"TRIS!" I hear Tobias shout as he runs out of the hut thingy. "Tris I'm so sorry I didn't mean that please, please don't hate me." He pleads as he gets closer to me. I shake my head.

"Tobias I don't hate you but I'm still going back to the asylum." I state as I pull away from Will's grip. I turn and run through the woods. I hear shouting behind me and the pounding of running footsteps trailing after me. I reach the end of the woods and I stand in a large clearing. The asylums watch tower is the only thing I can see but I see the bar we stopped at from here. I run in the direction of the pub, hoping I can stay there until morning because it's almost nightfall. I reach the amber colored wooden building and open the door, a soft 'jingle' signaling a customer is here.

A group sits at the bar and I sigh. I was hoping I'd be alone.

"Oh, blondie, where's your hottie boyfriend?" Nita asks and I sigh.

"It's a long story." I mumble, sitting on the last bar stool next to a girl with a half shaved head and many piercings.

"You look like you've had a hard day kid, get her a drink on me." A guy says from down the bar but I shake my head.

"I don't drink." I state and they all laugh, my face burns until I realize that they're laughter is fueled purely on cheap liquor.

"Where you from Love?" A guy asks, walking up to me.

I raise an eyebrow.

"What makes you think you can talk to me?" I ask and the bar fills with drunken laughter.

"Listen blondie." He says, grabbing my arm and pulling me off the bar stool. "No one talks to me like that. Got it?" He pulls me against him and I stay quiet.

"Let her go Matthew." The girl I was sitting next to says,standing up.

"No, Lynn, I'm not letting this little bitch talk to me like that."

"Let me the fuck go asshole" I hiss and he raises an eyebrow, a smirk playing at his thin lips.

"Or what?" He asks and the door busts open.

"Why the hell are you touching my girlfriend?!" I hear Tobias shout and the bar goes deadly silent.

Matthew lets my arm go and backs up.

"Look man I was just playin around no need to get violent okay?"

Tobias walk up to him, grabs the collar of his shirt and lifts him about five inches off the ground.

"If you ever, ever lay a hand on her again I won't hesitate to kill you. Got it?!" He shouts and I flinch. Matthew nods and Tobias lets him drop to the flood with a thud. "Tris are you okay?" He asks walking over to me and I nod.

"Look I'm sorry about him he had a bit too much to drink." Lynn sighs, running a hand through the hair on half of her head.

Ok guys this is going to be a long A/N but pls read the whole thing. It's nothing too bad I swear XD

So I'm stressed af. I have to catch up on so much late schoolwork, I have writing, I'm in a play now, and I want to have a social life somewhere I. There too. Pebbles (peb that's ur new nickname), I can't write that story at the moment. Maybe in a couple of months or something but I don't have the time I'm sorry ?. BL2000, we need to start writing for the dare and the oddly shippable lemons stories. Oh And if someone could after every chapter of this story could you send me the reviews..they don't show up for me.

Also I have a couple ideas for fanfictions that I need your guys's opinions on. Do you want The Work back? Or maybe Dauntless Love back? That would have to go on YAHBL2000. I also want to do one where tris is a gamer girl and plays DOA (dead or alive) competitively. And I'm writing one where Tobias is in a band. But that could be one of two ways. Tris is also in a band and it's a battle of the bands and her and Tobias broke up a while ago but he's trying to win her back. Or Tobias is a pop-rock star and falls for Tris when he sees her in the crowd of one of his shows in his home town. My mind is just flooded with ideas for everything but this story.

-EmoFangirlEaton