Hey! OMG OMG OMG! Fifty views! *I know that isn't a lot, but it's much more than I thought I would EVER receive!
As I always do, I have to give out my kind regards to my amazing commenters:
WarriorCATZprincessk—Thank you for your continued support, and I love your suggestions!
Silver wolf rain—thanks for asking me to continue! I sort of have an ego issue, and someone telling me that they want to read more of my story makes me all giddy and happieeee!
Orangeflight of Shadowclan—OMG! Ur name is taking me a while to type! I don't envy you
Thanks for all of your support; I was so excited my all the positive-ness, that I just by-passed the contest with the comments, (info on chapter three) and I only have one name to use._.; *I have two pending, so HURRY!)
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And now, per WarriorCATZprincessk's request, a mini-chapter showing Starclan's intent… ENJOY!
"Well, hello there, little kit. You sure are far away from the Clans…. I see, you have been sent to observe the Starclan meeting. I'm sorry to tell you that it has been postponed, due to an outbreak of Darkforest warriors pushing the boundaries of Starclan. Oh, but I'm sorry. I have forgotten that you are only a kit. You have been untouched yet of evil, or hatred and jealousy.
"What is the Darkforest, you ask? The Darkforest is where the cats, the ones that succumb to the evil, to the jealousy of the world, go. These cats become bitter, hateful, and dangerous. We constantly fight against them, they constantly push our boundaries, but lately, they have been getting stronger, they have begun to multiply, due to the increasing unrest in the Clans. This is normal, for the clans to get hateful and bitter themselves. But this time, the Darkforest was ready. They have begun to solidify.
"I'm sorry, kit, I am getting ahead of myself, again. You are very mature, for a kit, you know! Okay, where was I? I apologize; an old cat like me is bound to have some memory problems… Oh yes, thank you. The Darkforest has begun to copy the Clan cats. The evil side, the cat's bitter and jealous and spiteful side, becomes a whole different cat. A Darkforest cat. It is unknown, in the four clans, how this is happening, but they believe that when a cat dies, they go to the Darkforest or Starclan, when in reality, the good part of a cat goes to Starclan, and the evil to the Darkforest.
"No, little cat, you do not have a copy in the Darkforest. The cat has to have angry thoughts, thoughts of thoughtless killing, of murder of warriors, queens, kits, and elders alike. They have no pity. But then, there are those who have simply been pushed away, whose spite and jealousy get the better of them, and they then create their Dark copy.
"Do I have one, you ask me? I am ashamed to say yes, I do. I have an angry, evil soul with my name and my body, past those trees, right at the horizon. Can you see? They are fighting more fiercely than ever, I fear that we may need help from the cats that walk the ground still. There is one in particular that frightens me. She was as pure as snow, until one of them ruined everything. I have then since felt her Dark spirit form, and she is already as powerful as mine is. And that, little kit, is not an easy thing to accomplish. And to think she's only barely an apprentice…
"I believe she's moving to your Clan, isn't she? Riverclan?
"I'm sorry, little kit; I believe I have forgotten to ask you of your name.
"Oh! You're the one I was sent to welcome! You must forgive me, I had forgotten.
"Welcome to Starclan, Leafkit. My name is Orangeflight."
How did you guys like that? Hehe ^_^ this is similar to what your parts will be like, like I said, I have TWO definite spots for you left! (now, though, you have a better chance of being : a Riverclan cat, or a Dark Spirit.) im trying to twist the story away from the books, ever so slightly! Like it? No? TEL ME!
Thankyou all SO MUCH for your reviews, visits, and for the one request
'Till we meet again, ~~~Emberfall
P.S.: I was wondering, how does an interview with Emberpaw and Stripepaw sound? Spread my story around a bit, and when I get… hmmm… 75 views, I will post it!