the Platt's VS Callum
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Chapter 5 Callum's Revenge
A few months later. The Platt's had returned to there normal lives. David and Kylie are happly working at the salon with David's gran Audrey. Gail was working with her son and the Bistro and Sarah and Bethany were living at number 8 with David, Kylie and Gail.
David and Kylie were sound asleep when David was awoken by the sound of Max and Bethany having an argument.
"Give me my phone Max" said Bethany
"Not until you give me the remote" said Max
David came down the stairs.
"What's going on" he said
"That little brat won't give me my phone" said Bethany
"Don't call him that" said David
"She won't let me watch TV before school" said Max
"Its bad for you Max" said Bethany
"David always lets me" said Max
David got the phone from Max and gave it to Bethany.
"You two better go to school. Do you mind taking him Bethany" said David
"Fine but im not talking to him" she said
And with that the two of them left for school.
David put the kettle on and sat at the kitchen table waiting for Kylie to come down. He spotted Sarah coming down the stairs.
"I thought you were Kylie. Do you want some tea" said David
"Sure. What was all that shouting" said Sarah
"Nothing just Max and Bethany fighting again" said David
David gave Sarah the tea and went upstairs to get ready for work. When he came back down he spotted Sarah looking very worried.
"What if he comes back" said Sarah
"Look me and Nick made sure he never comes back" said David
"How did you kill him" she asked
David began to panic
"Well I and Nick got but him in the boot of his car and we pushed it into the canal" he said sounding worried
"What makes you so sure they won't find the body." Said Sarah
"They wont. Stop worrying they will never find him. Go to work and forget about him" he said putting his hand on her shoulder.
With that Sarah left for the Rovers. As she headed to the pub Callum was watching from the corner shop at the other end of the street. He got into his car and drove off.
Back at number 8 Kylie came down the stairs.
"It's about time you got up" said David
"I knew you would get the kids up" said Kylie
"They were already up. Max and Bethany were fighting again" said David
"Why were they fighting" she asked
"Something about Bethany's phone" said David
David gave Kylie a cup of tea and the two of them sat down.
"I think Gail has already left for the bistro" said Kylie
"I was wondering were she got too" said David
The two of them sat quietly.
"David go and get your jacket from outside. We need to go to work Audrey will be wondering were we are" said Kylie
David got up and went into the back garden to get his jacket. When he came back in he forgot to lock the back door.
"Come on then lets go" said David
The two of them left the house unaware that the back door had been left unlocked.
As the couple headed to the salon David remembered something.
"I've left my phone in the house" he said to his wife
"Always trying to get off work you are David. Go on go and get it" said Kylie
David kissed his wife and walked back to the house. He waited by the front door until Kylie walked into the salon. When she did David headed towards the Bistro.
At the Bistro Nick was giving orders out to Gail and she wasn't happy.
"Come on mum that floor is nowhere near clean" Said Nick
"Nick I've done that floor three times" said Gail
Just then David walked in
"Didn't think you liked cleaning floors Gail" said David
"You know I've done this floor three times and he's still not happy" said Gail
Nick and David smiled
"Nick can i have a word in the office" said David
"Sure. Make sure you finish that floor" he said to Gail
The two brothers walked into the office.
"What is it" Nick asked
"It's Sarah. She keeps going on about Callum" said David
"Why what's she said" said Nick
"She keeps asking me how we killed Callum" said David
"What did you tell her" said Nick
"I just said we put him in his car and we pushed it into the canal" said David
"Well stick to the story. As far as she's concerned he's dead said Nick
"But what if he comes back she'll know we lied to her" said David
"Look he won't come back. We warned him he's not coming back just forget about him and get on with your life" said Nick
David nodded and left the office. He left the Bistro and headed towards the salon. Unaware that Callum was watching him. He waited until David went into the salon and then headed towards number 8. He tried to open the front door but it was locked. So he quietly headed towards the back garden trying not to be seen. When he got to the back garden he was surprised to see that the back door had been left unlocked so he walked inside and went up stairs.
At the Rovers Sarah was enjoying her shift.
"Sarah looks happy" Liz said to Michelle
"I know. I think Callum is of the scene" said Michelle
"Don't care who's on the scene as long as she's doing her job" interrupted Steve
"All you care about is money Steve" Said Michelle
Steve smiled and went into the back.
"You look happy" said Michelle
"I feel it" said Sarah
"So is Callum of the scene then or what" asked Michelle
"No I don't think we will be seeing him again" said Sarah
Michelle smiled and went into the back room.
At the bus stop Bethany go off a bus and walked down Coronation Street. As she passed the salon Kylie came out.
"Why aren't you at school" asked Kylie
"I felt sick so i came home" said Bethany
"Didn't feel sick this morning though when you were fighting with Max" said Kylie
"He took my phone so i took the control" said Bethany
"Yeah well make sure it doesn't happen again" said Kylie
"I'm gonna go home and get some rest" said Bethany
"Okay. Ill come and check on you in a bit" said Kylie
"I don't need checking up on" said Bethany as she walked away.
Bethany entered number 8 and walked into the kitchen to get a glass of water. She heard the stairs creak.
"Is that you mum" she shouted but there was no reply
Bethany turned around and spotted Callum in the living room.
"What's the matter Bethany you look shocked" said Callum
"What are you doing hear. Mum told me that you were dead" said Bethany
"No. Your uncles couldn't finish the job. So I'm going to make them pay for there mistake" said Callum
Bethany ran towards the back door but Callum grabbed her and through her to the floor.
"WHAT DO YOU WANT" she screamed
"I'm going to make this entire family pay" he said
He picked up Bethany and threw her onto the couch.
Callum heard someone put there key in the door. He grabbed Bethany putting his hand on her mouth and they to the top of the stairs. Gail walked in looking for something.
"Ahh there it is" she said to herself holding her phone she walked out of the living room and left the house as Callum and a terrified Bethany looked on.
At the salon David and Kylie were talking in the back room while Audrey was with a client
"She said she was ill" said Kylie to David
"They all say that. I can't believe you fell for it" said David
"She looked ill David i don't think she was lying" said Kylie
"Ill go and check on her. I bet she will be on her phone when I get home" said David
David headed towards the salon door.
"Where do you think you are going" said Audrey
"I'm going to check on Bethany. She came home ill apparently" explained David
"Well don't be long David you've got a client in half an hour" said Audrey
David smiled and left the salon. He walked down Coronation Street and headed towards number 8. He put his key in the lock and walked inside.
As he entered the living room he was shocked to see Callum holding Bethany by the throat.
"Come any closer David and she dies" said Callum
"What are you doing" said David
"You and your brother didn't have the guts to finish me off. Well I've got the guts to finish of your niece and your slut of a sister" said Callum
"Just let her go" said David
"Say bye bye Bethany" said Callum
"Come on Callum not man enough fight me so your picking on woman are we" said David
"You what" said Callum as he threw Bethany to the side.
Callum got David by the throat and but him up against the wall.
"Your wife wasn't saying I wasn't man enough for her. Come to think of it neither did your sister or niece" said Callum
David eyes began to water as Callum applied more pressure to his throat.
Bethany got up picked up a statue from the table and wacked him over the head with it and he fell to the floor.
David began to breathe heavily.
"Are you okay" asked Bethany
"Is he dead" said David
Bethany put her hands on his neck and couldn't feel a pulse. She began to cry
"He's dead isn't he" said David
Bethany nodded
"What are we going to do" asked Bethany
"Look everyone thinks he's dead so ill go and find his car and we will take him for a little swim. You wait her make sure no one comes in" said David
David left the house to find Callum's car
At the Rovers Sarah was about to finish her shift.
"Michelle can I go now" asked Sarah
"You've got to be joking you've still got 10 more minutes" said Steve
"Oh let her go" said Michelle
"No she can wait 10 more minutes like any normal person would" said Steve as he walked off.
"Sorry about him" said Michelle
"Its okay I can wait" said Sarah
Michelle walked into the back room.
At the canal David and Bethany pushed the car into the water and the two of them walked off.
"Do you think its over uncle David" said Bethany
"Yes Bethany its over" said David
"I didn't mean to sleep with him you know" said Bethany
"I know you didn't Bethany. But you take after your mother. Big gob and no knickers" said David
"Cheeky" said Bethany
As the two of them walked with there hands around each other into the bright Manchester sun...
Thanks so much for reading the final chapter. I really hoped you liked it. I appreciate all your reviews and suggestions. I've had fun making this story and I'm sad to say its finished
