"So Tris, Eric says you're the biggest tease of his life." I look at Eric, half annoyed and half worried.

"He's on drugs, Eric can I have some of your Cocaine?" He steps out of the bathroom obviously confused. "You have to be on drugs, I'm not that big of a tease." He rolls his eyes.

"Yea you are."

"I guess I am then." I laugh and then scream in frustration. The sniper got me as he is now cheering. "Just wait, I'll kill you again."

"Yeah right princess I'd like to see you tr-" he stops mid sentence as I shoot him in the back of the head.

"Hahaha, oops." I giggle as all of the boys let out a low 'ooooooooo'. I get my iPhone and blast my music.

Mark my words by for all those sleeping starts up first.

"I'ma go guys." I say and they all whine. "I'll come back." I say and shut down the XBOX.

"What were they sad that you were getting offline?" Eric asks, wrapping his arms around me from behind and resting his head on my shoulder.

"Yeah acutally, they whined and stuff." I laugh when he kisses my cheek.

"Well, you're mine they need to back off." He mumbles and picks up my phone and searches through my music. "Nothing remotely romantic, why didn't I see this coming?" He laughs and I snatch my phone away. I search through my music and then laugh when I find absolutely nothing romantic.

"I'm not the average girl." I say as I put on doubt by tøp. "I think this might have some form of a romantic lyric in here." I say and kiss him. He smirks and tries to deepen the kiss but I pull back. "Remi took your credit card." I mumble and he rolls his eyes.

"When doesn't she take my credit card?"

So guys, I don't even know where I'm going with this story tbh. That's actually how they all start out. That's why they get so random and stuff lols. I'm gonna sit down and make the plot then I'll keep writing. But the thing is I don't know how long you guys want the story. Like do you want to 20-30 chap 30-50 chap or 50+? If you could tell me that would be great. And also if you could give me tips on how I could make my writing a lot better that would be great. I will take all of the tips and print them out and put them scattered round my bedroom walls and tape some to my bedside table. I just really want to improve my writing skills. I am 11 almost 12 so they will be very immature but that's inevitable. And I've only been writing for uhhhh I think it'll be a year on February 27. Also yes, I am aware every story I write gets sexual in some way. That's not even on purpose I'm going through puberty don't judge me. I'm trying to cut back on that if you can't tell with the shorter kisses but idk if it's working. Most likely not. I'll just have to remember 'I know you like it but this is not okay your older cousin is reading this' maybe that'll help lol. Why is this such a long authors note. I just like talking to you guys even if you don't answer. Haha I should go.

~EmoFangirlEaton