Snippets – The A/U Saga

By

Landon Richardson

Official Disclaimer

The characters of Steve McGarrett, Danny Williams, Chin Ho Kelly, Grace Williams and Rachel Edwards do not belong to me in any fashion. I am merely using him for my own entertainment purposes.

The characters of Danielle 'Danni' Richardson , David, Richardson, Riley King, Jack O'Connor and Louisa Palakiko-Cowan do belong to me however so please don't use them without first asking permission.

Author Note

Here's another snippet for you.

Sorry for the delay in getting it out to you but life has been busy. This snippet will definitely be turned into a full blown story though I'm not quite sure when yet. I need to either figure out how to fit another story into my already hectic writing schedule or finish off some of the other ones so I'm not juggling so many. To be honest it will most likely be option number two.

This story features both male and female Danny/Danni so please enjoy

Official Summary

A glimpse into the McDanni world featuring lots of Romance, drama and gun fights, babies and a whole lot more (Based on the Danni A/U saga)

Official Romances for the story

Eventual Steve McGarrett / Danielle 'Danni' McGarrett (McDanni)

Many others which are to be decided still

Other note

Please keep in mind that I don't have a Beta for this story so the odd mistake may creep in without me meaning it to. I have also never been to Hawaii so all locations are either from the show, google or made up in my own mind.


Snippet Number Thirty Four


"Rogue team leader we have a visual on the Embassy, we're moving into position now." The voice was soft, barely above a whisper in Steve McGarrett's ear but he heard it all the same from where he lay on the grassy verge, his body completely still as he stared at their target through the scope attached to his sniper rifle.

"Roger that Hermes, when you get in position remain there until you receive my orders to move out."

He moved his face away from the scope, tilting his head back so he could look at the large full moon in the dark sky above them. A full moon which was being used to the fullest by the terrorists they were after. If the information they had gathered over the past few days was anything to go by then they were going to move their hostages that very night.

Steve turned his head, meeting the eyes of Apollo and nodded once at him. Apollo returned the gesture, silently moving into a crouch before he moved away from Steve to take up his own position, leaving the older man alone on the verge where he had set up his equipment. It was beyond important that they didn't screw any portion of this mission up. He wanted to be in and out of that death trap quick and fast. He wanted though terrorists to be taken out with minimum fuss because they burned the embassy to the ground and all of this before the local law enforcement had any idea what was going on in their own town.

It was what his team did best after all.

Steve shifted slightly on the spot, bringing his wrist to his mouth and spoke, his voice barely audible in the heavy silence.

"Report in troops" He commanded.

"Rogue one in position Commander" Came the first response, the voice low and calm.

"Rogue two is ready to hit hard and fast when you give the word Commander."

"Rogue team three are all present.

Steve nodded his head, his eyes narrowing slightly as he waited for his fourth team to respond to him, a flicker of unease grew in his stomach though none of it reflected in his voice when he spoke.

"Rogue team four, do you copy me? Please respond."

The silence continued for a second before the familiar crackling sound occurred and a quiet male voice spoke.

"Sorry Commander, we just had a stray civilian to deal with, we're all present and ready for action" Steve closed his eyes briefly, breathing out silently as he said a silent prayer of thanks before he spoke again.

"Rogue team two has Apollo reached you yet?"

"That's a positive Commander; Baby Apollo has reached has us safe and sound is currently subjecting us to his world famous bitch face." Steve couldn't help the grin which came to his face at the comment. He had been subjected to that expression more times than he cared to remember in the past.

"Everyone is aware of what needs to be done tonight" He commented firmly. "We get in and we get out, fast, quick and dirty as usual. I'll be joining Rogue team one, hold steady and wait for my signal before moving out.

"Yes Commander" Four voice whispered back to him. Steve inched back on the grass coming to his knees, his gaze snapping to the side of him just as his second in command appeared silently next to him.

"You know what to do Riley?" He asked. The other man snorted, shooting Steve an offended look.

"What do I suddenly look like a frigging novice to you McGarrett?" He demanded, an undercurrent of amusement to his voice. "I always know what you do, now get your ass out of my space and get to your team before I shoot you with your own damn sniper rifle." He stated, grumbling to himself as he slid easily into the position Steve had just moved out of, his eyes already glued to the scope. Steve grinned, shaking his head before he moved, his movement sure and graceful in the darkness. He had come here earlier with two members of his team to scope out the terrain well in advance for their operation. The last thing he wanted or needed was to fuck up their mission over something as small as land placement.

He climbed down the hill, heading towards the team situated closest to the building. It felt as though he was alone out there in the darkness but he knew better, Out there, hidden away from eyesight was his team of highly advances SEAL and Intel officers. A team which had painstakingly brought together because they were the best his country had to offer. He trusted each and every one of the men and women under his command with his life. Hell he would die for them if it came down to it. They were a family and if there was one thing Steve McGarrett had been taught it was that you protected your family with everything you had.

He reached up and ran a hand through his short dark brown hair, kicking casually as the grass. Anyone who happened to see him would think nothing of him; they would simply have assumed he looked like a man in his mid thirties taking a casual walk obviously thinking over something. His clothes reflected his cover, looking casual though the muted colours and materials of them was anything but casual.

"Commander" a hissed whisper said from the side of him.

Steve shifted, glancing around him once before he dropped from sight, crawling along the ground until he was side by side with the leader runner of Rogue team one.

"Anything happen while I was making my way down here? Any change in circumstances?" He demanded. The man shook his head.

"Nothing, take a look for yourself Commander" He stated, holding out a pair of binoculars to him. Steve glanced down at them before he took them bringing them up to his eyes and staring through them. He nodded once in satisfaction before he handed them back.

"Ready?" He asked the team he was with, waiting until each and every one of them had nodded at him, all of them with an identical glint in their eyes which told him that every member was full of adrenaline, focused on the job and ready to kick some terrorists ass. A grim smile came to his face as he lifted his wrist to his mouth again. "Rogue teams are you ready to move?"

"This is rogue team two, we were ready to move out hours ago Commander, lets get this show on the god damn road and gank us some bitches while we're still young enough to do it." Steve smirked, shaking his head at Pluto's comment.

"This is rogue team three, we're in complete agreement with loud-mouth Pluto. Let's go and kick some ass."

"Rogue team four is ready and willing, give the word Commander and we'll move out."

"That word is given, move out Rogue teams"

The team with Steve came to their feet instantly, all jokes and banters put aside as they hit their night vision goggles and moved silent across the long grass as though they were one. If Steve hadn't been aware that they were there then he would never have seen or heard them coming.

They reached the building, moving swiftly round the back of it, meeting up with Rogue team four who was led by Uriel, teams two and three would storm the front way, blocking off possible exits from the building, if any did manage to get out then Riley was primed and ready up on the verge to take them out one by one.

Steve moved to the space by the door, pointing his finger towards Jack who nodded, pulling out a small device from his pocket and attaching it to the door, he waved them away, pressing a button on the machine and jogging over to them. There was a delay of five seconds before the door exploded inwards and they were moving in.

The mission was underway.


Author Note

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