Chapter 16
Mario leapt up as high as he could and grabbed onto the ledge of the cliff. He needed to admit it that these two new faces where just better at jumping than he was. He pulled himself up onto the ledge and looked upwards. Meatboy was leaping carefully between two walls which seemed to have had saw blades installed. Did that Dr Fetus install them?
Meat Boy misjudged his jump though and slammed into a saw blade, bursting apart as he had done before. He then reformed by Mario's side, seemingly out of nowhere. "Umm... you ok?" Asked Mario. Meatboy smiled brightly and nodded, going back to trying to wall jump between the sawblades. Mario couldn't waste time. He still needed to reach the mountain peak. Plus this Dr Fetus was working with Bowser Jnr.
He stretched out a little and jumped at the wall, performing a quick tech and launching himself upward, past the first saw blade. He collided with the next wall perfectly, feet first, and pushed himself further upwards above the next saw. With one saw left to clear, he pushed his hands against the wall and flung himself into a backflip above the final sawblade. He used his Super coin jump to make it up the ledge where Meatboy helped Mario up to his feet.
Mario and Meatboy heard Dr Fetus further up the mountain. The sawblades had slown the two of them down quite a bit. Both of them leapt into action, wall jumping the cliff after Dr Fetus. Meatboy slid up the walls with ease, while Mario bounced from wall to wall, propelling himself upwards with small ledges.
They leapt their way up to the next clear walkway and began to charge. That was when the enemies began to show up. Goombas and Koopas littered the path and Mario bounced with ease off the top of them. Meatboy copied Mario, using his extraordinary jumping prowess to progress the same way Mario had.
Dr Fetus watched the two chasing him down, beating the koopa troop minions out of their way. He made and angry face and pressed a button on his remote, causing small turrets to sprout from the wall. They then began to fire small saw blades towards Mario and Meatboy. Mario slid underneath the blades before hopping up and reflecting more of them into walls with his cape.
Dr Fetus just kept getting angrier and angrier. He started to spam the button on his remote as he flew away, just as the heroes began to close in. The two of them looked up and saw multiple missiles heading down towards them. They had to wall jump up through the incoming missiles and they didn't even hesitate. Mario ran to the left and Meatboy to the right. They leapt at the walls and pushed themselves up. They deftly dodged the missiles and grabbed onto each other, spinning around each other and propelling each other to the opposite wall.
The missiles were no match for the heroes' amazing jumping skills and it didn't take them very long to reach the large flat area of the mountain that Dr Fetus was standing on. The summit of the mountain was not to far up now. The only thing standing between the heroes and the summit was Dr Fetus.
Dr Fetus didn't seem to be retreating this time. He glared at Mario and Meatboy before raising his missile launcher and firing. Mario leapt out of the way but Meatboy as too slow and exploded in a shower of red blobs before reforming a little to the left of where he was before. Mario charged at Dr fetus and locked him into a combo, beating at his glass dome. Suddenly, Dr fetus grabbed mario and began head-butting him with his glass dome before jumping upwards and piledriving Mario into the ground.
Meatboy ran at the two of them and gave a swift kick to Dr Fetus, knocking Mario free. Mario managed to land on his feet and he pulled back his arms to charge his forward smash. Meatboy locked Fetus into a combo and quickly leapt away as Mario released his Smash attack. Dr Fetus was launched backwards and collided with the mountain wall, a huge crack splitting down his glass dome. He made a very angry face before using his wings to fly up to the summit.
They were almost there! Mario and Meatboy quickly climbed to the summit in time to see Dr Futus boarding what seemed to be one of bowser's airships. Mario glared at the ship and motioned for Meatboy to follow and they ran aboard the ship. With Link and the others nowhere to be seen, Mario assumed they were already on board the large wooden pirate ship. Mario and meatboy barely made it to the ship as it began to slowly lift upwards and flew away into he sky to the north east.
OOC NOTES TIME:
Bad news! I didn't like writing this chapter. I had to force it out so i'm sorry it's so short
GOOD NEWS! Due a mistake in my planning, I was wrong about ponies arriving in 3 chapters time. Ponies will be arriving in 2 CHAPTERS TIME!
Also, this will be my first ever reply to a review in a public chapter! To PonyPilot. I'm not accepting fanmade character, i'm using my own characters, thanks. And no Fan characters for pre-existing series either. Only completely new stuff. Otherwise my sonic fan characters and mlp fan characters would be in this.
Next, MLP is canonically confirmed to not have guns or planes so REAF doesn't exist. And why would a pony need a jet pack? Just make it a pegasus.
Next, realistic gun weapons would never be included in smash bros OR mlp. Snake in brawl was limited to just explosives because guns were seen as too violent. How would a pony even fire a gun unless they were a unicorn? I get the feeling you may want to run Dive Bomb through a Mary sue test.
I'm not trying to say your character is a bad character, it's just a bad MLP character. Put him in another series that is more likely to have guns and maybe then it would make sense.
Sorry about that, guys! Next chapter we meet a new villain and Go back to what Luigi, Bandana dee and kirby are up to!
