PART FOUR: CHANGES TO OLD CHARACTERS

Name: Ness

I've changed Ness and Lucas's movesets so that they feature moves that the two fo them can actually use! Neither of them ever used Freeze, thunder, fire or starstorm in thier games but rather thier team mates did. So, i personally would like to see them changed.

Special: PK Flash

Same as brawl

Side Special: Bionic Slingshot

Ness pulls out a hi-tech slingshot of his (an equip from earthbound) and fires a strange energy ball with it. It traps foes much like Pk fire did in brawl, but deals electricity damage rather than fire.

Up Special: PK Teleport Beta

In midair, Ness stops decending and spins in a circle extremely fast before vanishing and reappearing directly above himself and shooting in a vertical direction, leaving a small fire trail behind him. On the ground, it does basically the same. If Ness collides with another character while spinning before the teleport, he will combust and continue to fall if in midair. The foe will take damage too.

Down Special: Counter

Ness surrounds himself with a small orange energy sheild. While this sheild is up, Ness cannot take knockback and protects Ness from somewhere between 10 and 20% of damage, but only physical attacks. Any projectile will cancel out the attack. Half of the damage given to the counter sheild is dealt back to the attacker. Once the counter shield is shattered, Ness will be stunned as if his regular shield had run out.

Final Smash: PK Rockin'

Ness releases a huge wave of trippy, rainbow-coloured blast of energy that extends out from wherever Ness is out to the edge of the stage. The blast will decrease in strength as it extends. It does a lot of damage and knockback when right beside Ness, but on the outer limits of the stage, not so much.

Name: Lucas

Special: Pk Flash

Same as Ness'

Side Special: Sprinting Bomb

Lucas detonates a sprinting bomb at his feet, causing himself to rocket forwards. It delivers light damage and decent knockback, as well as fire-based damage to foes.

Up Special: Thunder Bomb

Lucas detonates a thunder bomb at his feet, launching himself directly upwards with a trail of electricity following befind him. After the bomb is detonated, Lucas acts just as he would in brawl after hitting himself with PK Thunder.

Down Special: Psi Counter

Much like ness' counter, lucas protects himself from 10-20% worth of projectile damage. However, if he is hit by any physical attacks, the move will cancel out. Aside from that, this move works almost exactly the same as Ness' version.

Final Smash: PK Love

This works exactly the same as Ness' new final smash, really. The only difference is that this time, the wave of energy does the most damage at the edge of the screen and the least damage directly next to Lucas.

Name: Sonic

Special: Homing attack

Same as brawl

Side special: Boost

Sonic charges up his figure-8 technique and when released, he blasts forwards, knocking foes aside as he does. It doesn't give much damage, but it does a lot of knockback if damage is high enough.

Up special: Spring/Blue Tornado

When on the ground, Sonic's recovery move is the same as it was in brawl, but in midair, he will spin in a tornado and shoot himself upwards. The tornado can trap foes and rack up a decent amount of damage.

Down Special: Spin dash

This is the same as it was in brawl.

Mewtwo was gonna go here, but i forgot that i added him to the pokemon one so... yeah

CHALLENGERS APPROACHING may be away for awhile now. The next instalment will feature characters that have yet to be introduced to the story. So you'll have to wait ^_^;

Also, I hate to bring this up again, but... TO THE REVIEWER "PonyPilot"

I didn't want to say this, but the more you tell me about your character, the worse he sounds. He is a HUGE, Mary Sue. Seriously. And your character isn't an mlp character? No, he is. And that can be proved with something YOU said. "because Dive Bomb is my fan-made pony from MLP. He is a warplane pilot, he is part of the REAF (Royal Equestrian Air Force) ."

I'm not even going to give a counterargument now and i'm just going to say this. YOUR CHARACTER WILL NOT BE IN THIS STORY OR ANY OTHER STORIES I MAKE. If you truly think my story won't be good without your character, stop reading now and do not leave another review. Thank you.