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after they've talked for some time, Will became hungry and said," I'm gonna go hunting, anyone wanna come?"

"I'll go with you." Maria said since the rat she ate yesterday wasn't enough to feed her and still wanted to be close to Will.

"Bye Maria, make sure don't kill everything." Rafael joked.

"We won't." Will said and flew into the jungle with Maria.

"Where is Luiz? Did he come back to Rio too?" Blu asked everyone.

"I don't think so, he said he likes Amazon and didn't want to come back." Rafael said.

"That's good, because I won't be touching that drooling dog." Jewel said with disgust, she didn't like a dog that drools in her face.

"We got nothing to do right now." Blu said boredly," We've done everything we needed to do."

"We can read books." Bia suddenly said.

"Honey, I don't think anyone here knows how to read except you and dad." Jewel said.

"But he can read it to us." Bia said again.

Just as Bia was going to hand Blu a story book, Eva flew down with her 21 kids behind her. Eva saw everyone in their hollow and greeted them.

"Hey guys." Eva said.

"Hey my love. What did you come here for?" Rafael greeted back.

"Oh just to see how my lovely mate is doing, but why don't we talk outside?" Eva said and led them out of her hollow.

"Hey Lucas, you should tell Eva how you and Julia met." Blu said to Lucas.

"So this new bird is Lucas, you are such a cute boy." Eva laughed and rubbed Lucas' head, Eva then said," Go ahead, tell me how you and Julia met."

Lucas began to tell Eva about their story and in another part of the jungle, Maria and Will were hunting for food.


"You find anything?" Maria asked Will while sitting on a branch.

"I found some dead bodies." Will forgot that falcons doesn't like to eat dead bodies.

"I rather eat fruit then eat those things." Maria said in disgust.

"Oops, I forgot that you don't eat dead bodies." Will finally realized that he wasn't hunting alone.

Maria and Will searched the jungle a little bit and finally came across a military macaw eating a mango.

"Wow, it looks fat, I can definitely eat those for days." Will said to Maria hiding in the bush.

"Yeah, just look at those delicious wings." Maria said drooling.

"I'll go to the side and you fly after him." Will said and slowly creeped at the left side of the macaw. After Maria seeing Will's in position, she darted out and came right after him. The military macaw saw her coming and immediately flew away in the opposite direction. Will took off right as the macaw flew, but he was too fast for both Will and Maria to catch since they had an empty stomach.

"We gotta catch him." Maria said but started to fall behind, but Will was determined to get their prey. He suddenly felt a rush of energy coming into him and made him fly much faster. Without Will himself even noticing that he was already in front of the macaw.

"AHH!" The military macaw said ramming directly into Will. Will quickly recovered and grabbed the military macaw by the throat.

"Woah! Did you see how fast you were going?" Maria was shocked by how fast Will accelerated.

"I don't know, it just came up to me somehow." Will was also confused about how fast he went.

"You cheated...:" The military macaw struggled to say with his throat in Will's claw.

"Well, it doesn't matter now because you are gonna die." Will mocked the macaw and laughed.

"Let's just kill him. I'm really hungry." Maria said keeping her eyes on those wings.

"Alright then." Will landed on the ground and positioned himself for the killing.

"Why does have to be me?" The military macaw said his last word. Will stood on him and strengthened his grip just like he did with the rat. Will soon felt his claw digging into the macaw's skin, and felt some blood coming out, then he watched closely how the macaw would react. The macaw just closed its eye with some tears coming out, his body twitched uncontrollably. Maria enjoyed seeing a macaw being torchured like this and decided to join in. She cut his lower body with her claws a few times, and saw the fresh blood coming out of his body. She happily licked some blood was on his feathers and moaned about how delicious it was. Will wasn't really into this torturing session so he just cracked his neck swiftly and ended his life. His claws are now filled with blood. He imagined how Blu, Jewel and their kids would react if they saw this.

"Let's eat it." Will said excitedly.

"Fresh meats are always the best." Maria said slicing the macaw's wing off. She plucked the feathers off the wing and started ripping it apart. Will didn't know that Maria liked wings that much, so he left the other wing for Maria. He first cut a hole in the body and started to take the organs out and eating it.

After a few minutes of eating, both Maria and Will felt full and carried the half eaten macaw back to their hollow. Will hid the body in a corner so no other predator can smell or get it.

He then lied down on the nest resting.

"Um Will, do you want me to stay here for the night?" Maria asked Will.

"If you got a home, then go home. I'm not forcing you to stay." Will said looking up the ceiling.

"Well, then I guess I should go now. Thanks for hunting with me by the way, I might've starved to death without you. But if you ever feel "lonely", you can always ask me to comfort you." Maria thanked Will before leaving the hollow.

"It's ok, I'm good." Will casually answered.

There was silence again in the hollow. Will was there alone lying down. He enjoyed every bit of sunset until it went down, and he was glad that he didn't kill Maria. Will thought and looked at himself. There were blood stains all over his body. The blood might dry out and get sticky, so Will got up and went to a nearby waterfall and began washing himself.


"Good luck with your relationship." Eva wished them luck as they all went back to their home.

"Thanks Eva, good luck with your kids too." Lucas replied to Eva.

"Bye guys." Rafael said goodbye to everyone and returned to his hollow with his wife and 21 kids," That was sure some conversation, wasn't it?"

"Yeah, that kid called Lucas was lucky to get a girl like Julia." Eva commented.

"I just hope nothing goes wrong." Rafael said.

Blu, Jewel and their kids returned to their hollow after some flying. Blu landed and said," I wonder how Will and Maria's hunting went."

"I bet it's brutal." Jewel said," Good thing that Will didn't see us as a prey."

"Yeah, but do you think that Erico will ever return?" Blu asked Jewel.

"I hope not, but if he does, I'll make sure he gets beat up personally by me." Jewel said angrily punching air.

"Ok calm down honey." Blu stepped back," I'm sure Will will be the first one to knock his out."

"But I still have to get revenge on him." Jewel said again.

"Mom, was Erico really bad to you?" Tiago asked.

"Yes Tiago, he's a mean bird. You don't want to be friends with him." Jewel answered Tiago.

"I'm kinda hungry, anyone want to get some dinner?" Blu asked.

"Me." They all said in unison.

"Then I'll get some mangos for you guys, just wait here till I return." Blu said as he flew away from the hollow.

"Your dad is really cute sometimes, isn't he?" Jewel asked her kids as she sees Blu flying away.

"I wouldn't say he's cute since I'm his daughter. He's more like a funny guy." Carla said from a daughter's perspective.

"You could say that, but sometimes he really tells me some random and boring fact." Jewel said," He's sometimes like a nerd, but I love the him just the way he is."

"It's a good thing that dad knows a lot of stuff, it's useful in the future."Bia said appreciating Blu's knowledge.

"Do you ever hit dad, mom?" Tiago asked.

"No." Jewel said," Ok, maybe sometimes when he's acting dumb."

"Does dad ever hit you?" Bia asked Jewel.

"Blu never hit me, he can't stand seeing me getting hurt." Jewel said smiling.

"I can see why you fell love with dad." Tiago said.

"Yep, I hated your dad first for being a pet." Jewel said," But then I saw his love for me, and I just couldn't imagine how I would react to now if I saw all this in the past."

"Hey guys I'm back with some foods." Blu landed in the hollow with some mangos in his talon. He dropped the mango and they all began eating it, and Blu asked," What did you guys talk about when I was gone?"

"Just some reasons for loving you." Jewel smiled and kissed Blu briefly which still made him blush.

"I just love to see you blush Blu." Jewel said looking at Blu's face.

"And you know just how to do it." Blu said before taking a bite on the mango.

"Where did we come from?" Bia suddenly asked.

It was the famous question that kids ask and parents always have a hard time answering that. Blu nervously said," Well, you came from eggs."

"Where did eggs come from?" Bia asked him further.

"eggs came from your mom which is from the mangos that we eat." Blu hoped that this can trick his kids.

"I don't believe that." Bia obviously know that his dad was lying.

"That's a question that you will understand when you grow up. Now let's head to the waterfall and clean our feathers." Blu escaped from the question and headed over to the waterfall.

After they arrived at the waterfall, they saw a figure standing in the beside the water. Blu got scared and said," Alright, let's go home, we can take a shower tomorrow."

Will was taking a bath near the waterfall saw five dark blue figures. He immediately knew that they were Blu, Jewel and the kids so he said hi to them," Hey guys."
Blu quickly recognized the voice and realized that it was Will, so he replied to Will," Hey Will, what are you doing so late in the lake?"

"Just washing off the blood." Will accidentally said that out loud.

"Of whom?" Jewel asked.

"Just a military macaw. It's not much trouble is it?" Will just decided to go with it.

"No, just asking." Jewel was gonna say something but decided to drop it.

"Let's just pluck the dirty feathers off and go home." Blu said.

"I'm guessing you ate that macaw right?" Tiago asked Will.

"Yes, and you wouldn't like the taste of it." Will said," It's all feathery compared to mango where you just need to eat it."

"But I still wanna try some." Tiago said mischievously.

"You are going to change your mind when you see the body. It's not just a simple cut." Will didn't want Tiago to change his diet.

"Tiago, you are too young to know these stuff. Will, don't teach Tiago about killing." Jewel said pulling Tiago into the water and washing his head.

"It's the wild, and the earlier one learns, the better chance they will have surviving." Will said.

"Yeah Yeah, but that only applies to eagle." Jewel still don't like her kids hearing about killing.

After they finished cleaning their feathers, they all went home for sleep. The kids were asleep right after their mother put them in the nest. She returns to Blu and lied down with him.

"What a day." Jewel sighed and looked at Blu who was also looking at her.

"It would been boring without you." Blu said to Jewel which she take as a compliment.

"You are so sweet Blu." Jewel said as she kissed Blu in the beak.

"I love you Jewel." Blu said breaking the kiss.

"I love you too Blu." Jewel said falling asleep in his wings.

Will got back to his hollow and lied down on the nest again. He wasn't very sleepy first but consciousness was slowly taken away from him and eventually he completely closed his eye and fell asleep.


Will's dream

"Where am I again?" Will looked around and saw him again," You again?"

"Happy to see me?" He said.

"I don't know, I'm just sleeping." Will answered," And what was that speed boost when I was hunting with Julia?"

"That was your one of your powerups, and I'm here to give you another reward for an achievement." The creature said.

"Which one this time?" Will asked.

"You successfully killed and ate a prey." He said reading off a paper.

"But what about the rat I caught yesterday?" Will asked again.

"Did you eat it?" He asked back.

"No." Will said.

"Then it didn't count." He said," I gave you some more powerups that you'll need in the future, and look in your claws."

Will felt something pop up in his claws and he immediately looked down and saw a small can-thing with a ring attached to it, and it says M84 on it.

"What is this?" Will asked curiously.

"It's a flashbang." He said," Pull the ring and throw it."

Will pull the ring out of it and threw it on the ground. He payed close attention to what was going to happen. The flashbang went off and completely blinded Will's vision and deafened his ears.

"AHH! WHAT THE HECK?" Will took a few seconds to open his eyes again. He tried to search for that creature but he was nowhere to be seen.

"He always does the weirdest things." Will thought before going to sleep again.

Got them powerups, Does anyone read this line?