So I guess first fanfiction means first haters, right? Don't answer that. I have a feeling I'll get hate on that too. Honestly, I'm really sorry if you don't like my story or if you don't get the concept of it but I have an idea and I want to stick with it. This is literally my first time writing a story. I do a lot of fan art not stories. I'm all about tumblr and deviantart. I know that tumblr is like a freakin war zone but it doesn't hurt as much because I've been drawing for a long time and I know I can get better. It's different when you try something out of your comfort zone and get rude comments afterwards. Anyways, sorry for the rant. Please try to enjoy. . .


Naruto was lying on a bed clothe less. His member stood out from the rest of his body, literally. His head rested on top of a bunch of pillows so he could have a better view of what was in front of him.

"Are you ready?" Said a naked Karin.

She was straddling herself on top of Naruto. Her body was very seductive. Her skin was a creamy vanilla, her breasts were large and round with a set of dark pink nipples that perked out, her ass was just was big and wide, and her vagina was waxed and very wet. Naruto loved what he was looking at. He moved his head in approval.

"Good."

She grabbed his dick and gave it tight squeeze. Naruto gave a breathy moan by her action. She adjust her flower on top of his member, her boobs jiggled and swayed in the process. Once he was inside she gave a loud 'Ohhh'. Her body started to move up and down slowly on top of him. Naruto reached for her boobs and started massaging them both. She, again, gave an 'oh' and grabbed his hands to take control.

"You like this? You like them?"

Naruto nodded. She than started to bounce on him, she gave small jumps but then increased her speed to the point that she could hit the ceiling.

"Naruto you're so big! I can feel so much of you inside me!"

Her boobs were bouncing like crazy. Naruto let go of them and grabbed the sheets tightly. Their bodies were making loud slapping sounds and whatever was coming out of Karin was spilling all over the place.

"Shit!" Naruto groaned.

Her body was moving way too fast for him to handle. He was actually kind of scared.

Holy shit! I think she's gonna break me!

In fear of her member getting destroyed, he flipped Karin over so her stomach laid on the bed. Unlike Hinata, she knew exactly what to do. She got up on her fours and arched her back. Naruto made his way behind her and knelt to put his dick inside her. She gave a pathetic 'Ooo'. Naruto thought it was pathetic because it was fake, evidently fake. All of the sudden he thought of Hinata, how delicate she was, not in bed but in general. He shook his head refocus on what was in front of him. He started to move back and forth slowly inside her. She was giving soft moans. He started to speed up. Their bodies again were slapping against each other hard. Her ass jiggled every time their bodies touched. Her orgasms were getting really loud and obnoxious.

"YES NARUTO! FUCK ME!"

Naruto was getting really annoyed. Her orgasms were being forced too hard. He could tell she was pretending. In her own excitement of being with him made her want to act like something she wasn't.

"YES. ."

She pursed her lips and made an aggressive 'mmmmm'.

"Can I hug you?"

Naruto jolted back. He had remembered Hinata's question. He remembered how her tiny self wrapped her arms around him. He reentered Karin trying to forget the memory, this time going a lot slower than before.

"When I was a little girl I use to think a kiss could get you pregnant."

Naruto shook his head and started to ram the life out of Karin. Karin was a mess she was arching and curving her back like crazy and she was screaming through the walls.

" You're over here flinging me all over the place. Now I defiantly know that's not case."

Naruto could no longer resist thinking about Hinata. She wasn't his girlfriend but he now felt extremely doing this to another girl. He wanted Hinata not sexually but just to be next to her, to see her beautiful face smile, to touch her fragile hands, to see blushed face. He looked down at the animal that was in front of him. It was not her and he felt disgusted by himself for letting this happen.

This is wrong.

As much as his member was liking it, he was not.

"I can't do this." He said getting up. He grabbed his clothes from the floor and started changing.

"Why? What happened?"

"Karin I'm really sorry but I don't like you like this. I can't be with you anymore."

Karins eyes widen."Are breaking up with me?!"

Naruto looked at her with nervousness, "Look I'm sorry but I-I just can't be with you okay."

When he was all dressed up he left without saying anything else.


It was already the afternoon, Hinata was walking out of her house to go see Naruto. She was locking the door when she a 'psshhh'. She turned around to see Naruto hiding in the bushes.

"What are you doing here? I was about to go see you."

Naruto leaned out of the bushes. "I didn't want you coming to my neighborhood by yourself, but then I had another idea. "

Hinata was curious to know what his new idea was. "What is it?"

"You'll just have to wait and see." He smiled.

Hinata rolled her eyes."Fine. Why are you hiding?"

"Because I have a feeling your parents wouldn't want you seeing me."

Hinata didn't say anything. Her father made it very clear to stay away from Naruto. She walked out her house entrance and Naruto jumped out of the bushes. He grabbed her hand and started running. Hinata almost fell by the unexpected exercise.

"I'm taking you to the park!" He said smiling back at her.

When they finally reached the park they sat on the bench. Hinata was trying to catch her breath.

"Lack. Of. Exercise." He said patting her back.

Hinata just shook her head. "Whatever, why'd you bring me here?" Her face slowly turned red. "W-We're not going to do anything here right?"

Naruto just laughed. "No, don't worry. I just wanna talk."

Hinata looked at him with a surprised look. "Okay." She was more than happy to know more about Naruto, to find out who he really was.

"I broke up with Karin today."

Hinata's eyes widen. "You did."

"Mmm-hmmm. It's just you and me now, like I promised. "

If Hinata's heart had a face it would've been blushing right now. She felt extremely bubbly when he said that.

"So tell me, what's your favorite subject, I bet its all of them because you're really smart."

Hinata shook her head. "I'm not actually that smart, trust me. I really like English though it's really interesting."

"This kind of a secret" He whispered."But I'm not very smart."

Hinata giggled."Really? I would've never guessed."

Naruto laughed and shook his head. "Nah I'm just kidding, I'm actually really good at math."

"Really?!" This time Hinata was very surprised.

"Yuppers, I take college courses for math, y'know, for people who wanna do that for living."

"You do?"

"Yea, don't laugh at me but I think it's really fun."

"I won't. That's amazing, really."

Naruto wrapped his arm around her and brought her closer. "What about you?" He kissed her on the forehead."What do you wanna be?"

Hinata blushed. "Don't at me but I wanna be a game console artist. I want to draw for living."

"Can't laugh at that, you're a God remember? Fuck, you be anything you want with that talent."

And so the two talked and talked until the sun was slowly sinking.

"Come here." Naruto said pulling her towards a fence.

The fence guarded a golf course. There was a huge sign that said, 'no trespassing'. Naruto started to climb up the fence.

"Naruto, you can't go in there."

Naruto just ignored her." Just come."

"No."

"Why?"

"Because I'll get in trouble." She said innocently.

Naruto jumped off of the fence and lifted her up. "Just trust me ok."

He pushed her up on top of the fence. "Jump."

And so she did and he did the same afterwards. They ran through the darkness pushing each other playfully until they fell to the floor tired. They laid on the grass panting. Hinata suddenly asked probably one of the most stupidest questions in the world.

"Naruto have you ever thought about having kids? N-Not with me but like anyone?"

The question had come to her mind out of the pure blew. She was just curious to know since they were talking about each other just a while ago.

"Yea, I've thought about it. And the funny thing is, I imagined having kids with you."

Hinata's stomach exploded with butterflies. She thought it was cute how he had thought about her in the idea of having starting a family with someone.

"I mean, not like actually 'having' kids, y'know like a family..."

Never mind.

"...but like the process of making them."

He closed his eyes and smirked. "Yea, that's what I imagine having with you, like actually doing you." He paused and rolled over to face the flustered girl. His eyes gave her a malicious glare.

"Do you imagine that with me too, having sex with me?"

Hinata reddened even more by his question. His hand ran up her thigh, pulling her skirt up along with it. He rested his hand on her flower. He stared at her delict panties lustfully.

"Do you imagine me, late at night, in your room?"

His fingers began to rub her panties up and down. He pressed his finger harder after every rub.

"Do you do this to yourself when you think of me?"

Hinata was amazed by what she was feeling. She also felt quite embarrassed that they were doing this in public. She didn't want any stranger walking into this or worse, someone she knew. Her pleasure was slowly disappearing by her level of worry.

"S-Stop. Someone might see us."

Naruto looked up at her. "Hinata we're on a hill, on an area that's supposedly closed. Nobody's gonna see us because nobody's here."

He continued to rub his fingers on her underwear, this time a lot slower." I'll be on the look out, if it bothers you so much."

Hinata slightly trusted him, he was right about this place being closed. The only reason they were there was because Naruto had sneaked their way in. But still, she wouldn't take any chances, so she sat up.

"Naruto I can't-"

"Sit down." He said in a serious tone. "Trust me. Alright? No ones coming, I promise."

Hinata had never seen his controlling side before, and she secretly liked it.

She laid back down on the grass and closed her eyes.

Finally!

Naruto continued from where he had left off. He rubbed her panties slowly and began to press on her. He started to move at an average speed but in a circular motion. Hinata liked that and he knew it.

"Ahhhh"

Naruto tried his best not to increase his speed out of excitement. He wouldn't, not yet, he had a plan.

"Ohhh"

Hinata had her eyes closed and was blushing like crazy. She had a wave of pleasure devouring her. She liked what Naruto was doing to her, he was so good at it.

"Go faster." She said

"No, not yet."

"W-Why?"

"Because."

Hinata was a little bummed he wouldn't change his speed. It felt good, but if he went faster, it would feel really good.

"Please Naruto! Go faster!" She begged.

Hearing her innocent voice beg for something so dirty, drove Naruto insane.

I guess I can change the plan.

He started to rapidly move his his fingers around her, at times changing the direction. Hinata would move her legs around and moan loudly. She was at the end of her ecstasy. Suddenly, he stopped.

She Poked her head up to see why. Nothing was wrong so why why'd he stop?

"Why'd you stop?" She said curiously.

Naruto simply ignored her question.

"Lay down."

His dominant state had returned, so Hinata did as she was told.

SHe was puzzled by what he was doing. Naruto grabbed the lips of her vagina that hid behind her underwear. He held them with his two fingers in one place. It didn't feel good. Which confused her. Was it suppose to?

"What are you do-OH!"

Hinata couldn't finish her sentence, she had gone blank. She sat up again, not because she wanted him to stop, but because she wanted to see. She wanted to see what felt so amazing! Naruto was rubbing her lips together ferociously. His fingers were wet and sticky.

"Oh my gosh!"

She arched her back and jolted her head up. Her eyes shut tightly.

She looked back down to see his fingers working. As she watched she would whimper;

"Oh!" or "mmm!"

She rested her body back on the floor. For some reason she felt like touching her breast, but was hesitant to.

"It's okay, do it." He said "touch your boobs."

She shly nodded. Her righthand grabbed her breast and started to massage it. She gave out a long moan.

Naruto kissed her inner thigh. "Now say my name."

He started to speed and slow down his pace at random times. Hinata would yelp and squeal during every change in motion.

"Naruto don't stop! Your so good!"

Naruto was so aroused by her voice. It brought excitement through his veins. He went faster and faster until she was screaming. He needed to get some out of this.

"Quick, Hinata grind me."

They both sat up and got closer to each other. Hinata got on top of him.

"Just like we did in the auditorium, remember."

He grabbed her hips, but she wouldnt sit down. Naruto had a boner on him, she had never seen one before, she didn't know what to do.

"What do I do with that?" She said said concerning.

"Just sit on it!" He said impatiently.

"Won't I break it?"

"What?! No?!"

Hinata looked at his erection and pushed it down. She sat on top of it.

Naruto started to move her hips back and fourth. She held his shoulders tightly. He moved her hips slowly in a repetitive pace. He started to move them faster and faster until he was growling. Hinata saw he was enjoying it and decided to help him out. She started to move herself in circles, pressing him really hard. She moved faster and faster as his eyes started to close.

"Ah fuck..." He groaned.

He was nearly going stupid, his hands were unconsciously letting go of her hips. They reached for her ass and lifted her skirt up, he grabbed her underwear and pulled it inside her, allowing him to grope her cheeks. She gave a loud,"Oh!" In response. She was grinding so fast she was sweating. Naruto was sweating too but for different reasons, he was trying His best to hold back.

"Damm!" He grunted "Hinata!"

Naruto began to incorporate his thrusts along with hers. Both were heavily breathing against each other. They were both almost at their end. Naruto cupped Hinata's cheek. He looked at her face. Her rosy cheeks, her innocent eyes, her feminine panting, it was beautiful to Naruto.

"Kiss me."He he told her.

There kiss was gentle and sweet. It wasn't aggressive like their first time.

They both made loud moans as they finished.

"Won't I break it..." He said panting. He kissed her on the forehead and hugged her tightly. "...You're so silly."

"Naruto?"

Hinata was befuddled to what he was doing. Hugging wasn't something they did this long, it was against the rules. Her chest started backing away from him, but Naruto quickly pulled her back.

"Don't move. I kinda wanna stay like this."

Hinata rested her head on his shoulder. She didn't know why he wanted to hug her this long but she didn't care. She liked the warmth of his body protecting her. It was nothing sexual just a simple hug.

"Okay."


I didn't check for grammar or spelling on this one. I always find mistakes on my other chapters once i post them but i don't know how to edit them but anyways i hope you understood this once cause i didn't reread it.