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this chapter is more of a filler and I'm trying to answer all the questions and next update will b bit late as I will b busy in IF contest
Abhijeet was working at his desk but now and then looking at the main entrance
his wait ended as ACP sir walked in, Abhijeet stood up "sir mujhe aapse kuch baat krni hey"
ACP sir looked at Abhijeet and found tension clear in his behavior so nodded with "cabin mey ayo baat krte hey"
Abhijeet followed him inside the cabin and ACP sir asked him to take a seat
aftr seating without any introduction he started straightly with "mujhe aapse Daya ki bareme baat krni hey sir"
ACP sir nodded
"sir aap Daya ko Tiwari ki case se hata dijiye..aur bhi kayi cases hey humare pass aap usme Daya ko engage kr dijiye"
ACP sir frowned "mtlb..kya bol rahe ho Abhijeet? Aur kyun hatau Daya ko iss case se?usne kya kiya"
Abhijeet shook his head "nahi sir usne kuch nahi kiya..per yea case..sir sayed isse Daya ka koi past jura hua ho.."
"kaise?"
Abhijeet explained whatever Daya told him and aftr listening to the whole carefully ACP asked "yea sb information Daya ne pehle kabhie nahi nikala?use to humesha se hi apni pehchan ki khoj thi.."
Abhijeet sighed "mere jehen mey bhi yea baat ayi, per Daya se kuch pucha nahi..wo bahut dstrb hey..meine Little Lilly ki head se baat ki subha.. Unka kehna hey Daya ki records mey sare information nahi hey, police ko tab laga tha ki Daya ek lauta eye witness hey to uspey hamla ho skta hey,murder case kabhie bhi re open ho skta hey to ager Daya ko kabhie wo sab yaad ajye to..isliye unhone Daya ki formal documents mey koi pehchan nahi rakha aur informally tab ki jo head they unhe confidence mey le liya..per der saal bad hi unka tabadla ho gaya aur Daya bhi Raghuvendra sir ki woha chala gaya documents ki mutabik to kuch nahi tha.."
"fir kal.."
"Daya ne tab ki head se mila..unhe dhundli dhundli baat pata thi, fir police se records nikale aur apne papa ki saath kaam krne wale ek police wale se bhi mila..kahi pey apni pehchan nahi diya bas as cid inspector sb pata laga liya.."
ACP sir thought fr a moment "waise Daya hey kaha?"
"wo sorry sir mein apko dena hi vul gaya..(he forwarded envelope) Daya ka leave application do din ka"
ACP sir kept it aside and gave a questioning glance to Abhijeet
"use Panchgani jana hey apne purane gher..kal nahi ja paya..aur bhi kuch sayed plan hey bataya nahi"
ACP sir nodded "hmm pareshan to hoga..bahut taqleef mey bhi tum use case se nikalke aur taqleef to nahi de rahe ho?"
"sir usne kal jo jaise baat ki usmey kuch alag si junun thi..ek aag..badle ka..mujhe darr hey sir yea aag dusro ko jalane se pehle kahi khud use jala de to?"
"Abhijeet ager uspey junun sawar hey to tumhe lagta hey mein use case pey officially kaam nahi krna dunga to wo apne basis pey kuch nahi krega? Tab to wo sari baatein bhi chupayega kya wo aur jyada.."
"sir per ager usne kuch.."
"Daya ko lautne do fir mein baat krta hu,tum tension mat lo.."
Abhijeet nodded and moved out of the cabin.
During the whole day work only one thing was roaming in his mind
"kal ko ager mere smne aisa koi situation aye to mein kya karunga?mera bhi to dil krega ki mein unn logo ko jinke wajah se jindegi ne beinteha dard aur sawal diye mujhe unn logo ko aise hashar karu ki.."
he shook his head "per yea hey to galat..acha hota Daya wo yea sb pata hi nahi lagta..aj taq uske liye jitna unn documents mey hey wohi sb tha..utna hi rehta to.."
He knows the way Daya is thinking is wrong, but wrong as per norms and rules
but in front of a heart which had bore enough pains without any fault its not completely wrong
and Abhijeet cannot deny this fact at least to himself
aftr spending the whole day trying to judge who is right, the heart of a son and a brother or a brain of cid inspector he now returned back home at late night
entering inside he found Daya opening his shoes
"tum..aj hi laut aye.."
Daya just nods
Abhijeet feeling his silence didn't tried more but entered inside..
Aftr freshening up when he came to lounge, found Daya silently sitting on the sofa still in his formals
he moved near to Daya but before he starts with anything Daya started "papa ki saath ek kaam krne wale jis police wale se kal mila tha unse papa ki ek tasveer mili.."
Abhijeet didn't get what he should respond so stayed silent but Daya continued
"uss police station ki sare officers mil ke koi picnic pey gaye they tab ki..(he forwarded his mobile) mein wo photo nahi mang paya..kya kahu smjh nahi aya to bas khich liya ek snap.."
Abhijeet looked at Daya's face but not getting what actually Daya is thinking he silently grabbed the phone and gave a look, a good looking tall sturdy muscular man in his mid 30's.. With a smile. Abhijeet is well known to this smile
he was looking at the photo when heard "kitni ajeeb baat hey na, 44 saal taq ek banda ko uski baap ki shaqal taq pata nahi aur ma ki to aab taq nahi..khud ki baap banne ki umar agayi aab pata chala mera bhi koi jayes baap tha..asehi kisi ki aiashi wagera ki nateeja nahi hu"
"Daya.."
listening the strict but hurt tone Daya looked up, found Abhijeet looking at him with a scowl
"aise kya dekh rahe ho,tumhe kya lagta yea sab meine suna nahi?arey tab se sun ta araha hu jab inn sab ka mtlb taq nahi pata tha..(he smiled strngely) kash Raghuvendra sir ko mera itihas pata hota wo jarur bata dete..fir mujhe aj taq dhundna nahi parta..kash mein cid join krte hi apni police hone ka fayda utha ke pata lagane ka sochta..per mein kya karu..Mamta foundation mey likha hey mujhe kuch log little lilly chor gaye raste mey pake.. Aur woha bare bache rehte nahi to yeaha agaya kabhie shaq hi nahi hua kuch"
Abhijeet silently placed a hand on Daya's shoulder
Daya hold his palm tightly in both hands, Abhijeet sat beside him
"pata hey Abhi jab mein training mey tha mera birthday aya aur Raghuvendra sir ne call kiya tha..woha ek larke ne dekha tha mere documents mey ki mein anath hu usne uss din pucha tum to anath ho fir yea birthday..asli hey yea asehi..mujhe bahut bura laga meine sir se pucha..unhone kaha jinlogo ne mujhe orphanage le aye unlogo ne yeahi date likhwaya sayed unhe pata ho date tabhie to.."
Abhijeet felt Daya's palm turning sweaty,here Daya continued "mein kitna buddhu tha tab bhi shaq nahi hua man liya..ek bar shaq hi ho jata to koshish krta na mein.."
he turned to Abhijeet "pata hey yea sapna dekha na to..to mere muh se asehi papa nikal aya..per mere to papa they nahi hey nahi to papa hi kyun..fir na dusri bar bhi sapna aya..iss bar aur jyada clear..meine victim ki cehra kaisa hey wo point likh dale..aur software se uska sketch banaya..uss raat..aur records se pata kiya to wo ek police wale nikle..tab mujhe shaq hua meine ek police wale ki maut dekha aur papa hi kyun..itne saal bad shaq hua..pata hey wo mera gher..wo bhi anhi hey aab..koi high rise..mera koi bachpan ki nishani nahi…Abhi yea yea sab yaad ana tha to pehle ana tha na..itni der..itni.."
Abhijeet without any more chance pulled Daya towards himself..Daya clutched his t-shirt near chest and started crying "Abhi mera pehchan adhura hey yea pata tha per uss adhure kitab ki baki panne aise they yea nahi.."
Abhijeet was rubbing his back silently now said "pata nahi yea jindegi cahti kya hey..yea yaadein.."
Daya separated himself with a jerk "yea yadein nahi hey Abhijeet yea mere pehchan hey..mere wajoot ki buniyad hey..tum to smjhte ho na iss pehchan ki ahmiyat tumne to.."
"Daya mein smjhta hu per mein yea bhi janta hu ki tere ander kya chal raha hey.."
"haan..chal raha hey aur mein aisehi baitha nahi hu..kal taq iss gang ko jo arms supply krta hey uske adde ka pata bhi chal jayega..mein chorunga nahi"
Abhijeet looked at Daya, the fire in those eyes its signaling really something bad
"Daya yea tera personal larai nahi hey yea kanun.."
Daya stood up "nahi Abhijeet yea kanun mein bhi manta hu per yea larai to meri hi hey tum smjh kiu nahi rahe ho,tum khud ko mere jagah rakh k"
Abhijeet too stood up "mein fir bhi aise nahi sochta.."
Daya's face hardens "han sayed kiuki jab tumne khoya tab tumhe naye se pehchan dene ke liye maaji thi..puri duniya ke liye tumhara wajoot tha..akele wajoot ke liye ek pita ki naam ki kami overcome krne ke liye larna nahi para tumhare ankho ki smne kisine tumhare jindegi ki sahare chine nahi aur tumhe raste pey chora nahi tum nahi smjhoge mere halat ko"
only a shocked voice came up from Abhijeet's throat "mein tera dard nahi smjhunga?"
Daya turned away "smjhte ho?fir yea kyun nahi smjh rahe?"
"yea galat hey Daya tera junun serf tabahi la skta hey insaaf nahi"
Daya stayed silent fr a second "ager rocky ki goli se mein marr jata aur rocky bach jata..ajad to tum kanun ki intejer krte? Ager krte to uss waqt uski sine mey kyun goli mari?payer mey kyun nahi?"
Abhijeet was about to say something but stopped..he don't have the answer
Daya smiled
"aab sayed smjho..kal ready rehna aur ACP sir se keh dena..mein uss arm struggler ko bureau hi launga fiqar mat kro..mera badla uss gang chalane walo se hey aise unki helpers se nahi"
and he moved away..
Abhijeet was about to follow him but stopped seeing Daya's mobile on table with that photo open
deciding something he picked Daya's mobile and moved to his own room
So now gang ki pata lagane ke liye Daya determined hey... Will he succeed?