Guys, go back to the end of the first chapter before reading. I added a bunch to the end which won't make sense unless you read it. It felt like DMC4, which is to say incomplete.
"Excellent, excellent" I heard him say.
Hmph. Excellent huh?
"I know you're eager to test out these new powers of yours some more, but that would have to wait, kid"
This time I could hear footsteps.
Where they were coming from I had hardly an idea; it sounded like it was coming from all directions.
"In any case, your soul now belongs to me. Any objections?"
I could feel myself trying to speak, but I could only grunt.
"Good. I think it's about time to show you what your new master looks like"
The air temperature dropped. Maybe he should fix the thermostat or something.
I could make out something. He began to materialize a few feet in front of me.
Slowly.
Very slowly.
You think he'd pick up the pace.
...
"So, this will be your master's face. Get used to seeing it" he said as he turned around and walked into nothingness.
Yeah, I'll enjoy seeing it facefirst in the wall.
I could feel myself regain control of itself, my muscles no longer being tense and locked.
My dark face smirked.
In an instant I disappeared.
And in a shadowy flash, I reappeared midair in front of him, letting loose a chaotic force of energy right in his general direction.
And my plan would have been perfect too, had he not moved my hand at the last second and directed the attack over to his left.
"Tsk, tsk, Draxian. You need to learn your lesson" He stated mildly as he grabbed my hand, while I was still floating.
'I'm loosing energy...fast' I thought to myself.
His grips was incredible. A force of which I'd never felt before.
Mind-crushingly, life-stealing, and very, VERY painful.
My consciousness slowly began to slip away from me until I could no longer keep myself awake, and I-
(?'s POV)
'Aw bollocks.'
'I think I killed him.'
Well...
I suppose this shouldn't be too hard to fix.
Guess I'll get to work on it then.
And while I'm at it I might as well repurpose some of these other souls I "accidentally" killed as well.
This may be a little more fun than I thought.
'Wait...were are those souls?'
As I looked over to where I had my trophies, they were gone.
"What the bloody hell? Is that old man interfering with my plans again?"
Well isn't this just a nice day of tea and biscuits.
I may be this super overpowered being, but I do love me some tea.
Mmmmm...teaaaaaaa.
'No, you fool. You must get this done first. Then tea.'
Right, right. Time to get started on Draxian then.
*Metal Gear Solid 3: Snake Eater sound effect*
Really guys? 4 reviews and only one relevant to what I asked?
At least I got one I guess.
Personally I prefer the clean Unknown, because he's a contrast to the other characters in other stories like Gold or Glimpse.
Unknown: Doesn't stop me from being perverted though ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Whatever.
In any case, I might just leave him like that unless people tell me to change him back.
In which I will if they do.
Speaking of changing, I -sorta- rewrote and revised my title page. I didn't add anything new.
Not yet.
I'll be putting new character ideas there after every chapter, starting with this one after it goes up.
Or maybe after I wake up as it's around 12:30
Anyway, good luck guys!
