"I know, its just I don't want you getting hurt because of me."

"Don't worry, nothing bad is going to happen" he then looked to the restaurant "lets head inside, I hear this place makes the best spaghetti in town."

Maka returned to a smile "Okay, but your buy-" Maka then turned silent, her pupils had shrunk and her turned to a face of shock.

"What is it"

"Two... no, make that 3 evil souls" she then pointed in the direction of an ally way "over there".

"Eh, I was in the mood for spaghetti, but I guess some souls will do" Soul's arm transformed into a blade "besides, the lights show up only at night, right? Might as well have some fun till then" he then turned into a scythe. Maka then grabbed soul, now a scythe, and ran into the ally. They came up upon what looked like was once a basket ball court, now home to overgrowth and scrap.

"I don't get it, their here, I can sense-"

"Maka look out!"

Maka then dodged the large claw like blades that swept downward at her, she stumbled back attempting to regain her footing, only to be thrown back against the wall by the another creature. As she collapsed in pain she looked toward the attackers. The one that had struck her against the wall was large and chunky like, a square head, its right arm was big and hefty, and had a makeshift hammer where its right hand would be. The second that had slashed at her was talk and skinny, the mouth look like it had been sewn shut, its arms reached to the ground, at the end of each its fingers was a makeshift blade each 10 inches long. The last one had leaped off the building and set itself next to the other two, a bag covered its face except for a single brown eye, it was average size for human standard, and its left arm was completely replaced by a single three foot blade with a green liquid dripping from the tip of blade, Maka guessed it was poison of some kind, she preferred not to find out any time soon. She then attempted to bring herself to her feet but fell again clenching her chest, crippled by the pain she laid on the ground, helpless to defend herself against her attackers. Maka then looked up at soul, who was now in his human form, standing above here

"Soul... no..." she struggled to speak "don't..."

"a weapon must be prepared to do anything to protect their miester..." the tallest of the three walked slowly to the white hair teen, it stopped right in-front of him, the creature slowly raised its hand, all 4 blades were prepared to slash down at soul"...no matter the cost"

Just as the creature brought down its blades towards Soul, a large blue energy blast struck the creature, thrashing it into a wall, it then collapsed to the floor, dead. The attention of Maka, Soul, and the two remaining creatures was drawn towards the direction the blast came from. Upon the roofs a silhouette of a female figure stood, she wore a long hooded jacket, the hood still up, and the tail and fluttering in the breeze, in her left hand held what looked to be the weapon that shot the blast of energy, a large cannon with smoke coming out the barrel, in other had was a sword, still hidden in its sheath. The four studied every detail of her appearance, attempting to predict her next move, but what Soul noticed shocked him. He stood there, not knowing whether to be relieved or afraid he look up at her eyes, they were a ringed dark diamond blue, the left was engulfed in blue embers, the same pair of eyes that had appeared in his recurring nightmare...

It looks I was right to follow them. She stood Upon the roofs overlooking a small courtyard that had been long forgotten. Four people were below her, all of them had their eyes fixed on her, 2 of them were the teenagers from earlier, and the other two were creatures that seemed similar to the one she had fought in the forest before, one of the two teens was laid on the ground presumable in pain.

Lets start, the cannon disappeared into a blue glow and she leaped off the roofs, she landed right in front of the white haired teen. She turned her head to the blonde who was upon the ground, a mixture of pain and amazement was painted upon her face, she then turned back to the two creatures who stood in front of her, 1 of which started running towards her, she swung her sword, allowing the sheath to fly free from the blade and into the creatures chest, causing it to stumble backwards.

As the creature attempted to regain its footing, she rushed with her sword, the blade pointed towards the heart, it managed to sidestep, the blade only missing the creature by millimeters, it then turned to slash at her, she turned in attempt to parry the attack but to no avail, the creatures blade landed upon her lower torso leaving a 3 inch gash in her side, she quickly jumped from the creatures range and landed near a fence, she looked down at her wound, her blood which was a mixture of black and blues dripped from it, although it was only a scratch to her, she realized that she would need to be more care full against this one, it was obviously faster than the one she had encountered earlier.

The creature then rushed her again, blade extended forward, she then dodged it with ease having the blade lodge itself into the fence, it struggled to get it free but to no avail, she had enlodged her sword though the creatures neck, blood rocketing out of the wounds, it then fell, dead. One left, she looked to the last creature who only stood there watching the fight play out. Once it realized its comrade was dead, it then rushed to her, it raised its hammer hand in the air to swing it down although it was slow and clumsy, as it brought the hammer down, she brought her sword upwards, severing the hammer hand from the arm, the creature fell to its knees and held his wrist, crying out in pain, she then drove her sword into the back of its head, the blade exiting the mouth, she slowly pulled out her sword and the corpse fell with a thud. She then swung the blood off her blade, grabbed the sheath, and then put her sword away. She turned her head to the two teens, the blonde now unconscious and the white haired one hunched over her, he turned his head to her and spoke in a trembling voice "who are you?" The figure turned to leave and replied

"Black Rock Shooter" then disappeared into the darkness, leaving a face of shock on the white haired teen...

OK. Chapter 4 is FINALLY done, sorry it took so long, had writers block for a while, that and school work sorta pilled up, also sorry for the over-abundance of "she" and "her" in the fight, I wanted to only show her name at the end of the chapter, so yeah, sorry for my crappy writing skills, leave you questions in the comments below.