Bonus chapter for all my amazing reviews, thank you!

Tobias POV

Then there was a high pitched scream and an ear-splitting 'BANG' from outside my apartment door.

Gunshot.

The sound bewilders me as soon as I hear it, I'm immune to hearing the crack and rattle of a gun that is far away being in Dauntless, but the sound of the gun going off bursts through my ears as if I was standing right next to it. I jump off the couch and run to the door screaming for Tris to get out of the shower. Half a minute later Tris is out of the shower dressed and running towards the door like me. I swing open the door and race down the hallway to where I heard the close gunshot.

My heart pounds to the beat of my feet, racing over the hard cold concrete ground in the corridor. I sprint faster with curiosity and fear taking over. What if it was Uriah or Zeke? Will or Christina? Someone else I know well? I ran like death was chasing me.

Abruptly, I stop and Tris runs straight into my back.

We had reached the crime scene.

His blood was encircled around his dead body, a half –dried stream of crimson blood poured out of his mouth. His body laid in a way that I could not tell who the face belong to. His shirt was ripped apart and he lay in a pool of his own crimson blood. I examine the dark corridor around me, Dauntless members of all ages start to flood out of their apartments around me to investigate the disturbing, ear-splitting sound that we all should be used to. That's the thing about a gun, sometimes even if a person is experienced it can still affect you mentally and sometimes physically.

I step around the corpse noticing the clean bullet hole in the top of the man's head. His body lays motionless and white: all colour drained from his face. I step even closer to realize who the person is.

Max.

Max: the Dauntless Leader, dead? This can't be right I think to myself, he was a good person! Or was he?

Since I am an instructor I can usually tell wither a gunshot has hesitation in it or simply if the person holding the deathly object has lack of skills. This one seemed keen to make the helpless victim dead. Who would want to kill someone so badly?

But then again there's an old saying about those who cannot remember the past being condemned to repeat it. But those of us who refuse to forget the past are condemned to relieve it.

Revenge is a dish best served cold. A cold blooded murderer more like.

I look up at Tris in shock as she realizes as well that it is Max. We stare stunned at each other not speaking.

'Four! What on earth happened?!' Zeke shouts from a far jogging up to the scene just like Tris and I did.

'It's Max,' I pause 'He's dead.'

Shock punches Zeke in the face. He stands there, mouth slightly open, body unmoving and staring at me and the corpse wide-eyed.

'Who killed him?! Did you?' Zeke says regaining his voice.

'No,' I say forcefully, quite hurt that he would think I would kill Max for no reason. 'I am not sure who did. I only heard the noise of the gun being shot, which was all.' As soon as I explain myself to Zeke, many Dauntless members come rushing over. Some of which I don't know. I stand up over the crowd which is expanding with extra members every minute each one having shock creep over their face. They are used to deaths; it is Dauntless after all, but not one like this. One where a leader gets killed right in the middle of a corridor, which has I'm sure cameras and witnesses. I look upwards towards the hidden cameras that only a handful of people know about, both camera lenses are broken.

That is not a good sign.

The crowd starts whispering over each other and I can't stand it, I gaze over to Tris and she nods.

'Everyone listen up!' I pause and they all go dead silent 'Max has been shot,' I shout over the crowd in my intimidating Four voice. 'And unfortunately there is nothing we can do about it. Max lived a fulfilling and action-packed fearless life; he was a good man and a good leader. It is not right for him to die so young' I look at Tris and notice she is smiling so I go on. I suddenly remember something. 'In Dauntless we believe in facing fear no matter what the cost to our comfort, our happiness, or even our sanity. This is what Max has done, showing us that whatever he died for was to show that he believed that pain and death are better than cowardice and inaction because we believe in action!' An extremely loud roar escapes all the members in the crowd around me. The atmosphere has changed entirely in a spilt second because of the bravery Max had, even though no one knows why he actually died or who killed him. 'Immediately we will find out who killed our magnificent leader! And that person will be put to death!' I continue. They all shout and bang any object they can find and eventually start departing from the corridor after a glancing at Max's corpse.

'Quite a leader Four,' Tris says to me as she walks closer to me. I laugh. Zeke, Uriah, Will and Christina walk towards us.

'Wow Four that was quite a speech,' Zeke says, I nod giving him my gratitude.

'Tris what on earth are you wearing?!' Christina asks Tris. After Tris rushed out of the shower she only had time to put on some jogging black shorts and my long black top. She blushed out of embarrassment.

'I heard the gunshot and quickly came out of the shower because I was worried about Four and I quickly grabbed the first thing I saw Christina!' Tris says defensively.

Then I remember our little food fight prior Max's death and I remembered I hadn't showered. Thankfully I had put a clean tee-shirt on and most of the flour in my hair was removed when I put my hands in it, but I still looked a mess. We stand a few feet away from Max's corpse because it, in all honestly, smells disgusting. I listen to Tris talk to Christina, Will, Uriah and Zeke while I watch some people in black hoods- that cover their face- take away Max's body and clean up the mess. I slowly drift into a daze, not listening to any conversation.

Tris POV

Horrified at some of today events, I glumly start talking to Christina, Will, Uriah and Zeke after they walk towards us. I am so ecstatic and proud of Tobias, he stood up in front of everyone and made a speech which meant a great deal to the members of Dauntless who looked up to Max and respected him. Standing awkwardly in a pair of jogging shorts and Tobias' long big black top, I blush out of embarrassment when Christina mentions my clothes. I stare at Tobias he still has a few bits of food on him, but not noticeable if you weren't staring. I see Tobias go off into a gaze watching these men in black hoods -hiding their face- take Max's body away; it reminds me a lot of my fear landscape. I take Tobias hand and he snaps out of his daze and looks at me.

'Christina, can I talk to you in half an hour? I want to discuss with you something in private,' I ask knowing I haven't told her about me moving in with Tobias.

'Yes sure,' she replies. 'See you then! Come on Will let's go' With that, the four of them left, leaving Tobias and I alone.

'Come on then let's get the rest of that whipped cream off you,' I whisper to Tobias trying to distract him from the events that just happened. He laughs.

'Maybe you can help me get it off?' He winks and I laugh and we walk hand-in-hand back to his apartment.

'Wow' is the first thing I say once I enter Tobias's apartment. 'That was an eventful morning' I continue.

'It certainly was' Tobias responds glumly. Sort off exhausted, we slump down on the loveseat couch, processing the events that just happened in silence. I put my feet up and snuggle up to him.

'The food fight was definitely fun, but uh Max's death not so much' Tobias nods and kisses my cheek. 'Who do you think killed him?' I continue

'That is a question that has been pondering my mind ever since we found him; it's got to be out of revenge'

'Possibly, who has he wronged in the past? Maybe if we know that we will be able to figure out who killed him'

'Yes, we will need to investigate'

'I agree' we sit there silently both consumed in thoughts. I then break the silence and I say:

'Tobias I'm going to get change, and you need to shower!' He laughs and I kiss him. Just as I am about to get up and leave to get dress he pulls me back into his lap and starts kissing me again. My thoughts wonder off to the moment when we were making out on the counter.

He kisses my sensitive spot on the side of my neck, and I try to convince myself that I could just stay in his embrace forever when I interrupt us kissing yet again.

'I really need to go now' He doesn't seem to be listening, he kisses me again and our kiss intensifies his hands moves to my back under my shirt and slides up giving me chills. Suddenly he reaches my bra strap and is about to take it off.

'Tobias!' I shout and I jump out of his lap, he looks at me in shock.

'Don't do that to me! I have to go now' I shout angrily, he has a look on shock and surprise on his face.

'I'm so sorry Tris, I didn't mean too…' He says stuttering. 'I just got carried away' He finishes.

I walk into the bedroom and change into normal clothes, a couple minutes later I walk back out and Tobias is sitting on the couch with his hands covering his face.

'Look, I'm not angry just you got carried away, I need to see Christina now. Go get in the shower, I'll see you in the Pit' I say pleasantly and kiss his cheek, only his cheek.

XPAGEBREAKX

Confused thoughts fly through my head. Why did I push him away? Why did I snap at him? It's not like I was angry knowing that he wanted me it just seemed ... Like he was rushing it. I reach Christina's door and try to set aside my confusion and worries, no need for them right now. I knock twice because I don't want to walk into someone half naked for the second time this morning.

'It's me, Tris!' I shout

'It's open!' she shouts

I open the door and enter the room, it's a smaller room from the one I have just been in and it has makeup and hair products everywhere something you will never find in Tobias apartment.

'Christina I need to tell you something' I begin, I'm really not sure how I should explain. She comes and sits with me on her bed and I start explaining 'I know this isn't a great time with Max sudden death but' I pause and she looks at me

'Go on' she says encouragingly.

'The other day, Tobias arranged this most amazing romantic date, we went outside the compound to this spot where you could see the beautiful sunset, we had a picnic and champagne and Christina he said he loves me!'

'What did you say back?!' She said happily and excitedly at the same time

'I said I love him back!' Now we were both smiling.

'There was another thing; he asked… he asked me to move in with him. And I said… yes. I'm sorry I know you wanted to get an apartment together but I love Tobias and I want to spend the rest of my life with him'

'Tris that is so romantic! I'm so happy for you!'

'You're not mad?'

'No, I understand and besides I might move in with Will, but that might be too much, we haven't said we love each other yet, although I know I love him.' She pauses. 'I'm so happy for you!' She exclaims.

'Thank you!' I pull her into a friendly hug and we laugh together since I'm from Abnegation and I don't hug a lot.

'On another note, you got all that flour out?' I laugh and blush in embarrassment.

'How much did you hear?' I ask her.

'Well what you were saying not a lot, just there was loads of screaming and laughing, Zeke thought you were doing it. We all thought it when Four opened the door shirtless'

'We were not!' I almost scream in embarrassment.

'haha don't worry Tris, we know you weren't but it did raise some eyebrows when we saw Four shirtless, dam he is good looking.' I glare at her.

'Oh come on even Zeke thinks he is good looking, Four choose you Tris don't forget that' that made me think, why would he choose me? Out of all the other girls… Suddenly I'm taking into a daze and Christina has to snap her fingers to bring me back into reality.

'We better go, we have to go to the Pit now, and I'm meeting Four.' I say

'Ok let's walk together.' She grabs her jacket and we make our way to the Pit.

XPAGEBREAKX

Christina rumbles on about something-probably something girly- and I zoom out, nodding my head ever so often so she thinks I am listening to her. I am startled when I see a black silhouette standing in the dark shadows surrounding the pit. I stare at it intensely trying to figure out who exactly it is; Tobias has stood in the dark shadows like that before. I tell Christina that I will meet with her in a couple of minutes and I wonder off to this mystery silhouette standing in the darkness.

Her icy cold hands wrap around my neck, suffocating me. She pulls me away from the pit pushing me against the wall. I can't breathe. My head throbs and my heart pounds she chucks my head against the concrete cold wall. Black spots appear in my vision and I am holding on to my last breath. I try to scream but I can't. My eyes burn with tears as I wait for my impending doom, all I can see is straight hair. Then my vision is gone. And she whispers in my ear:

'You saw what I did to Max; I can easily do that to you. Don't get in the way.'

And the familiar voice is gone.

I drift off, unconscious.