Phew! I always get so surprised at how many people there is who read the chapter's the day they come out.
It's kinda exciting actually. Most reader's are from the US by a large margin, next is UK and random reader's from other places.
It's kinda hard deciding how much they should know about human's but well, I'll do my best to keep it interesting.
By the way. The point of view is always Stolen Thunder's POV unless he's not atending / paying atention and / or is unconcious.
I usualy put the name of the one talking right after the meaning or in the middle if they continue speaking.
In the begining if they do something before talking. Example below.
"It's cold outside," Twilight note's as she shudder's. "You could almost think it was winter."
Twilight sigh's. "Arn't you clever."
"What's there? Twilight ask me."
Instead of. Twilight: "what's there Thunder?"
I find it easier to get the story to flow by writing this way. For those who wonder.
Also, I said that ticket master was gonna come up soon, but I think I'm gonna do it more cronologically,
instead of just ep 1-2-3-4-5 and so on. It's gonna take some research...
Hmmm, can't think of anything more to say atm... here we go, enjoy!
Disclaimer: MLP FIM is not owned by me, I'm just some guy with a wild imagination,
throwing a part of my personality into the story as Stolen Thunder, stiring up thing's.
Chapter 4 Human's and alternate world's
"Human's?" I get as the overall reaction, not counting Celestia and Luna who shared a glance.
"You don't mean those big, mean, hairy, scairy, pony eating monsters of legend, do you?" Pinkie ask's.
"The what, now?" Applejack ask's, looking at Pinkie.
As pinkie tell's Applecack all about how scary human's are, Fluttershy hide, scared.
And Twilight tell me that she atleast have come across the word before.
I smile and say, "yes Pinkie! That's exactly what I mean," getting their full atention.
"What about them?" Twilight ask's looking curious.
"Well, I was one untill yesterday." I say waving a hoof at them dismissivly.
"Whaat!?" Their mouth's hanging open for a second before they laugh it of as some joke. Celestia and Luna however keep their calm.
Letting them laugh it of, I watch Applejack and my grin grow's wider and wider as I see her expression grow more serious as she realize I'm telling the truth.
"Uuh, guy's!" She say's, getting the other's atention. "What?" Twilight ask's as she notice Applejak's seroius face.
"You cant beleive him can you? I mean he's a little odd, but a mythological creature?" say's Twilight.
Twilight look's at me and I smile and nod at her.
"And that should answer your question as well, right Luna?" I say as I turn to look at the princess of the night.
The other's look on in suspense as Luna who's sitting with her eye's closed, nod's and say.
"Well I did ask what thou where, but there are more question's now, I'm afraid." She say's as she look's at me.
"Yes, Pinkie?" I say letting Pinkie who had raised her hoof speak.
"So you really eat ponies?" She ask me.
"Well Pinkie, I don't, but my world is big and we are omnivores, so I wouldn't say it dosn't happen."
The other's gasp at this revelation. Rarity put's a hoof to her head while doing it, just like the drama queen she is.
"Well, ponies arn't sentient in my world anyway's," I say.
"You keep saying your world," Twilight note's looking questioningly at me.
"Yes, if I'm right I am from another universe, or dimention. I was somehow transported to this world when asleep, and then woke up as a pony."
When I've finished explaining, Twilight shoot's another question.
"Wont your family wonder where you are?"
"I... Actually I didn't think about that." I say as I scratch my neck, the other's falling to the floor in a comical fashion.
"Meh, they'll worry but will be fine, and I believe I'm in some good hoves, so there's no problem I think."
"By the way, why did you ask if I've ever been to Canterlot Castle?" I turn my atention to Celestia who then sigh.
"It's a series of question's actually," Celestia answers.
"Go on then," I say as I nod for her to continue.
"Luna told me about your dream."
"Oh did she now," I say smirking at Luna for a second.
"Indeed," Celestia smile's.
"She told me of all the fun you had, making her chase you untill you jumped into some well, what happened next?" Celestia ask's.
"Well, I ended up in some other dream," I say.
"I ended up somewhere around ponyville I think, The castle could be seen at the same angle from where I was atleast," I tell them.
"Then what?" Rainbow ask's, wanting me to get on with the story.
"Well, I thought I'd take a tour of the castle and simply willed myself over since it was the only place I could see. Dream's are handy that way,"
I tell them. You can do almost whatever you want.
"So how was the castle?" Rarity ask, getting big eyed by imagining being at the castle herself.
"It was quite empty," I tell her. "The castle looked really new though," I say nodding.
"So you didn't meet anypony?" Celestia ask's.
"Ah, yes! Well there was this one pony I met in the dream." Remembering what had hapened then I quickly say.
"And after that I entered another dream, only to be awoken by Twilight."
"How did she look?" Celestia ask's.
"The one I met?" I ask her and she nod's.
"Well she was a white, umm unicorn or pegasi with a pinkish mane, I dunno why I can't remember wich one. Wait! How did you know it was a mare?"
Celestia smile then sigh's as she say, "since I saw you yesterday I had this feeling, that I might have seen you somewhere before."
It was the time for my jaw to drop in total disbelief.
"Turns out what you thought was a dream continuation was actually some kind of time travel." say's Celestia.
"Time travel?" I repeat as a broken record, "then that would mean that the pony I met was."
"Yes, me." Celestia say's as she blush, ever so faintly.
"Holy plot twist's and crazy shenanigans! I've Bucked Celestia!" I shout before fainting,
barely catching the speechless face's of everyone else.
Waking up, not sure how long time has pased, I find myself leaning against Rainbow Dash.
Noticing me stiring, she say. "Didn't take you for one who faint's so easily Sto, even if you b-b-bucked somepony."
Her face turned red at these last word's and she looked away.
"So... that wasn't really a dream huh?" I ask, mostly to Celestia,
who had shifted her atention from talking to the other's, to watching me.
"Well, no," she answer, "as a matter of fact it wasn't. But we can talk about that at another time."
"It was after all, nearly a thousand year's ago. At a time when I still couldn't control my, need's properly."
I nod scratching my head sheepishly.
"How long was I out for?" I ask nopony in particular.
"One hour twentytwo minute's and thirtyfive second's" Pinkie say's getting in my face, pressing her nose against mine.
"Umm, well thank's." I say, gently pushing her away to a safer distance.
"Celestia told us some thing's she knew about human's while you where fainted," Twilight Tell's me.
"She told us that they have been extinct in our universe since long ago, but that there are other world's like your, where they still thrive."
"Ok," I say nodding. "Then do you have any question's left for me?"
"Actually, I do." Rarity speak's up.
"Yes?" I ask, waiting for her to continue.
"W-well, I heard Human's use clothe's all the time and I couldn't help but wonder why."
"Good question Rarity," I say smiling at her.
"Imagine you had your mane but no coat of fur, what would you do?"
"Use something else to cover up I guess? I imagine it to be pretty cold." Rarity say's unsurely.
"And you have just answered your own question," I tell her.
"What about pet's?" Fluttershy ask's quietly.
"Yes we keep pet's Fluttershy, and no, we don't eat them. There are farm's for those kind of thing's."
"Farm's?" Aplejack ask's, obviously intrigued since she live on a farm herself.
"You eat farm animal's?" She ask's more specificaly.
"Yes Applejack, human's mostly eat farm animal's." I tell her.
"Even cow's?" She ask.
"Yes," I say, making her say. "Oh my."
"Other than human's there are really no more sentient being's in my world," I explain.
"Dosen't that become kinda boring?" Pinkie ask's.
"Well it certainly would be more fun if there was more sentient being's, but with million's of people to meet you can't really get bored," I say.
"Million's?" Pinkie's face light's up when she think's of all the friend's she could have made.
"Well over seven billion actually." Saying this I almost made pinkie faint.
"That's nine zeroes!" Twilight exclaim. "And you said seven b-billion's?"
"That is certainly a lot," Celestia note's. "Is that really sustainable?" She ask's.
"That's still up for debate actually," I answer. "Depend's on how wastefull we are."
She nod's in agreement.
"Can human's fly?" Rainbow ask's from beside me.
I had forgotten I was still leaning a bit on her.
Awkwardly leaning away from her I clear my throat.
"Well we can't fly like a pegasus but, we do travel by air."
"Like in an air baloon?" Twilight ask.
"Some do, I say. But most human's fly in airplane's. There are even some plane's that can fly over three times the speed of sound actually."
"That's kinda awesome," Rainbow say's, trying to not sound too impressed.
"What's a plane?" Twilight ask.
"A self propellant mashine with stationary wing's, which you use to travel from point A to B through the air," I say.
Trying to say it in a factual way so Twilight would understand easily.
"Interesting," she note's.
"By the way Thunder, I could hear somepony laughing when you fainted before." Pinkie say's making everypony look at her.
"I certainly didn't hear anything," Applejack say's.
The other's look at Pinkie confused and Celestia raises an eyebrow.
"He sounded an aweful lot like yourself," Pinkie note. "I think he's spying on us right now actually," Pinkie say's staring into thin air.
Trying to find whoever she was trying to find. I sigh and say,
"that's probably me actually." Getting a confused look from the other's, I continue.
"I'm going out on a limb here, but I believe there might be another me out there who's having fun documenting my..."
"I really hope not everything get's documented." I sigh again. The other's look at me in disbelief,
well... all except Pinkie who bounced with joy from me giving her a serious answer to what the other's thought was nonsense.
"What in tarnation are you talking about?" Applejack ask's confused.
"Alternate world's Applejack," I say smiling at her. I get a confused look but she leave's it there.
"So, is your curiosity satiated yet?" I ask them. Aside from Twilight who still look's like she's bubbling with question's,
the other's looked at each other like they wern't sure of what to ask.
"I guess we can stop here," Celestia say's.
"There are some thing's that still need's to be adressed but it's getting late, Luna and I simply must return to Canterlot."
"Oh, ok!" I say getting up, stretching a bit after all that sitting around.
Twilight look's a little sad that the princess was leaving but she cover's it up by smiling when saying her goodbye's.
The other's bow to the princesses as a godbye, and when I get my turn I scratch my neck awkwardly,
"I, I guess Twilight will keep you informed about things." Thinking about what time it is I add, "Take care and sweet dream's."
Bowing a little, getting some almost inaudible giggle's from them.
Then they walk out and close the door.
Celestia and Luna, walking down toward's their ride home, Luna ask's Celestia.
"Sister, I'm sorry about thinking you ate too much cake back then, but why didn't you tell him?"
Celestia stop's, looking back toward's the library.
"I think I shocked him enough as it is Luna." Giving Luna a smile. "Maybe some other time."
Back in the library the other's said it would probably be best to get to their own place's to get the thing's they still had to do, done.
"I guess I'll see you guy's around then," I tell them as they make themselves ready to leave.
"Have a nice evening," say's Fluttershy, bowing as he head's out.
"I'll see y'all around." Applejack note's as she head's out after Fluttershy.
I get a random hug by Pinkie before she run's of, shouting "bye!" To us.
Guessing the hug was for taking her seriously before I just shrug, waving a hoof in goodbye.
"Umm," I turn to Dash who seem a bit bashful,
"Collors?" I ask.
"See you tomorrow I guess," she say's.
"Yeah, thank's for caring for me when I fainted by the way." I say, giving her a smile.
"It's nothing," She say's. "Bye now!" She flie's out through the door and away.
"Should I say like teacher like student?" Rarity ask's Twilight giggling as she walk's out lastly.
Twilight blush for some reason and say's. "Bye rarity," through her teeth.
Rarity just give's her a wink.
"What was that about?" I ask Twilight, who just closed the door with her magic.
"Oh, nothing!" She give's me an awkward smile.
"Ok, then I won't pry." I say, looking at her skeptically.
Breaking the awkwardness for a second time this day, my stomach makes a growling sound.
"Guess we should eat something," Twilight note's smirking at me.
"Guess so!" I say, folowing her into the kitchen.
Using her magic, Twilight quickly brought out some bread, butter and daisy's.
Sitting down at the table I make a sandwich, bring it up to my face and frown.
"What's the matter?" Twilight ask's, having started on her own.
"If this is about Celestia, we know you just thought it was a dream."
"Well that certainly was shocking huh," I say. "It's not that though."
"Then what is it?" Twilight ask.
"It's this sandwich," I say. Getting a confused look by her.
"I heard there's edible flower's back in my world but I don't think daisy's was one of them."
"And?" She ask's me raising an eyebrow.
"Well I guess It's no problem since I'm a pony now anyway's." I answer. Taking a bite, I say. "Not bad."
"Where is Spike anyway's?" I ask Twilight.
"Oh, him? He was feeling sleepy so he went to bed while you where out cold." Twilight say's as she motion toward's her bedroom with her head.
"There is however one thing that bother me with that other thing though," I tell twilight who stop's eating to listen.
"You know how I'm still unable to use magic right?" I say, emphasizing by lifting the sandwich I hold in my hoof a little more.
"I don't se how that's anything... Ah!" She say's. "You're wondering about how you even got to the castle!" She exclaim's.
"Exactly", I say nodding.
"I have been told that I sometime sleeptalk, back in my world. Though I wasn't sleeping at that point, apparently."
"I shouldn't have been able to just will myself over there right? By the way, is magic sleepwalking a thing?" I ask Twilight.
She think's for a moment then say,
"I think that might be it, I don't have very knowlege on that area."
"But with your lack of magic understanding it might be posible that you are using it unconciously."
"Are you sure that it was from Ponyville you teleported from though?"
"Yes," I answer. "Well, nearby atleast... on another note, Ponyville wasn't built yet I guess."
"Well using a teleportation spell to cross that distance is an amazing feat nonetheless," Twilight say.
"Yeah, being able to teleport that distance when believing I'm asleep, and not being able to levitate this stupid thing." I wave my partialy eaten sandwich,
"I must be a real prodigy," I say smirking. Making Twilight snicker.
"No, I guess that's your job Twi." I say looking at her.
"Oh, I'm not that good," Twilight say's acting modest. I snort and say,
"well, one of these day's when you accept being the prodigy that you are I'm gonna ask you to teach me how to control my magic."
Twilight give's me an awkward smile but nod's nonetheless.
After eating quietly for some time I say.
"Twilight, do you know what hapened back at the party? I asked Big Mac before he left and he told me it wasn't me who put it there."
"He didn't say who did tho, and you all acted weird."
I look up from my food and see Twilight frozen with her mouth gaping over her sandwich.
"I-I have no clue Thunder," she say's looking away. Blushing again.
Overcome by a sudden yawn, I say. "I guess you're of the hook this time."
Getting up from the table I walk to the bathroom, getting myself ready to sleep.
Twilight breathe's out in relief when I'm out of sight.
"Oh, behave yourself!" Twilight tell herself while slapping her cheek's. Puting away the food she walk's over to a bookshelf,
using her magic to grab a book. Using magic in your sleep, was the label.
Walking out from the bathroom I spot Twilight.
"Doing some light reading before bed?" I ask sarcasticaly, looking at the really thick book she just picked down.
"Uhuh," she answer's with an awkward smile.
"Well good night then," I say walking into my room.
"Good night!" Twilight respond's.
Laying down on my bed I think back on the day, I guess I ended up smack-dab in the middle of thing's even if I tried to be incognito at first.
"Well, whatever." I think before drifting of to sleep.
And that's the end of the second day.
I did some research and found a picture with a list of chronologicaly listed episode's.
Griffon the brush off, seem to be a good choise to start with. Dunno if I start that the next chapter or later tho.
Random ranting: By the way, A certain reviewer caused me to have a dream the night before I upload this,
where I invited Vegeta from dbz to a hotpot in my appartment, not that I'm living in one irl tho.
But there was another anime char there aswell which i told he could join, I also told his eagle, who was sitting in the window.
That he could get a piece.
The eagle flew away with the whole thing tho, me shouting. I didn't say you could take it all, stretching an arm out.
We got the hotpot back tho, I think it was thank's to Vegeta actually.
Did this chapter answer your question's? Or did it just create more?
Soo much talking tho, Next chapter might need a little bit of action to make up for this.
Se you next chapter and in the review's, I hope you enjoyed it!