Sorry this took so long- my laptop broke and went in for repair! I got it back this morning and have written this, I'll try and write as much as i possibly can now. It might not be good as I'm tired as. Let me know what you think!
Next scene- Carter wakes up to realise she's back in Kyran's house. Gets out of bed and holds her head in pain. She stumbles into the washroom to splash herself with water. Kyran is there topless, he gives her a dirty grin, she swallows back and turns to run.
He runs after her, leaps onto her and she falls down.
Carter: What the hell do you think you're doing?!
Kyran: Why did you sleep outside last night?!
Carter: Hmm…I wonder why I would not want to come back here!
Kyran: (He pulls her up and throws her against the wall and holds her by her neck) Do you know the trouble you could have got in? Or me?
Carter: No and quite frankly I don't care. (he tightens his grip around her neck)
Kyran: I've been nothing but kind to you. You then go behind my back-
Carter: Kind?! You're insane! One minute you're calm, the next you lose the ability to act rationally!
Kyran: I took you in when you had nowhere to go.
Carter: How big is your ego? You tricked me into marrying you so you could keep some petty family business.
Kyran: And what have you done in return? (silence) HUH? (tightens his grip) it's time you give me something back.
Carter: (chokes) Over my dead body. (he kisses her neck and trails his way to her mouth, she's squirming for a way out, as he reaches up her he looses his grip for a second and she kicks him across the room and runs into the kitchen towards the door, he growls and storms towards the kitchen.
SG1 arrives at the planet, they are in the village square where they found Carter the first time they went to the planet. They wonder around trying to see her again. Daniel and and Teal'c come out of the pub and walk towards O'Neill, they stand next to some sort of vegetable stand.
O'Neill: Any signs of Carter?
Daniel: No, I asked some people but they just avoided an answer. But I have noticed something.
O'Neill: What?
Daniel: I can't see any women around. (They look around and realise they are only surrounded by men. An older man walks by them and Daniel catches his attention) Excuse me? (the man turns around) Hi my name is Daniel Jackson I was wondering if you have seen my friend around?
Old man: What is your friend's name?
Daniel: Major Carter. (The man looks confused) Sam? (the man nods)
Old man: Sam and his family left many sunsets ago.
O'Neill: Our friend is a woman- (Daniel realises something and then interrupts)
Daniel: Sophie! Sorry, her name is Sophie.
Old man: Oh your friend is a woman…
Daniel: Yes she is, she's just gotten married to- um- oh yes! Kyran? (old man looks bewildered)
Old man: Yes, yes. If she has behaved she will be let out soon. It's almost the hour that women are released to the market.
Teal'c: Where are all the women at this current time?
Old man: (chuckled) At home of course! And if their husbands have had a good term of business then they will be there with them if you know what I mean!
O'Neill: And by any chance has Kyran had a good 'term of business'?
Old man: Because of the marriage yes! It is good he has finally done something. (O'Neill and his team exchange looks, they know Carter is in danger)
O'Neill: Where does Kyran live?
Old man: In the house on the end of the river. (he points out the square they're in to a meadow, they can see a river. they nod)
Daniel: Thank you for your time. (SG1 bid him a quick bye and run through the meadow along the river. There are two houses, one on either side of the river. O'Neill signals for them to spilt up, Jack goes left the other two right. Daniel and Teal'c hear an all too familiar scream from the house they were about to knock at and bang on the door. They wait a split second and Daniel shouts "SAM!" and Teal'c throws himself at the door to open it. O'Neill from across the river sees a glimpse of what is going on and rushes over. The door swings open and Daniel and Teal'c see Carter being held against the table with Kyran holding a knife at her throat, there was slashes on her arms that were bleeding, one of his hands was shoved up her dress. They run at him. Teal'c throws him against the wall and secures his grip around his neck slowly choking him. Daniel sees if Carter is okay. She's shaking and screams at Teal'c to stop.
Daniel: Teal'c take him out side! (Teal'c forcibly removes Kyran from the room with his hands still gripped around Kyran's neck. O'Neill runs in as Teal'c is taking him out the door, he's out of breath, he looks around shocked)
O'Neill: (looking around angry) What the hell is going on here?! (he looked at Sam and gulps, her head is leaning into Daniel's chest, she's not crying, she's shocked, Daniel has one hand on her back and the other on her shoulder. Daniel gives him a worried look. Jack nods and sorrowfully stares at Carter, he steps towards her) Carter… you alright?
Carter: (very quiet) I'm fine sir.
O'Neill: (softly) We're here now. And we won't leave you again. (she turns her head to Jack, they look at each other for about a minute, Daniel interrupts)
Daniel: Hey, how about we get you home Sam?
Carter: I can't…
O'Neill: Yes you can.
Carter: Sir I can't go.
Daniel: Sam we need to get you checked out by Frasier.
Carter: I want to-
O'Neill: Carter, we'll shoot our way outta here if we have to.
Carter: Sir, you don't understand.
O'Neill: Carter, you're coming back with us. We'll leave whenever you're ready. (She nods, and faces the floor taking a deep breath and is about to stand up)
Daniel: Do you need us to help you get your stuff?
Carter: I don't know where Kyran has put it all. (O'Neill clenches his jaw at the sound of his name, and Daniel nods slowly)
Daniel: (awkwardly) Okay that's fine, do you want us to take a look around-
Carter: You won't find anything. I've done a lot of looking. (she moves away from the table and Daniel and Jack make awkward eye contact, she turns around and clears her throat) Shall we head back then?
O'Neill: Ah- yeah. (looks at Daniel) I'll go and check on Teal'c and Kyran. (O'Neill watches her as he slowly turns around and heads out the door)
Daniel: It seems we've gotten out of your marriage in a way I didn't expect to.
Carter: Yeah, does this count as an annulment, I mean on Earth I'm not married to him- so, there was no need to consult the leaders, was there?
Daniel: It would have been a better route to play along with their legal system and go out the good old fashion SG1 way, but I guess we can bend the rules this one time, I mean I don't see us becoming allies or anything.
Carter: Yeah nothing here to offer us.
Daniel: (softly) Sam, are you okay?
Carter: I'm fine Daniel, thanks.
Daniel: What we walked in on.. look… if you need to talk about a friend about it, just so you know, I'm here if you need me.
Carter: (gives him a small grateful smile) I know, thank you Daniel. (he smiles and nods)
Scene- O'Neill has just gotten round the corner and he sees Teal'c pinning Kyran to a tree by the throat, Kyran is struggling to breathe, Jack hurries over.
O'Neill: Sup Teal'c?
Teal'c: I am ensuring Kyran does not escape.
O'Neill: (Squints at his condition) Yes, I can see that. Teal'c, loosen your grip a little I wanna have a little talk with our friend here. (Teal'c moves the hand that was on Kyran's throat to his chest to keep him still, Kyran takes big breaths)
Kyran: What are you doing?!
O'Neill: (surprised, very annoyed, offended) Excuse me?! What are we doing? What are you doing? No, what were you doing? (starts to get infuriated) What were you doing inside there to Carter?! What did we see? (Kyran looks away, O'Neill grabs his face and shouts) HUH?! Answer my question!
Kyran: You saw a wife misbehaving when her husband wanted pleasure.
O'Neill: (jaw clenches) Say that again, oh so help me God-
Kyran: Sophie's a fighter you know, but I pushed it. I almost thought I wouldn't get any, but I got to touch an awful lot and let me tell you it was so-
O'Neill: You son of a bitch.
Kyran: I didn't finish.
O'Neill: Her name is Carter, Major Samantha Carter. She's my second in command, and she's not your wife. We're taking her home right after I-
Kyran: After you what? (laughs) Kill me? Don't tell me, how original.
O'Neill: You went after somebody important to me.
Kyran: Didn't go after her enough.
(O'Neill punches him in the face and goes in for another but Teal'c grabs his hand)
Teal'c: Are you certain you want to do this O'Neill?
O'Neill: Teal'c let go of my hand.
Let go of my hand, that's an order. (Teal'c lets go and O'Neill clenches his fist by his side and raises one again but stops when he hears Carter shout 'sir no!' and Daniel shout his name they come running to his side)
Daniel: Jack, what are you doing?
O'Neill: (raises his voice) How many damn times am I going to be asked that question?
Carter: You don't need to do this sir.
Kyran: Very sweet of you.
O'Neill: Shut your mouth.
Daniel: Jack as much as I wanna beat the hell out of him too, now trust me I'm with you on this, I think we should just leave (he makes an obvious look to Sam to imply they need to get her out, Jack looks away pissed at Kyran)
O'Neill: Apologise.
Kyran: What?
O'Neill: Apologise to her and… I'll let you go.
Kyran: Apologise for what? Having fun? (Jack looks back at him furious)
Carter: Sir, I don't need an apology let's just go.
O'Neill: No I give the orders around here and I- (he looks at the state of Sam, the cuts and bruises, sat under her eye and on her cheek, also completely decorating her face, neck, collarbone, and the half arms and legs that weren't covered by the filthy champagne dress. She looked exhausted, he nods in self-acknowledgment) Teal'c let go of him.