Hello everyone happy holidays, so I don't know why I thought I could work on this during the holidays. But I guess i forgot how crazy they get. Side note Im adding title to future chapters. Anyway hope you all enjoy


Bad First Impression pt. 1

"Fucking great." Dove thought to himself standing arms cross. "After this shit storm of a mission we be lucky to get cleaning duty at the toilets, much less promoted ever again."

Glaring to his side he look over Jaune weakly breathing with Ren mumbling some gibberish, his hands on the wound and Alice holding the idiot with tears in her eyes.

Dove clutched his sword in frustration, If they made it out alive the others would praise the actions of Jaune and his friends over Dove and his team. They be promoted on the spot while His team will defiantly be disgraced and punished for is poor actions.

The thought of them being a higher rank then him made Dove sick to his stomach. But he almost smiled looking closer at Jaune. The wound was deep, too deep for him to survive.

Dove turned to see Cardin try to salvage the group, repeating the same speech Jaune made before. Almost laughing at the irony of him trying to replace Jaune, giving Dove an idea to save his career.

With Cardin going nowhere why not join Ren and Alice. After Jaune dies the two of them will be stricken with grief and who better to comfort them.

With a few gestures and words they would open up to him and carry him higher in the ranks. He hoped a Grimm would slip past the others to attack them, he jump in and save them earning their tru...

In the corner of his eye a light caught his attention, looking to the source he found the impossible.

Jaune coughing and groaning in pain was supported by a tired looking Ren and a crying Alice holding the Knight.

"Bullshit!" He Screamed in his mind. "That bastard was as good as dead, a second ago what the hell happened."

Looking at the three enraged Dove. With Jaune alive he had no chance of getting into the group now. They would be promoted and he would have to gravel at their feet.

In his rage a voice whispered in his mind, "What if Jaune didn't recover, what if a Grimm attacked and killed them while the others were looking away. It too loud for the others to hear, and it would only take one swing, with them together like that. Their death would rally the others. With Cardin and us leading them we would take back our place on top."

The Voice made sense, he would die, then gravel at their feet. "No one is looking." Dove gripped his sword, raised to strike. Till a loud noise silenced the cave.

Dove stopped, pain ached in his chest. He lowered a hand to the spot, lifting it to see it stained with blood. His sword slipped from his hand breaking the silence the others looked at him. He tried to speak to say anything.

But only a gasp escaped and his world turned to black.

Jaune slowly opened his eyes, his vision blurry he could make out his friends holding him up right, but something was at his feet.

His sight returning, he realized Dove was dead before him. He turned to his friends for answers but stopped by the expression on their face. Following their eyes he looked ahead.

Past the wall of soldiers, through the Grimm a more intimidating sight was walking closer to them.

Each member was unique, different weapons and armor but all had their faces covered. A symbol was brandish on their armor. A beast roaring, mouth opened baring fangs chipped and damaged.

All the Fang had a pressure to them, even the newest warriors felt it. But three dwarfed the others.

Smallest of the three, dawning a red cloak and hood their face remained in shadow. The tip still smoking they lowered a red staff to their side. With skill and dexterity the staff rotated in their hands. Metal shifting and snapping the staff extended, catching the extension behind them, the top opened releasing a large curved blade.

The soldiers stared at the sight, as if looking at a child of death.

Their gaze was broken with the cry of a beast in pain and childlike humming.

Riding on top of a beaten and bloody Ursa a girl hummed cheerfully to herself. Her face covered with a helm sprouting wing to the side. Swing a metal hammer as if it were made of wood she leaped from the beast as it collapsed. Looking back as if a toy just broke, she shrugged and continue to get closer.

As the others looked at the two, Jaune focused on the one in the middle. Covered in Bronze armor the figure lead the group. In one hand a shield shined as if it were a polished mirror. In the other a shorten sword held firm.

They stopped and the others followed suit.

The Grimm grew wrestles, waiting. The Fang and Grimm faced each other.

In sync the Bronze warrior raised their sword as the Grimm roared signaling the battle. The three stood waiting as the other Fang rushed the Grimm.

The Squad watched silently shocked. Fewer in number the Fang faced the Grimm and was winning. Each holding their own against multiple Grimm.

"Fools" A soldier spoke aloud. "Their repeating our mistake of charging head on. The Grimm will attack relentlessly and pick them off one by…"

The soldier stopped mouth still open, as light flooded the cave. The Fang started to emit light.

Seeing the light the Grimm roared with unseen ferocity, attacking wildly and savage, let the Fang did not falter. With team work and skill the Grimm number dwindled.

Jaune standing on his own watched with the others. Retreat was the only though in his mind.

Looking to his friends he signaled them to the exit. Both nodded started to pass the message along as they moved slowly back.

Alice whispering to Jaune "If we're quite the fang will be too busy fighting the Grimm to notice use rig-("I refuse!")-ht, shit."

Turning to the commotion all eyes fell on Cardin. "We found the Fang, this is our chance to take them out! This is opportunity knocking guys! Weird light or not they will be weak after fighting the Grimm and we out number them."

Finishing his speech a bronze knife whipped pasted his face striking the soldier behind him in the head.

All looked ahead to see the last of the Grimm dead with the Fang cleaning the blood off their weapons. In front the three stood looking back with the hammer girl shaking her head at them.

"FUCK THIS!" Russel Screamed running to the exit.

Surprised Jaune, Alice and Ren looked back to see some of the other soldiers following Russel.

"Cowards!" Alice shouted at the runners.

Jaune felt his heart sink as comrade after comrade started to turn their back to them to flee. The pain was replaced with a feeling of danger. His eyes scanning for it stopped on a speck of white that grew brighter.

"Watch out!" He tried to warn but it was too late.

At the entrance of the tunnel pillars of Ice grew from the ground, trapping the runners including Russel.

Standing to the side, a figure in white approach gliding on the ground. She wore a white gown cut short at the knees. Her face was covered with a veil let it was obvious she held her head high and looked down on them. In her hand she held a thin sword decorated with different colors on the hilt.

"Nice one Ice queen, guess you stopped them dead~" Breaking composure the girl in white rubbed her forehead at the comment.

Landing next to her a girl wearing a brown corset extenuating her bust with a yellow jacket. She had a gold band around each wrist leading into a black glove. Her face was covered with a mask but was cut short letting her golden hair free. "Come on it wasn't that bad, stop giving me the cold shoulder~."

Behind the girls more Fang landed behind them, snickering or groaning at the two.

"Well there goes are escape route. Guess its sink or swim now." Drawing his blades Ren stood facing the rear as Alice and Jaune took to the front.

Still holding his side Alice gave a concerned look to Jaune who was looking around trying to form a plan but his thoughts where cut short.

"Kill or be Killed!" Rushing ahead Cardin ran straight for the Bronze warrior. Sky following behind him.

The Fang and the warrior gave no efferent to stop him as he raise his mace to strike their head. With a cry he brought it down. For it to miss. Sky jumped ready to stab with his halberd.

"On your left." Turning to the voice Sky looked to be slammed into the ground by a hammer. "Sorry meant your other left." Nora sand standing over the imprint of Sky.

Again and again Cardin swung with all his might to hit them but each time the mace curved away from the warrior.

Frustrated he tried to hit their stomach with a thrust. This time the Warrior raised their shield which seemed to draw the mace to it. Blocking the attack the Warrior pointed their sword at Cardin, in a blink of the eye it extended into a spear striking his arm.

Eyes shut from the pain he did not see the next attack. Pulling the spear out the Bronze Warrior kick him in the chin lifting him into the air, landing the Warrior continued slashing his chest with the now shorten spear followed by an upper cut and kick to send him back to the squad.

The squad was silent, till Cardin gasped for air with grunts of pain. "Well at least the bastard tough." Alice commented looking to Jaune that now had terrified expression on his face. "Jaune?"

"Fuck, FUCK, FUCK! How do we fight that?" Ignoring Alice, Jaune continued to think. "Retreatisout, headonisout, weoutnumberthembuttheyaremoreskilled. MaybeRencouldtakeAliceawayif…"

"Jaune!" A voice brought him back, seeing a concerned Alice looking at him. He stopped.

.Pulse from the stone.

Full alert Jaune noticed the figure in Red disappear, a trail of rose petals drifted to the right. Turning he caught a Red blur move towards them.

Raising his shield he felt a force hit.

Alice was watching Jaune, he picked his head up and… vanished.

A loud scrapping of metal hitting metal screamed behind her. Turning she found Jaune holding back a Red scythe. Looking close the figure in red was also a girl.

Just as shocked the girl in red jumped back to gain some distance. Jaune moved after her not giving her the chance.

Jaune raced after her thinking. "Attack, don't give her time to act."

Moving back the girl was not as quick, Jaune kept to her pace. Panicked she swept at his legs to stop his advance.

Jumping over the giant blade he dodge the attack, the girl continued to turning with the momentum of her weapon leaving her back exposed.

Taking the advantage Jaune was ready to strike.

.Pulse.

Stopping his attack he waited, hidden behind her cloak, the end of her scythe come into view.

Parrying the tip with his shield he pushed the weapon up exposing her body. Bring his sword down he missed her body as she jolted back.

Off balanced the girl struggled to keep her footing, Jaune readied for another attack, looked at her. She was looking up and smiling.

.Pulse.

Stopping short he slide in the ground to slow his speed. Striking the ground in front of him he saw a pair of yellow eyes behind a white mask of an animal. Another girl she wore black leather armor, around her arms a purplish dark ribbons dangled freely. And, and, a Black Bow? Jaune looked confused at the girl who looked back just as confused.

"Again!" she said in frustration. Freeing her blades from the ground she stood glaring at Jaune who only felt the stone start to repeatedly pulse.

"I'm okay" Ruby said as she was face first in the ground.

Back at the squad after Jaune left cashing the Ruby, Yang and Weiss both panicked as Jaune chased her down.

"RED!" Both girls shouted before charging towards the squad and Jaune.

Whipping both arms down the blonde girl's gold bands on her wrists started to expand and move up her arm. Charging forward she burst into the squad launching members in the air with a fire explosion.

The girl in white spinning the hilt of her sword summoned white circles on the ground using them to propel her around the squad.

The blonde girl was punching anyone in her way clearing a path until. A flash of green moved in front of her next thing she knew she was on the ground. Looking up at a green robe and pink eyes.

"Fine you want to go!" Punching the ground as she got up. Ren responded by getting into his stance.

Weiss noticing the lack of explosions turned to see what happened. Quickly she summoned another glyph launching her in the air.

"Shit." Below her Alice cursed as she speed by below.

Both hands on her sword she squared off. "Sorry you aren't going anywhere. Plus never took you for the red lace type." Alice Smirked.

Back on the ground Weiss glared at the person in her way a bit red in the cheeks. "Bitch."


So first of all I am nervous how you all will react to the fights. First time doing them and they are a lot of fun but I want to hear everyone thoughts. Second written both teams and having then interact is way to much fun and I will defiantly not abuse Yang and her puns... Third posting the first part tonight and will post the other... well depending on time zones and all might be in the same day. Anyway I still have that holiday gift for you guys so look forward to it. Hint I did say this story would have sex so Maybe a little something something will happen.

A quick side note for all of you reading this its going to be a long story and I can promise its going to get better, not just my skill with written but I got a lot up my sleeves to explained the story and make it even greater. IN truth I had a plan laid out for this to be just a harem but like i said in the other chapters it grew and I got a story going with it. So maybe new and old faces will pop up maybe new Grimm.

So what IM trying to say is we are just getting started.

With that all said. Please comment or review I like the feed back and what your guys are thinking. Thanks for reading I hope you enjoyed it.