Please point out my grammar issues if I have any.
A certain eagle was still trying to figure out how to change his body back, but it was no use.
"What to do now?" Will wondered," Maybe I can fly around Rio a bit and see the world from another perspective."
Will thought of that and opened the window with his claw. It still took a while for him to get use to his new body.
Will looked down and realized that he's at 7th floor. That means a fall will definitely turn him into a chunk of meat. So he decided to fly indoor a bit to see if he can do the same outside.
"All right, here we go." Will prepared himself as he is about to fly. He tried to fly up but instead, he fell down and his face went straight down on the carpet.
"Ow, I flapped my wings, what happened?" Will stood up groaning at the pain.
"Well, I guess I'll have to keep trying then." Will thought as he prepared himself to fly one more time.
"We are home, kids." A blue macaw with brown eyes and bushy feathers named Blu said to his family.
"Finally, after all that flight we are home." one of Blu's kid Carla complained.
"Hey, at least we don't have to fly anymore." Blu's youngest son Tiago said.
"technically, we still have to fly back to Amazon if you don't want to be left behind." Blu's other daughter Bia replied to Tiago.
"Whatever, 'Bird Brain', don't pretend to be smart." Tiago said with his wings crossed.
"Guys, stop fighting, we are a family. We should just be happy that we got back here. How about we just rest for a while and take a shower at the waterfall. It's getting late, so we have to hurry up if you don't want to smell stink, especially you, Blu." A cerulean macaw with green eyes named Jewel winked at Blu as Blu blushed and looked away.
After that, everyone was doing their own things but Jewel was just stood on a branch and thought," Hmm… What do I want to do tonight? I can rest for a night or pay a visit to my friend. But is she still here though? after all the only friend she has is me. I hope she can be more confident and make some friends though..."
Jewel's thought was interrupted by a shout,"Jewel, we are ready to go." She jumped a little since she was still thinking about her friend.
"Woah, you scared me a bit there." Jewel said looking at Blu.
"Oh, um, sorry." Blu apologized,"And I saw that you were thinking about something."
"Yeah… It's not important. Anyways, let's head to the waterfall and clean ourself after all that flight." Jewel said.
Blu was wondering what Jewel was thinking about when they were flying over the forest,"Is she thinking about me being stinky? I don't stink, at least that's what I think, but do I though?" Blu quickly shrugged the thought off as he flew down the waterfall.
They all went down in the waterfall and began cleaning themself. Blu was simply looking at Jewel while she's preening her feather."Man, she looks so pretty when her feather shines under the sun." Blu's thought was interrupted by Tiago splashing water on Blu's face, some of them went in his eyes.
"Ow, Tiago, stop playing water, you want me to clean for you?" Blu said as he rubs his eye. Tiago remembered how hard his father's rub are. He quickly answer," Nope, I'm out of here." And Tiago just flew to the other side of the waterfall where his sibling were.
"Hey Blu, can you come here and preen my back, I can't reach it." Jewel said as she turned her back against Blu.
Blu was still nervous around Jewel even if they already had kids, so he nervously answered,"Um, sure, I guess." Blu walked behind her and started to smooth out her back feathers.
Jewel felt pleasurable to this feeling and started to moan quietly. After a few minutes of preening, Jewel turned around and said," That was great, Blu, I think you deserve a treat." Jewel kissed Blu in the beak.
Blu liked it every time when Jewel kisses him or hug him. Her sweet aura was creeping into Blu's nostril and completely dominating his sense in every way. Blu wrapped his wing around Jewel and enjoyed the kiss.
Meanwhile
"I GOT IT!" Will yelled in excitement as finally flew first time. He flew around the room excitedly just as any bird would.
Two bangs were heard on the door as Will was flying around followed by a voice," Hello? Your time is up. Please pay the bill first if you are in there." A cleaning lady was outside the room checking to see if anyone is inside.
"Oh Shoot, I better fly away or she'll come in and see me." Will was terrified for second but reclaimed his thoughts,"Ok, Let's try this again." Will prepared for this real flight.
Will opened his wings and flapped them as hard and fast as he can. Will seemed to be stable in the air but was still falling down, so he flattened his wings to get momentum from the falling. His speed was increasing so he started to flap again and regained his altitude."Wow, I'm really getting the hang of this." Will thought of this and was proud of his accomplishment.
After a few minutes of flying, he reached the forest and saw trees everywhere. "Where should I land now?" Will thought about it and had no clue where he wanted to land.
Will then saw a tall tree standing out of all the other trees and thought,"Ok, It's getting late, so I'm going to rest on one of those branches." He had a bit difficulty landing on the branch but still manages to do it.
"Well, I better get some sleep and prepare for the next morning." Will rested his head against the tree and fell asleep.
Leave a review thank you.