Wonderful Wonderful Romance: Of Knights And Clocks

by chaos-dark-lord

Ace doesn't care about the thousands of clocks waiting for Julius to repair them; he doesn't like Julius being so grumpy and stressed either and no one remembers what happened that killed so many people. In the middle of this appears someone they forgot and that knows everything but won't tell them. Why?

48. The Questionnaire

The questionnaire.

I would appreciate if anyone were kind enough to answer this questions or at least the ones you find most important or flagrant so that I can improve my writing and the next story (ies). Although Im gonna check every review, Im not gonna them for this quiz and you don't to leave your name if you don't want (hello guests!),

Is the story BORING?

- Does any part of the story Drag?
- Are their parts that you skipped to get to 'the good part'?
- Do I over-inform anywhere? (ok, yeah, I do. But where? Just in the science rants or on other parts too?)

Did you Get it?

- Did you understand phrases / terms I used? ( besides the science stuff)
- If someone unfamiliar with this Fandom read this, have I explained enough for them to understand WHY everything was happening?
- Did you have to reread any part of the scenes to understand who was doing what to whom? - Did I forget to mention something? Anything ?

- Did the actions flow smoothly from one to the next, or did they jump as though something was skipped?

Fluff Scenes?

- Where there enough or too many?
- Were the scenes too fast, too slow, or too (in)frequent?

Do the scenes FLOW?

- Does one scene lead logically into the next?
- Is there enough downtime between intense scenes to allow it to build to the next?
- Were the Flashbacks smoothly integrated - or did they seem plopped in, like a chapter that was in the wrong place?
- Do I repeat things that Don't need to be repeated?
- Was there nice clean chapter breaks?

Is anything VISUALLY Confusing?

- Can you SEE every action clearly in your mind like a movie?
- Could you SEE what the characters looked like?
- Could someone who was Not familiar with the fandom SEE what the characters looked?
- Could you picture the places that were described?
- Did I forget to describe their Clothes, their Hair, their Eyes, any other distinctive feature that pertains to a specific character?

During DIALOGUE scenes?

- Could you see what the characters were DOING while talking?
- Did the dialogs made sense (save for her techno babble, that was supposed to be confusing)

Did the Characters WORK?

- Do the characters ACT realistic?
- Does the Dialogue sound realistic?
- Do their Reactions seem logical & realistic?
- Could you feel the Emotions between the characters?
- Did the characters seem IN CHARACTER?
- Did the characters with powers USE them in the story where it was needed?
- Did the Original characters worked for this story?

- What character did you like best and WHY?
- What character did you hate and WHY?
- What character got on your nerves and WHY?
- Does any one character get in the way of the STORY?
- Was there a character that would have made the story Better by being Left Out?