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Revenge: A Hero's Motivation
Ch. 5 Warrior
[Route 7]
The Pokeball erupted in a beautiful flash of red and Whites Mankey appeared, with a yelp of excitement…or maybe anger.
"Go! Metapod!" Carr yelled as his Pokeball returned to his hand.
The stage was set. Mankey stood on one side, hyper and pumped for battle, Metapod stood still on the other side, showing no emotion or movement at all.
"Darwin, fury swipes!" White yelled.
The Pokèmon yelled one more battle cry, and ran on all fours towards the Metapod.
"Metapod, string shot!"
Finally, the Pokèmon moved, just enough to aim at the Monkey. It shot out a webbing and caught it directly in the face.
Mankey stopped in its tracks, its momentum causing it to do affront flip onto its back as it clawed at the strange stuff on its face.
As the Pokèmon was ripping web Carr yelled. "Now, harden!" The Metapod shown bright green for a moment, and then it went away.
Mankey finally kicked off the ground with one arm, landed on one leg, and began to run towards his opponent again.
"Metapod! String shot again!"
"Dodge it Mankey!"
The cocoon shot out another goop of webbing as Mankey put both arms on the ground and front flipped over the attack. It continued running.
As soon as he got to Metapod, its claws seemed to get much sharper and it started swiping wildly.
"Harden, Metapod!" Carr yelled.
As Darwin chipped away, the Metapod started to shine green again, and its hide grew harder and harder.
Right as the monkey started to slow, White yelled "Now, Karate chop!"
Mankey lifted its arm up high
"Tackle!"
Metapod suddenly shot forward right under the Mankey's arm hit it critically.
Darwin was pushed back, but landed on its hands, and back flipped to its feet once again.
"Good Darwin now-"
Darwin was ignoring White and running towards the Metapod, ready to attack again.
"Darwin listen to me!" White yelled. Mankey had hit its anger point again, it was in a blind rage. It couldn't fight through the anger to listen to White.
"Good job! Now string shot!"
The web came flying from Metapod and as Mankey tried to dodge it, it was hit in the arm. It continued running with three limbs, lifting its left arm up in the air.
"Do it again!"
Another web came flying, and was swiftly dodged.
Mankey jumped up and landed with its left hand on the ground. It used its momentum to swing around and kick at the bottom of Metapod's shell.
The Pokèmon went flying up, and landed back on the ground, rolling over until it could get its bearings again.
"Metapod! String shot!"
Mankey tried to jump up, but it was stuck to the ground by the webbing on its hands.
*whack*
Mankey blocked with its right arm, but the momentum sent its arm to the ground where it got stuck.
Mankey struggled to rip its arms off the ground.
"Metapod! Tackle!"
Mankey was wide open. It let out a battle cry and pulled its arms together as hard as it could. At the last moment he ripped his left arm from the webbing on the ground, pulled it to his left side, and chopped Metapod with a sideways karate chop right as it was mid-tackle.
Metapod went flying to the side and Mankey started scratching at the webbing to free its other hand.
Metapod landed and was motionless for a moment.
"It looks like Metapod is unabl-" Green began to say, until she was interrupted by a bright blue light coming from Metapod.
"Yes! It's about time!"
The Metapod shone brightly, but the change in shape was still noticeable. Its long body was opening up to reveal two long wings, a circular head, then two antennae, and two legs. Then with a final flash of light, the evolved Pokèmon was revealed.
"Butterfree! I knew it!"
The new Pokèmon stood much taller than Metapod had, growing almost a full foot in size, bringing it up to the middle of Carr's stomach.
Mankey yelled once more and started running towards the new Pokèmon.
"Butterfree! Fly up! Dodge it!"
The Pokèmon took flight, going above Mankey's attack.
"Mankey, you've got to listen to me! Jump up there!"
One thing Carr hadn't thought of. He didn't know what kind of moves a Butterfree could use. Oh well, he would just use the old ones still!
"Butterfree, tackle it!"
As Mankey was jumping up, Butterfree dove down and tackled the Pokèmon.
Mankey landed on the ground. Trying to get up, but struggling a lot.
White held his Pokeball out and returned Mankey.
"Mankey is unable to battle! Carr takes the advantage!" Green said with a smile. She was glad White didn't make his Pokèmon fight until they died like some stupid trainers did.
"Well. I guess I'll see what you can do." He said quietly as he pulled out the Dark blue netball with black stripes on it.
"Go, Psyduck!"
The Pokèmon appeared and instantly turned around and looked at White with confusion. "Psyduck! We're fighting!" he pointed at the butterfly Pokèmon.
Psyduck turned back around and started waddling towards his opponent.
"Okay…Uhh…" he tried to remember Psyduck's moves "Screech!"
Psyduck stopped moving and let out a screeching noise, like a hundred nails on a chalkboard. And Butterfree started flying irrationally as a result. The Pokèmon landed for a moment, still trying to learn its new wings.
"Okay Butterfree, string shot!" The Butterfree flew back into the air, and tried to spit out a string shot, which missed dramatically.
"Psyduck, water pulse!" Psyduck ran a little closer, and opened its mouth to unleash ultrasonic waves of water at Butterfree. They hit directly and Butterfree's flying became much more sporadic.
Right as Butterfree was about to lose control and fall on the ground, Carr returned him.
"Butterfree is unable to battle! White and Carr are tied one-to-one!" Green announced. While battles usually weren't fun to her, this one was at least exciting. She secretly hoped White would win.
Carr clipped the Pokeball, and pulled out his next one.
"Go, Megan!"
The Magnemite appeared in a flash of red light and electricity. "Magne!"
"Well just great." White whispered. Of course he would be at a disadvantage.
"Psyduck, disable!" The duck Pokèmon opened its eyes wide, and a visible white flash came from it. Nothing else seemed to happen.
"That's exciting White. Really. Megan, use thunder shock!"
The Magnemite tried to use the move. But found itself completely unable. It turned around in a panic, looking at Carr.
"Magnemite? Thunder shock it!"
It tried again, and once again failed.
White started to laugh. "Yes!" he cried out. "Now, fury swipes!"
Psyduck started running (or trying to) towards the Magnemite, with its claws gleaming silver.
"Okay Megan, Tackle!"
The magnet started rushing towards Psyduck, and hit it forcefully.
*bam*
Psuduck responded by cutting at his opponent three times before it could escape.
Finally, it floated away, not showing signs of fatigue yet. "Try the new move! Magnet bomb!"
The Pokèmon started crafting a metal ball in front of it, and once it had grown to the full size of Magnemite's body, it shot out towards Psyduck.
"Psyduck!" was all White could yell before the steel ball hit his Pokèmon. But it didn't seem to do much damage at all. It just stuck to his Pokémon's bill.
"Psy?"
Suddenly the ball exploded and Psyduck was sent flying backwards onto the dirt.
"No! Psyduck!"
"Good job Magnemite!"
Psyduck got up once again, seeming a little dizzy.
"Psyduck, can you still fight?"
The Pokèmon turned around and said "Psy. Psyduck." To reassure White.
"Okay good. Let's use water pulse!"
Psyduck did as he was commanded, and a wave of water was fired towards Magnemite.
It was a direct hit, and Magnemite fell to the ground, covered in water and disoriented.
"Now, run towards it!"
"Magnemite, get up!"
The Pokèmon struggled to float again, it seemed confused for some reason.
Psyduck was almost at Magnemite, its claws already ready to strike again.
"Magnemite, supersonic!"
The Pokèmon managed to send out a high pitched whine as it floated.
White and Green both covered their ears, as the sound was just painful to hear!
Psyduck stopped in its tracks and put its hands up to its head. It started to get a headache.
When the noise ended White yelled "Psyduck, you okay?"
Psyduck didn't move its hands, and started rocking back and forth.
"Psy..psy…psy…"
"Looks like we're both confused." Carr said, somewhat proudly.
"Magnemite tackle!"
"psy…PSY!"
Psyduck cried out and suddenly Magnemite was pushed back without even being touched and went flying
*bam*
It hit the ground.
"Magnemite?!" Carr yelled.
The Pokèmon could hardly float anymore.
Carr returned his Pokèmon. "Okay White, good job. What the heck was that?"
White laughed and walked towards Psyduck "I have no idea man."
Suddenly Psyduck yelled out in pain again, and a burst of energy seemed to come from it in a random direction. A tree was hit and shook.
"Woah! Psyduck!" White yelled. He quickly returned it.
"What the heck man? I thought that was a water type!" Carr said.
Green took the moment of silence. "Carr's Pokèmon have been knocked out. White is victorious!" she said cheerfully.
"Yeah yeah. He got lucky!" Carr complained. "He can't even control his Pokèmon!"
"I can too! Most of the time!"
"Wait I have a question" Green said "Why did you name your Magnemite Megan? I thought it didn't have a gender."
"Oh he named it after his old girlfriend." White said with a kissy face.
"Hey you shut up right now!"
"No that's sweet." Green said.
"After they broke up." White added.
"Ohhh…maybe not."
"You guys suck. I'm gonna heal my Pokèmon." He walked away.
Green and White were left alone on the battlefield.
"So…that was really good! I'm impressed!"
"Thanks Green! I didn't think I was going to win."
"Well, I can tell you really love your Pokèmon."
It was strangely awkward between them.
"Yeah…" He suddenly wanted to tell her why he was really traveling.
"Let's go back so you can heal your Pokèmon too, okay?"
"Umm.. Sound good."
Not now. Another time maybe.
