OK SO YOU PROBABLY WOULDN'T HAVE NOTICED BUT I HAVE EDITED MY PREVIOUS CHAPTERS AND TRIED TO IMPROVE THEM BY ADDING MORE DESCRIPTION, ELONGATING SENTENCES E.C.T . HOPEFULLY THEY ARE BETTER NOW AND I REALLY APPRECIATE THE TIPS. THANK YOU!
Valkyrie woke up. She could feel Skulduggery's bony arms carrying her and he appeared to be tense and agitated. She tried to speak but realized her throat was unimaginably dry and only a small noise, something between a groan and a squeak, escaped her lips. However, this rubbish attempt at talking didn't go by unnoticed and she saw Skulduggery visibly relax. It was at that moment Valkyrie started to identify her surroundings; she was in the sanctuary. All of a sudden Valkyrie felt a sharp pain in her head and she hissed in pain as it worsened. Skulduggery quickened his pace and soon he had burst through the double doors of the medical bay with Valkyrie sobbing in his arms, catching the attention of doctor Nye.
"Help her now!" Skulduggery demanded. "NOW!"
Nye strode over to the outraged skeleton and led him to an available bed. Skulduggery carefully placed Valkyrie down and explained to Nye what had happened. It started preparing some injections and wiping it's scalpel clean. Skulduggery was still talking. Nye wasn't listening to any of it since it had already figured out what treatment Valkyrie needed after one look at her. It turned around with a mask over it's mouth and a small injection filled with a murky yellow liquid in it's hand. Skulduggery paused for a moment and Nye took the opportunity to say something itself.
"I shall get right to work," it said. "you can leave through the door on your left."
"I'm not leaving her,"Skulduggery replied, and, as if to prove his point, he sat down on a chair beside the bed. Nye leaned over Valkyrie, who was wiggling and moaning in pain.
"This was only hurt a bit," it said, a hint of amusement in its voice. Nye stabbed the needle into Valkyrie's neck and she let out a quick scream before falling into a deep sleep.
THIS CHAPTER IS SHORT AND BORING I KNOW. I PROMISE THE NEXT PART WILL BE BETTER. I ALSO REALIZED THAT MY LAST TWO CHAPTERS ENDED WITH VALKYRIE GETTING KNOCKED OUT WHICH IS REPETITIVE AND SO VERY CHEERFUL (SARCASM). KEEP THE REVIEWS COMING IN BECAUSE I REALLY WANT TO GET BETTER AT WRITING (AND RIGHT NOW I'M CERTAINLY NOT THE BEST AT IT)! :) :) :)