Chapter 16 enemy base

Somewhere in a secret base

-grunt opens door –

Grunt= boss I need to speak with you

Boss= what is it im busy

Grunt= well I think we may have ninjas searching for us

Boss= hmmm? Ninjas uh? Did you see what village they are from

Grunt= uhm no boss

Boss= imbecile, then how do you even know their ninjas in the first place?

Grunt= uhm wel….. o right one of them was wearing an orange jumpsuit and another was wearing konoichi like clothings.

Boss= wait did you say orange jumpsuit

Grunt= eer yea that's right boss

Boss= I see so the old fool failed. Figures im su\\rrounded by incompetents.

Grunt= what should we do?

Boss= alert the men and lets give our little ninjas an invitation

Grunt= an invitation are we having a party?

Boss= yes with lots of candy and food and drinks and the super hero from that famous cartoon

Grunt= for real?

Boss= No you goddam idiot! Were going to lure them here and capture them torture them and then kill them now get going

Grunt= right away boss

Boss= sigh its so hard to find helpful grunts these days….

-meanwhile back at the forest hinata was exploring –

Hinata= still nothing

-a sound of a rock lifting was heard =

Hinata= whats that?

-hinata scouted and saw a man appearing out a a cave were the entrance was once block by a rock that seems to lift up when opened –

Hinata= a hidden cave? I better check it out

-she waited till the man was far enough from the entrance before sneaking inside and the door or in this case rock closed the entrance. Hinata then activated her byakugan to inspect the door/rock –

Hinata= byakugan! Hmmm no wonder I couldn't find anything this place is covered by a special seal to prevent intruders from spoting it from the outside even blocking my byakugan from seeing it. I better check this place out more

She continued on further inside the cave, meanwhile-

Naruto= still nothing in 2 days im getting tired of this

Naruto bump into somebody while he wasn't looking –

Naruto= oof! O sorry about that

He ended up bumping into the grunt –

Grunt= whatch were your going punk!... wait your that ninja whose been walking around here

Naruto= what you picking a fight? – he stood at a ready stance –

Grunt= here

Naruto= uh?

-The grunt handed him a letter –

Grunt= It's an invitation for you and your little pals

Naruto= an invitation?

The grunt turned around and left –

Naruto= what was that all about? I should get back it's almost time to meet up

Naruto and the others returned to the camp –

Kurumi= everyone present?

Ino= here

Naruto= here believe it!

Kurumi= hmmm? Hinata is not here maybe shes running late. Anyone find any clues?

Ino= I didn't find anything unsual

Naruto= me neither, although some weirdo gave me this invitation

Ino= an invitation to what naruto?

Naruto= I don't know I haven't read it yet

Kurumi= let me see

Kurumi reads the invitation –

Kurumi= seems the enemy knows we are here

Naruto= you think its from the guy were looking for?

Kurumi= most likely

Naruto= then lets go

Ino= naruto don't be stupid we need a plan, this is most likely a trap

Kurumi= it's also the only lead we have.

Naruto= lets just wait for hinata to come back

Kurumi= hmmmm

Kurumi climb the tree to check the area hinata was searching to see if she spoted her –

Kurumi= -thinks – something is not right I can't locate her

She climbs back down

Kurumi= I can't locate her through my binocular

Ino= what do we do?

Kurumi= lets go to this place the paper says

Ino= but we be walking right into a trap

Kurumi= I know just stay alert

All three of them went to the location –

Kurumi= were here but theres no one around

-suddenly a man comes out in expensive looking clothes

Man= welcome so glad you could come

Everyone went into battle stance –

Kurumi=who are you?

Man= why im the host of course, would you like some refreshment?

-suddenly a thug grabed ino's neck from behind locking it in his arm and locked her right hand on her back –

Naruto= ino!

Naruto started to rush to help ino but was karate chopped on the back of neck knocking him out cold by another thug who appeared out of nowhere –

Kurumi= dam

Man= im impresed you kept focus all this time even when your teammates are in trouble, that's quiete admirable

-suddenly a rain of kunais showered down on kurumi making dust cover her. After it stoped there was a smoke around her and a kunai came flying towards the unknown man but was evaded –

Man= my that was unexpected

As the dust dissipated it showed kurumi crouched with both blades out having deflected all of the kunais –

Man= your much better than you look, however

-a kunai was suddenly felt on her back –

Man= that wasn't enough

- kurumi turn to see the man behind –

Kurumi= -thinks – it can't be, a clone?

She was about to attempt to retaliate but… -

Man= I would advise against rash actions or your team might pay the price

The thug who was holding ino tighting grip on her neck causing her to have trouble breathing -

Kurumi= dam

-kurumi drops the blades –

Man= see you are smart. Take them away

-kurumis team was taken away and ninja gears removed –

-back in the hideout hinata was in large room with balconys on the second floor -

Hinata= this place sure is well hidden but were is the leader all ive seen are bunch of thugs

A group of men carrying 3 people entered the large room and hinata hid to not be spoted –

Man= look what we got boys a couple of ninja poking their nose in our business –

Naruto was thrown to the ground still unconscious while ino and kurumi were push while feet and hands were handcuffed -

Random thug= well what you know we got some ladies here although one of them is kinda strange with those ears hahaha

-kurumi looked at them in disgust –

Random thug = I say we enjoy them

-the thug approached kurumi but kurumi kicked him on the waist using her hands to hold her self on the floor while swinging her legs around –

Random thug = hey that hurt

Another random thug grabed her hair pulling her up and kneed her in the stomach –

Kurumi= urg *coughs*

Random thug = that will teach you to be smart. So what are we going to do with them?

Man= for now lock them up and put this gear in the weapon storage

-hinata saw everything that just hapend –

Hinata= everyones been captured I have to save them

Meanwhile in a dungeon –

Thug= enjoy your stay

Ino= well that went well…

Kurumi= well get out of this

Kurumi reached for a bobbin pin hidden in her hair –

Ino= what are you doing?

Kurumi= little trick I picked up from narcia, I will get us free

Meanwhile back with hinata –

Hinata= theres the room

Hinata moved quickly and took out the guard with a juken strike then took the keys and opend the room. There was everyones equipment, she procured the 3 swords wich were a bit heavy holding them due to also holding her own wich was 4 swords of weight –

Hinata= this is heavy

She then left and locked the door with the knocked out guard inside –

Back with kurumis team –

-kurumi unchained herself and her team –

Kurumi= all right lets get out of here

Ino= narutos still out thought

Kurumi= hmmm

She locates a bucket in the cell and a sink –

Kurumi= that will work

She grabs the bucket and fills it with water and splashes it on naruto –

Naruto= waa… what happened? Where am i?

Kurumi= in the enemy holding cell, we got captured

Naruto= oh

Ino=we need to get our gears back first before we do anything else

Kurumi= true but we don't know where that equipment was taken

Naruto=well lets just use hand to hand in the mean time

Kurumi= that not reaaly my thing but I guess we don't have a choice

Kurumi then went to pick the lock to their cell –

Kurumi= all right lets get out of here

Everyone exited the cell –

Kurumi= lets remain low until we find our stuff

Naruto= you got i…. oof

-with hinata-

Hinata= their cell should be somewhere around here

She turns in a corner and bumps into someone falling on her butt –

Hinata= ouch..

Naruto=hinata is that you?

Hinata=naruto-kun?

Kurumi= hinata were you been?

Hinata= I found a secret cave after one of the men here came out it seems that the cave entrance was under a strong barrier jutsu that prevented even my byakugan to see it through the outside.i explored the place and then I saw you 3 being brought in, so I got your gears and came to rescue you.

Kurumi= well done

Everyone equipped their gears on –

Naruto= all right then whats the plan?

Kurumi= first thigns first, hinata what intel have you been able to gather while exploring this place?

Hinata= well if im not mistaken it seems that the man we are looking for is hiding in here, unfortunate I don't have a positive id of wich is Vaelstien.

Kurumi= I think I might have an idea of who it is

Naruto= hows that?

Kurumi= since you were unconscious you didn't see him well but the man who met us outside was skilled and powerful, theres a high possibility that hes our target.

Ino= but whats our strategy we don't know the full extent of his powers and the other men in here

Hinata= I don't think the other men will pose a problem I checked their chakara lvl they are not very strong but there are many so if all attack at once It could pose a problem.

Kurumi= right so we should take out as many as we can quickly without being spoted.

Ino= hinata roughly how many men are there in here?

Hinata= hmm I say about 52 or so, well not counting the one I knocked out and locked inside the weapon storage room.

Naruto=that's quite a lot. So what's the plan?

Kurumi= lets split up into 2 teams. Hinata and naruto you go together, ino your with me. Take out as many men as you can. If you meet Vaelstien, do not engage until we re-unite. If it is not possible to avoid a fight, try to learn first all of his abilities

Everyone= roger!

They separated and did their assigned duty –

-naruto and hinata took out about 15 men while kurumi and ino took out 13 –

- Somewhere else in the cave –

Random thug= hey boss what are we gona do with those 2 women?

Boss= already got the hots for them uh? Why dont we let everyone have some fun with them while the kid watches in despair

Random thug= sounds good boss il go rally the others

Thug left the room to rally the men. At that moment both teams had taken out a total of 35 men –

Random thug=hmm where are all guys?

He sees a fellow thugs –

Random Thug= hey have you seen the others?

Thug= mmmh? Probably at their usual places

The random thug continues his search around the cave –

-back at the bosse's room –


Boss= hmmm I have a feeling something is off. I better check it out.

between both teams they had taken care of 42 enemies and were still looking for the remaining enemies -

naruto= allright so far so good...

a kunai passed right infront of naruto and stick to the wall -

naruto= whoa!

Hinata= naruto watch out!

Naruto= uh?


hinata pulled naruto away and the wall were the kunai was exploded. -

Kurumi and hinata heard the explosion-

ino= what was that?


Kurumi= sounded like an explosion

naruto= cough cough a paper bomb?

Mans voice= well well what do we have here a couple of escape prisoners?

Naruto= whose there show yourself!

the figure of the incoming voice was revealed to be the boss of the gang. Neither naruto or hinata knew he was the boss -

boss= tell me how did you manage to break free?

he spots hinata -

boss= your new and quiet the looker, you look like a hyuga – licks his lips while thinking of having that girl to himself -

hinata saw his action as he said that and felt disgusted -

naruto= who the heck are you?

Boss= what dont remember me? O yea you were knocked out so fast back then you never saw me hahaha, you sure youre a ninja?

Naruto= why you! My name is naruto uzumaki and im gona be hokage someday remember that!

Boss= hokage? You? Haha dont make me laugh.

Naruto= grrr il show you! - naruto atacks -

hinata= wait naruto!

Boss= fool – breaths in – water style water bullet! - shots bulles of water -

naruto gets hit by them and get sent back -

boss= oh did I hurt the poor little wana be hokage?

Hinata= naruto you ok?

Naruto= yea im fine

boss= why dont we have some fun? - makes hand signs – water style, water geyser -

gayser of water started to pour out from the ground and since the hallways were small they ended up pushing naruto and hinata away until they landed in an open room of 2 floors, they were on the upper floor-

hinata= cough cough naruto we have to be carefull this isnt one of the regular thugs I scouted

naruto= yea hes way stronger than them

boss= well of course I am

naruto= grr shadow clones jutsu!

30 narutos with swords apeared -

boss= oooh shadow clones and quite a few of them. I can do some nice tricks to, water style, water twin sword jutsu! - 2 water swords appear on his hands -

the naruto clones then atacked and fought the enemy but they kept getting defeated 1 by 1. naruto was charging the rasengan and then jumped in while he was distracted and the rasengan hit wich made the enemy get flying towards a wall only to then dispere into water -

naruto = a water clone?!

Boss= did you think I fall for that?

He apears behind naruto and strikes at naruto but hinata intervenes with her sword -

naruto= hinata

boss= not bad hyuga girl -he jumps back – lets see if you can handle this! - makes hand sign – lightning style, electric current

the ellectric atack was jumping from water puddle all over the floor wich were spilled by the water swords and the geyser that washed them to the room, naruto and hinata both got electrocuted -

naruto= aaaaaahhhhhh

hinata= ahhhhhhh

both fell on the ground -

boss= not even a challenge

suddenly he gets hit by a wave energy and gets send to a floor below -

kurumi= naruto, hinata are you ok?

Naruto= urg yea...

hinata= I..il be alright

kurumi= ino treat their wounds

ino= right

-kurumi jumped down to confront the boss -

boss= well well look whose back for more

kurumi= I had a feeling you were the leader, Vaelstien

Vaelstien= that I am

kurumi= youre going to pay for your crimes

Vaelstien= is that so?

kurumi dashes towards him taking out her swords and striking his water swords -

Vaelstien= what makes you think you can beat me this time?

both atacked and defend again and again and then Vaelstien jumped back and threw an umbrella on his back upwards -

Vaelstien= can you handle this?

he made hand signs and a rain of needles rained down on kurumi she tried striking them but some of them did pierce her arm and leg -

Vaelstien= to much for you?

Kurumi= im not done yet! - she removes some of the needles on her legs and arm quickly and continued atacking -

ino was finishing healing hinata -

hinata= thanks for the assist ino

ino= sure thing,alright naruto your turn

the battle continued Vaelstien attacked kurumi with a variation of water and lightning jutsu which electrocuted her but she still fought bravely -

Vaelstien= lightning style, thunder strike!

a bolt of lighting head towards kurumi but she blocked it with her swords wich made the thunder bounce diagonally upwards hitting the roof were hinata ino and naruto where -

hinata = watch out ino, naruto!

the lightningt strike hit the ceiling and the Shockwave of the explosion pushing ino and naruto apart, ino got pushed against a wall hard and fell unconscious and naruto was also sen to a wall but some of the debris had fallen on him -

naruto= urg I cant move

hinata= naruto are you ok? -she runs over to him -

naruto= yea im fine just kinda stuck right now, wheres ino?

Hinata= il check ,byakugan!, shes on the other side of that debry but looks like shes unconscious – she then tries to lift the debri from naruto -

naruto= hinata its no use its to heavy for you, go make sure ino is ok

hinata=... ok naruto

kurumi had heard her team mates scream -

Kurumi= naruto,hinata, ino!

Vaelstien= I pay attention if I where you

Vaelstien attacks but kurumi was able to defend -

kurumi= you'll pay for hurting them

kurumis body started to shine her hidden power was awaken again -

Vaelstien= whats this?

kurumis slashed both swords downwards in front of her creating a strong shock-wave hitting Vaelstien and knocking him back -

Vaelstien= ghhuuuaaaaa!

kurumi= you wont get away for harming my comrades

Vaelstien body dispersed into water and appeared on the other side of room on the first floor -

Vaelstienwell looks like you will be a challenge after all. Very well I will strike you with my most powerful jutsu.

Vaelstien makes several hand sings and and a giant water sword 3 times his size with lightning going around it and the water itself was boiling hot -

Vaelstien=water style! Giant electrical wave of forgetfulness sword!

kurumi prepare her stance to attack -

Vaelstien= this one strike will determine who is the winner

both dashed at each other with speed and power until they both came into contact and each did their attack at incredible speed that no one could see, both passing each other and ending at opposite ends they stood there without moving for few seconds -

Chapter ends