Thanks for all the reviews, they are much appreciated :)
(Yaaaay more torture)
ty tensyhurt u dint flem but i wul mek dis chap lung 4 u k? (My computer gave up trying to autocorrect any of that XDD)
CHEPTR 2 (It's already bad)
moonkit scarubled ut of nersury (...scarubled?) end SEH SEW TH DED BDY OF SPOTSTARRRR1!111!11 (...they actually killed her *bangs head against desk*)
moonkit wez shoikd end sarbuld (...what?) ofer 2 spotstr to see if sehwez ok (SHE'S DEAD AND IT'S YOUR FAULT FOR EXISTING) end blud wez al ofer ledrek (Ledrek? Ledgerock? Like, Highledge and Highrock...?) end moonkit jempeded in shoik (shock?) az tah deepdody (...deputy?) sed "I EM ULD MOONKIT YUNG SEH DEEPUTY NEMED MOONGLOWE~!~!~!`1`1" (YOU CAN'T JUST DO THAT! and nice symbols there by the way) scremed yocetdeepudy (...?) end den tah deepudy jempeded ov ledrok end deid. (okaaay...but you didn't have to kill yourself...I guess...)
hoel clen scrememded in SHOK!1!1 (I would scream too if the leader and deputy were randomly replaced by a kit. Actually, I'd probably run away.)
moonglow scemed end jmped on ledruk end anuncedded the trevleing 2 moonstone!
evry cet sccemed in hapinez. (Why are they happy? I'd either be a random loner or begging to join ShadowClan by then)
(My computer gave up trying to understand and I'm about to give up too xD this is the torture story)
(Byeeee)