Ok... Ok... Time for a serious talk! Guys! I appreciate your "help-ful" comments, but I am the author, I choose to add, or not add content, or change it to how I fit. I really do appreciate your kindness, but please keep the deconstructive comments to yourself, kay? Kay. Also just to let all you guys, and galls expecting harem lemons, there will not be any of the sort, hell there may not even be any furthering of their relationships, unless its to further the story. Also for all intents, and purposes' Ayame is 19 in this fanfic, and she has for the longest time had a crush on Naruto. Also I have heard from several people, that Konohagakure is a dictatorship in most fanfics, be that as it may, as you obviously can see, I am not most. For sake of the story, it will be what seems like a democracy on the surface, but ultimately, Tsunade has the last say. Kay? Kay. Also I am sorry if I am coming off ass an asshole.
(Anon Reviews will have their reviews posted, so if they come back, and read again, they will know I am replying to them.)
Guest: Not bad but it has that summery feel to it. Slow it down, take the chapters longer. Take time developing the characters into who you want them to be. Give them a personality. It is a good fic tho. Flesh it out more and it will be a great one!
Me: Neh... Neh... Troublesome... But sure, I will take the time to flesh it out, but that means chapter releases will take longer than normal.
holymarine: There will be likely little, to absolutely no furthering feelings in here for Naruto, with Ayame, and Hinata, aside from what they already are. If there is, it will be to further the storyline, and flesh it out a little, but I can assure you, there will be no lemons, or Harem (Harem insinuates sexual activity, and intimacy ((There will probably be a little intimacy, but it would seem weird to the rest of the village, if Naruto was not lovey dovey, at least in public to his "Wives" aside from Sakura.)) )
'Normal Thoughts'
"Normal Speech"
'Kurama's thoughts'
Anywhore... Hajime!
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Naruto let out a content sigh, he just inherited a vast fortune, he would be able to support the people he loved, and still do what he loved, he also had a big master bathroom, with a tub that could double as a jacuzzi, with the woman of his dreams at his side, cuddled up to him with bubbles around them.
Sakura giggled as Naruto ran a gentle hand through her hair. "Naruto..." Sakura trailed, then straddles Naruto, with a leg on either side of his legs. "You know you are mine right?" Sakura said with a serious tone, looking Naruto in the eyes, giving him more than a wonderful veiw when he looked down.
Naruto sweat dropped, the nodded lightly, as he chuckled nervously, rubbing the back of his head. "Eheheheh..." Naruto gave his trademark fox grin yo Sakura. "Yes I am yours, I love you , and only you, I only married them, because of the CRA." Naruto said, giving a bright smile, that would have made even Gai, and Lee pale in comparison of brightness.
Sakura had to cover her eyes at the brightness of his smile. "I know, I just wanted to hear it." Sakura said with a content sigh, then started grinding against Naruto, biting her bottom lip softly.
Naruto chuckled lightly, then moaned a bit. "Two can play that game!" Naruto exclaimed with his trademark grin, then rubbed her clit lightly.
Sakura gasped lightly, trying to suppress a light moan, as she grinded harder, then started gyrating her hips, eliciting a louder moan from Naruto.
Naruto couldn't take it anymore, so he pushed he back softly, until she was backed up against the tub wall, before positioning himself to penetrate her soaking wet pussy, which was craving his penis.
Sakura bit her lip slightly in anticipation, since she knew what was coming, and couldn't wait. "What are you waiting for baka?!" Sakura exclaimed, slightly annoyed at waiting for what she wanted.
Naruto ignored his old nickname, then slowly slid himself inside of her, a bit at a time. "You won't have to tell me twice." Naruto said with his signature grin.
Sakura moaned softly, as Naruto slid his pretty well endowed penis length into the pussy that was his, and only his. "Naruto..." Sakura trails, her voice husky, followed by a purr, egging Naruto on.
Naruto bit his lip a bit, as he finally slid his penis all the way into Sakura's pussy, and if it was possible, she was tighter, and hotter then ever, "Sakura-chan your pussy feels so great!" He exclaimed, as Sakura wrapped her arms around his neck, then kisses him.
Sakura wraps her legs around his waist, so he can't retreat at the last second, not that he would have anyway, but she was ready to let Naruto have his way with her. "You can move however you like Naruto." Sakura said in a soft tone, causing Naruto to smile softly.
Naruto nods, but starts moving gently "Yeah, but then it wouldn't feel too good for you, would it?" Naruto asked with a gentle smile, then started pick up the pace a bit, then kissed her deeply.
Sakura couldn't voice her answer, but she loved Naruto's kindness, he was sacrificing his immediate pleasure, for her's. "I love you Naruto!" Sakura exclaimed as she broke the kiss to catch her breath, gasping in pleasure as Naruto reaches his free hand down, and rubs her clit, sending shockwaves of pleasure throughout her entire body, causing her to moan loudly.
Naruto smiled brightly at Sakura's exclaim, so he wanted to reward her with pleasure. "I love you too Sakura." Naruto said, then picked up the pace a bit, feeling his pleasure build up, welling up like a dam, ready to burst at a moments notice, and Sakura was close to cumming too.
Sakura wrapped her arms around Naruto's neck, as he picks up the pace to max, she was unable to do anything but ride out the waves of pleasure that Naruto was sending coursing through her body.
Naruto couldn't hold it for much longer, it was like Sakura was trying to milk him for everything he had. "Oh god! I'm cumming!" Naruto said, and after a few more deep thrusts, he buried himself as deep as he could, cumming harder than he ever had before.
Sakura panted, as she came her brains out, as thick roles of Naruto's semen coated the inside of her womb. "Oh god! I feel so full!" Sakura said, and gasped, as the violent spurts finally died down.
Naruto panted at the exercise that they had just got done doing. "That was the most Amazing sex, we have ever had." Naruto says, then hears a loud thump coming from behind them, startling them.
They both bolted up, to see an unconscious, nose bleeding heavily, was Hinata, who had came into tell them that dinner was done, just as they had finished. "Hinata-chan!" Naruto exclaims, wrapping a towel around his waist, as Sakura stopped the bleeding, healing her nose quickly, before sitting her up on a shower chair, trying to get her to wake up.
Naruto steadied Hinata while Sakura put a towel on her body, realizing she was still naked, she blushed, as Hinata slowly regained consciousness. "N- Naru-kun..?" She asked meekly, taking in their settings.
Hinata blinked a few times, trying to remember why she was in there, remembering what had transpired not too long ago, causing her to blush up a storm, and dig her nails in her palm to stay conscious. "G- Gomenasai! I didn't know y-you two were having s-s-s-s!" Hinata could not bring herself to say that last word, it was just too much for her, as metaphorical steam came out of her ears, her blush increasing.
Naruto blushed lightly, her not even having to finish that sentence, for them to know what she meant. "It's fine, we should have been more precarious about keeping it private, t- thank you for telling us that dinner was done." Naruto said, trying to hide his high embarrassment.
Hinata took the hint, and did a tactical retreat, her blush was still coming out in full strength. "J-Just come out when you are ready to eat!" She called over her shoulder, heading around the corner, back to the kitchen, to fix plates, to stop her mind from wandering to pervy stuff.
Sakura had steam coming from her ears in a fit of embarrassment, after she finally got over the medical nin mode, and realized why she was bleeding from her nose, and out like a light. "N-Naruto..." She trailed lightly, garnering Naruto's attention for a moment.
Naruto raised an eyebrow, but it was too late, by the time he realized what he was in for, he barely had any time to duck her fully charged Baka-punch. "S-s-s-s-Sakura-chan! What was that for!?" Naruto exclaimed, scared shitless, he'd rather fight Obito 1,000 times over, then face a pissed off/ embarrassed Sakura, and currently, she was very much so both of those things.
Sakura felt Naruto was at fault, for not locking the bathroom door in the first place, so she was pissed at him, and embarrassed that they had been caught making love. "B-b-b-baka! You forgot to lock the door!" She exclaimed, and swung another super-charged baka punch at Naruto's face. "Next time make sure the doors locked!" Sakura exclaimed, giving up after a flurry of baka punches left the bathroom riddled with punch holes, and crater sized dents in the ground.
Naruto nodded, fearing for his life at the irate pinkette in-front of his, he got dressed, and rushed out of the bathroom, giving the Irate pinkette time to calm down. "Just remember I love you Sakura-chan!" Naruto called over his shoulder, as he dipped around the corner, dodging a loofa thrown at his head, not that it would have done much damage, but better safe than sorry, he decided to make a quick pit stop at his room to get dressed, coming out in a pair of black jeans, and a black muscle shirt, that had the uzugakure whirlpool symbol on the back, just like his jackets had always adorned.", before heading to the kitchen for dinner.
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In the kitchen
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Hinata, and Ayame were eating quietly, Hinata still had a faint blush on her face, but for the most part, she had calmed down. "Sit with us Naru-Kun!" Ayame exclaimed, with a bright smile on her face.
Naruto nodded, as he looked across the plentiful bounty spread across the table. "Ayame-nee-chan!" Naruto whined lightly, because the table was lackig his all time favorite food. "Why didn't you prepare some of your delicious Miso ramen?!" Naruto whined again, causing all three girls to giggle.
Ayame waved off his complaint, flashing an innocent looking smile, that anyone else but Naruto would have bought for longer than a second. "Naru-kun..." Ayame trailed, feigning hurt in her voice. "I was just concerned about your health..." She said, then sniffles cutely, acting genuinely hurt.
Naruto felt a pang of guilt, Naruto had yet to see through her crocodile tears, and it was working, hook line, and sinker. "Sorry nee-chan..." Naruto trailed appologetically, before going over to Ayame, and hugging her lovingly, as he had done in the past when he had wanted to comfort Ayame, when her mom passed away from cancer, and when she got dumped by her long time boyfriend years back.
Ayame mewled softly, as Naruto ran a gentle hand across her back, as she took in his scent. 'He smells of oranges, with a faint underscent of ramen, surprisingly.' Ayame mused to herself as Naruto held her in his arms, before letting go, much to Ayame's very apparent dismay, but she didn't fight it, after all, Naruto was Sakura's man, but that wasn't going to stop her from crushing on the blonde boy wonder, that was Naruto.
Hinata was a bit envious of Ayame, but she was too shy to ever try such a bold mood as what she had just tried. "Naru-Kun..." Naruto trailed, trying to garner her loved ones attention, succeeding in her plan. "W-will you help me do the dishes later?" Hinata asked meekly, wanting to get some Naruto time to herself, as the other two had already done.
Naruto nodded without a moments hesitation. "Yep, after all, we have to split the work up evenly, and with two people it will get done even faster!" Naruto exclaimed lightly, chuckling lightly at his logic.
Sakura came out, dressed in an all white, form fitting top, with a pair of black skinny jeans, her, with subtle pink patterned, belt slightly slanted on her waist, not really being used, but a fashion accessory. 'Now I see why he chose them, they actually care for him.' Sakura thought to herself, finally walking in, making her presence known. "Are you three going to eat, or have a threesome in our kitchen?" Sakura asked, sarcasm laced throughout her entire voice, as she sat down at the table.
All three of them blushed a deep shade of red, Hinata's metaphorical ear steam coming back, but this time with friends, coming from Naruto, and Ayame's ears as well. "N-n-n-n-noooo!" Naruto exclaimed, not trusting his voice at that moment to work properly without squeaking a bit.
Ayame, Hinata, and Sakura tried to suppress giggle fits, but couldn't, and bursted into a fit of laughter at Naruto. "N-Naruto-kun, that was just too funny!" Sakura said in between fits of giggles, clutching her sides, that she was laughing so hard at her loved one.
Hinata was the first one to recover from her giggle fit, trying not to laugh harder at the rest for their funny positions they ended up in because of their laughter, Sakura had fallen out of her chair, and Ayame was literally rolling on the ground in a fit of laughter. "Gomenasai Naruto-kun, that was just too funny!" She apologized, a light blush coating her cheeks, it was against the Hyuuga image to laugh so much at one time, but it caught her off guard by a mile.
Ayame was next, she got up, and dusted herself off, then sat at the table. "Yeah, sorry Naruto-kun, that was just too much for my already barely contained laughter to handle!" Ayame said, making Naruto's blush of embarrassment to deepen even more considerably.
Sakura, last but certainly not least, recovered from her giggle fit, a chuckle here, and there, but had recovered. "Yeah, what they said is true, I don't think I have seen such a priceless face in a long time. Last time I saw that face, was when you 'accidently' kissed Sasuke-kun." Sakura said, Hinata glared cutely at Sakura for mentioning that blemish on Naruto's already dirty past.
Ayame was curious as to what the other two had known, since she was a civilian, she didn't go to the academy. "What is this you speak of? And why wasn't I notified of your first kiss Naruto-kun!?" Ayame exclaimed in surprise, and slight hurt that she was not filled in on this.
Naruto nervously chuckled, rubbing the back of his head, giving his signature fox like grin. "You see... It didn't really count, it was an accident, and it was with Sasuke-teme." Naruto said, not really wanting to remember that his first kiss was taken by his rival in everything.
Sakura lightly slugged Naruto in his arm, for calling Sasuke by his old nickname when they got into fights, which was rather often, but most of them verbal, a few becoming physical fights.
Hinata giggled lightly at Naruto's antics, but nodded. "I was shocked when it happened, I..." Hinata trailed when she was the center of attention. "I- I- I- had wanted Naruto's first kiss..." She admitted, squeaking cutely at her confession, she poked her fingertips together in that cute way she did when she was flustered, and this was doing just that, and more.
Naruto eyes widened a bit at her confession, but wasn't surprised really, because when she tried to take on Pein herself, she had confessed her love to him. "H- H- Hinata-chan, I am sorry... Sasuke-temem stole my first kiss, if I had known you wanted it..." Naruto trailed, then gasped, Ayame suddenly grabbed his collar, and pulled him into a deep kiss.
Ayame was blushing madly at what she was currently doing, but everyone was eyes on Naruto, so they didn't notice the growing tick mark on Ayames forehead, then she broke the kiss after a few seconds. "Whats so important about a first kiss?! Its just a kiss damn it!" Ayame exclaimed, before the entirity of what she had just proclaimed, and done finally sunk all the way in. 'Oh god... Did I just openly say that was my first kiss, and?!' She thought frantically to herself, as the eyes that were on her, widened to size of dinner plates in surprise.
Sakura was the first to regain her wits. "What did you just do to my Naruto?!" Sakura exclaimed, further adding to her title of loudest Kunoichi, before grabbing Naruto, and accidently forcing his head into her cleavage, which had grown to be easily Hinata's size, if not a little larger. "Only I am allowed to kiss him!" She said, then without thinking, and pulled an unconcious due to oxygen starvation Naruto into a deep kiss, that would easily make Jiraya have enough 'research' for another Icca Icca book, and would make Kakashi nosebleed rainbow.
The sensei in question was sitting on the window sill, waiting for someone to aknowledge his existence. "Nani?!" Is all Kakashi could exclaim before he was sent flying by his nosebleed arc.
Hinata heard the crash, but ignored it, while trying to preform CPR, to bring back Naruto to the world of the living. "Naruto-kun!" She exclaimed, as she came back up, after he sucked in a gulp of air, like hadn't breathed in a long time. "Your ok!" She exclaimed, then glomped Naruto in glee.
Sakura, and Ayame were looking out the window, at Kakashi, who was lying in a pile of garbage on the first floor. "Sensei! Were you eavesdropping!?" Sakura exclaimed at seeing her unconscious sensei, finally regaining consciousness from his fall, and bloodloss.
Kakashi rubbed the growing bump on the back of his head tenderly, and decided walking up the stairs would probably be safer. "We have a co-op team mission." Kakashi said plainly, susprising everyone.
Naruto was exstatic to the fact that he had a new mission now. "What is the mission, and whore teaming up with?!" Naruto exclaims in an excited voice, further proving him title of "#1 knuckle head ninja" correct, but everyone loves him anyway.
Kakashi chuckled lightly, then tossed Naruto the mission scroll. "All the details in there, read for yourself." Kakashi said one of his eye smiles.
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Sorry to leave you with a sort of cliff hanger, but this this is by far my longest chapter, I think. o_o Anywhore... I will probably get complaints for the Ayame acene, but it may not be apparent now, but it will be needed to further story later on. ((In my minds plot anyway...)) Anyway! Please R&R!
