Okay guys here it is... CHAPTER TWO!
I am new at this but I feel I did a fantastic job on this chapter.
It was hard making changes to this but I feel I did the best I could.
Here you are. Enjoy.
The imp captain could only manage to yell, "Get ready." Then all hell broke loose.
Okita and Kagura were instantly gone from view, suddenly reappearing in the middle of the crowd of terrified pirates. Before anyone could react several were sent flying into the air and surroundings. Screams and cries of "Mommy!" and "Captain save us!" resounded throughout the park as Kagura and Okita annihilated their adversaries. Similar to an elephant plowing through a forest; complete and total destruction.
After only a few minutes the initial shock was gone from the pirates and they quickly drew their weapons and began engaging in combat with the two monsters. Around Okita blood and severed limbs were raining down as he cut his enemies down one after the other with no mercy. He was enjoying it to his heart's content, so much so that he was soon lost in his own world, forgetting about Kagura, only caring about his next opponent.
Kagura was in a similar state of mind as Sougo, except she was only incapacitating her opponents, not liking to kill anything. At some point while she was fighting with a particularly skilled opponent she wasn't paying attention to her surroundings and ended up tripping over the still unconscious Nezumi. As Kagura was on the ground she heard someone scream, "Now! Get her while she's down!" As soon the words were said and gone Kagura was immediately at the bottom of a giant dog pile, at some point someone punched her in the face and another somehow managed to grope her.
She couldn't take it anymore and with the Yato's famous strength managed to throw off the fifteen or so amantos that failed to hold her down. She quickly whipped her umbrella around, successfully blocking a sneak attack from behind and let out a barraged of bullets all while screaming an angry war cry.
The imp captain hadn't left his potion on the ground, instead he sat observing the entirety of the fight trying to come up with a foolproof tactical plan. Since the beginning he knew that it would be difficult, the girl is a Yato, and considering her family history it was even more difficult getting the right men to follow through with the mission. He leaned to the left narrowly missing a severed arm that flew his way.
His sights then zoomed in on the man, who everyone deemed to be the Ojou-chan's "boyfriend". He was very skilled and strong for a human; after all he was massacring his subordinates at an equal rate as Kagura. He was the problem he hadn't expected; looking closely at his clothes he recognized a ranked Shinsengumi officer's uniform; so not only was he a skilled officer but a government official.
Once they captured the girl they had to clean up leaving no trace behind so they couldn't kill him, but if they took him hostage as well he might become useful. As a captive the officer can provide leverage to get Kagura to comply with them and he could give them information they wanted after loosening his lips.
After careful consideration it was decided, the cop was coming with them. He stood up and reached behind his back to pull out a special crossbow and carbon steel arrows. Carefully so as not to cut his skin on the arrows, as they were covered in the powerful tranquilizer, he loaded the bolts into the crossbow and waited for the perfect chance to shoot his prey.
Okita was starting to struggle; the pirates were relentless and a lot more skilled and stronger than the pathetic Joui he is used to fighting. On top of that a serious gash on his thigh wouldn't stop bleeding, so now we was getting dizzy from blood loss and was having difficulty standing. He could only chuckle and think, 'How could Danna and that idiot Katsura fight these guys nonstop? Those guys were younger than me and had to deal with armies at that time, and they became legends. Shit.' His thoughts were suddenly shattered with a cry of "Now! Get her while she's down." Okita whipped his head around suddenly fearful, only to see a squirming pile of amanto not too far away from himself.
He quickly figured it was Kagura underneath the pile and went to run over to help when they suddenly went flying off in every direction, a pissed off girl covered in blood with a torn cheongsam shooting every which way emerged from underneath, soon after blocking a sneak attack. He was satisfied she was well off and went back to dealing with his own problem.
He was now surrounded by ten enemies, some looking like they shouldn't even be standing, that appeared while he was distracted. He saw fear and uncertainty in their eyes, obviously they hadn't thought one hundred of them would have this much trouble with only two people. Well they messed with the two strongest and most spontaneous people in all of Edo, everyone knew about them and the trouble they brought along if they're together.
Two lunged forward and they were easily cut down. Sougo was disappointed, most of his opponents were weaklings now all the strong and skilled fighters most likely leaving to deal with China.
He clicked his tongue, jealous she was getting strong opponents and annoyed that he was underestimated; even if he was injured he could still deal severe damage. He looked at the remaining eight surrounding him, "Look guys this is getting boring. I think you all learned your lesson about looking at and speaking such disgusting things about my possessions. Since I'm in a better mood now after releasing some stress I'll let you go with a warning. Kneel before me and beg for forgiveness, if you're lucky you'll only walk away barely alive. Kneel." His remaining opponents began to sweat, 'if you're lucky you'll only walk away barely alive?' this guy was a sadist king.
Everyone one of Okita's enemies must have been thinking the same thoughts because just seconds after Sougo's command they simultaneously went for the kill, weapons raised. Okita was about to lash out when someone slammed into his back, sending him flying. Luckily he had a soft landing but the unlucky bastard behind him hadn't, as he heard a groan of pain.
He stood up and sensing the guy behind him getting up he quickly swung his katana behind him, but at that moment his injured leg failed him and he stumbled. He didn't feel any contact with the blade regrettably so he closed his eyes ready for the blow that never came. Curious he looked back only to make an uncharacteristic face of pure shock/ horror (?), the bastard opponent that flew into him was not an ugly almost dead pirate, but China. The guy he swung at was China and the reason he didn't feel any contact was because the blade didn't hit any flesh but instead completely cut the front of her lower part of her cheongsam. Now instead of having it only reveal a portion of her toned legs at the sides with a long front and back, it only had a back.
Kagura stood there shocked, she was almost cut down by the sadist but luckily he missed. She looked at him puzzled, he was staring at her, and in fact everyone stopped fighting to stare at her. Wondering what was wrong she looked down only to widen her eyes in shock and face redden in embarrassment.
What everyone was staring at was her now fully revealed panties and not just any pair either. They were a very sexy black lacy pair, part of a matching set she happened to be wearing, that she got from Hinowa for her eighteenth birthday.
Now she really couldn't get married, what purity and innocence she had left, all gone. Rage soon overrode her embarrassment when she saw Okita begin to move out of her peripheral, 'It is all this bastard's fault!', she screamed in her head. She slowly raised her umbrella over her head chanting a spell that happens to dispel demons when she was suddenly shot in the back from behind four times.
She looked behind to see four arrows sticking out of her back, the sight of it suddenly made Kagura reel, this was a first for her. Laughing soon interrupted the eerie silence, echoing throughout the park.
The captain had made his mark. Waiting for the perfect chance he waited, took aim, and fired; of course he admired Kagura's choice of lingerie before doing so, just like his subordinates he wanted this drawn out battle to end. He quickly began to reload because now he had to deal with what will surely be a pissed boyfriend and Yato.
"Hurry the hell up guys. While she's still surprised grab her, and keep the boyfriend alive too. He's coming with us." The reason he was in charge of this mission was because he was familiar with the Yato's power and was skilled at making quick tactical decisions. After reloading he quickly shot once, grazing Sougo's arm, it would be enough since the tranquilizer wasn't meant for humans but better safe than sorry. He fired a second time but the arrow was caught midair before it could make its mark.
The pain was just unbearable, Kagura has been shot many times before with many different kinds of projectiles , once even a spoon if you can believe it, and they never hurt a fraction of the pain she was feeling now. Was the pain related to the fact that she was shot with arrows or the tranquilizer they must be covered in? The imp amanto did keep going on about that.Whichever it was it was painful and working too well because now her vision and hearing were beginning to disappear.
She was vaguely aware of someone creeping around her and the only person that came to mind was Okita so she knew she was fine at the moment, until he realizes what's wrong, and then she would be at his mercy.
Suddenly something small and fast came flying in towards her and Okita, instinct seemed to kick in at this time and with quick reflexes snatched it out of the air and snapped it like a twig, only later would she learn it was a carbon steel arrow. It was safe to say she could not remember much afterwards.
Sougo was slowly creeping away from Kagura when the arrow came flying in towards them, with four lodging themselves into Kagura's back and a fifth arrow grazing him. The pain was instant and for once he seriously thought he would die from pain alone, he felt like crying out, so painful in fact that he would eat several Hijikata specials if it would cure him. When the second arrow came flying towards him and Kagura caught it he was shocked, he thought it was only possible for people with skills and a functioning brain to catch an arrow mid-flight (even if he does love her, he still thinks of her as being an unintelligent, sadistic she-beast). She didn't seem to move at all after that, immediately hinting to Sougo that something must be wrong.
"Hey China, you finally run out of energy you don't seem to be moving or is it that your unused brain broke on you?" He got no reaction, not a word or twitch of a muscle. That was when he started to get really worried. With all the strength he could muster he managed to stand and look into her eyes. They were glassed over, foggy, not even looking at him. Then he snapped at both ears and threw in some insults about her, her dog and terrible choice in underwear, though secretly he loved her choice. Her ears didn't twitch and she didn't make a face.
"Shit! This is bad, she's gone. Can't hear, can't see, and can't fight. I'm on my last leg, literally, and there are only about a dozen of them left." Okita's vision began to blur, vertigo was setting in, so to stabilize himself he leaned on Kagura for support. It was then that the pirate captain started to walk and bark orders like he was some big hotshot.
"Okay boys lets end this now. The tranquilizers should start to set in now, they shouldn't be able to see or hear but that doesn't mean they still can't sense our presence and kill us. Tsuna I want you to wake up Nezumi and the others, and Himura, call the ship and tell them to get everything ready,we're leaving soon. I want the rest of you to tie them up now." He stopped several feet away from Sougo and just smirked at him. With the last of his remaining energy Sougo managed to give him the finger, the captain didn't like it one bit, his smirk quickly turning into a frown as he ordered everyone to work faster.
Five men limped over to him and Kagura and immediately began work on attempting to separate them, he wouldn't have it. He tried to fight back but anemia, exhaustion and the tranquilizer were working against him so it was a sad sight to see him fight. They were separated and he was tied up and cuffed. With Okita out of the way they pulled out two heavy duty steal cuffs that prevent any movement or exertion of power to limit Kagura's movement of her hands and feet. One amanto touched Kagura and that was all it took to set off the quick chain of events.
She didn't need to see or hear to know where her prey stood, she could smell and feel them. Kagura immediately grabbed the neck of the man who touched her and broke it with a squeeze. She tossed the now dead amanto to the ground like he was garbage and rushed the other four smashing two skulls together and killing them instantly. It was the other two that weren't so lucky, she smashed their arms and legs, bent to sickening angles until she crushed their chests underfoot. She turned towards the nearest enemy when she was done, the captain.
Seeing what had happened to the five previously and that he was now in her sights had him shaking in his boots, she took one stepped towards him and he let out a shrill cry, when she was suddenly thrown to the ground. The captain looked up to see Nezumi, the giant boar amanto with the hilarious name, who had finally woken up and back on his feet just in time to stop Kagura from killing him. He had her pinned to the ground and under his weight she couldn't move much but anyone could see Nezumi was struggling to keep her stationary.
She started to cry out and grunt trying and failing to move. Nezumi only smiled weekly at his success, he took one of the special cuffs from a mangled body and with some difficulty restrained Kagura's arms and soon her legs. With a quick and precise punch to the stomach Nezumi successfully knocked the instinct driven Kagura unconscious.
Sougo was lying on the ground not too far away, tied up and barely conscious himself. He witnessed everything and to say the least, he was surprised. Kagura who refused to kill even a bug, easily slaughtered five amanto like it was nothing more than swatting at a fly., and with such cruelty it made even the King of Sadists shudder.
He tried to struggle free when he saw Nezumi restrain her, but only exhausted himself and cause his injured leg to hurt more. Suddenly he saw a ship silently land in the park and a dozen or so amanto come filing out. The crunching of walking feet and the splash of disturbed liquid reached his faded hearing. He looked up and it was the captain and his now blurry face. His mouth moved but Okita couldn't understand him at all. The last thing he saw was a boot coming fast towards his face.
The kick was swift but powerful, making its mark to his right temple. The dark embrace of unconsciousness was coming, and fast. Okita's last thought was simply, 'Damn.'
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