i juss notiad dat we al brock 150 reviowz! EW#ER i hert u al i dank u 4 al da suporat u hv givun mme :) u guiz r da bezt! ill hev n xtra lung chappi 4 u! (btw dis by moonkit098!) (awww some people support this)
mooniester starud in feer, un shur ov wot 2 do, "treespotti! plz hlp ma!" seh he screemed. shadowpoll waz unsre ov wot 2 do, "hurruy pillowfart! run way! aideye an lolostar r bk! run! i c sum roguse 2! hurruy!" (When did Aideye get here? With Lolostar and random rogues?) shadowpool screemed but onace she did... aideye runned up behinad her end pused hur 2 da groudn! "SHADOWPOOL NO!%$^&*(" pillowfart criead, "PLZ NO!" (So you just died and randomly resurrected, and now your mate is about to die, will she randomly resurrect too?) he cuntinuad. aideyes spaeared hur lief 4 a mommunt, 2 alow dem 2 hv lastties omentz. (You're not even going to try to save yourselves?) "goodbye pillowfart..." seh sed... teerz rulin doen hr fec "i wall c u in... sterryclen.". pillowfart waz nut heppy "NUUUUUUUUUUUU!" aideye slit hiz reely lung clawz thro shadowpoolz blak furr cout duwn in2 hur skin... 2 her neck. she ded now. (That got kind of dramatic for a moment and then "she ded now")
"wi shadowpool... ill miz u..." pillowfart creis, blu kawai teerz scrullin down hur feac. he ren in2 furest, az fur az he culd go, 2 da rivr outsed ov campu. he starr at refleccty tion. ("Blue kawaii tears" why is everything labeled as kawaii)
("oh hey it's a cat trying to kill me and I'm dying and sad SO KAWAII")
mooniestar triez herd 2 figt buth lolostar/hashtag awy alung wif aideye, but she iz loozin... hr helth waz nut gud, she bout ded wen...
REDPOIPLE JUMMPY INFRUNT OV HUR, DEDIN INSTED. "NO! DADI!" moonster screemed. (Isn't Redpurple the medicine cat? And I remember a few chapters ago he was referred to as "she"? And Moonstar is his daughter?) "protoct ur cmp... im prudd ov u... but i med a misteak... i let u leAOOOHHHHH! AHHHH-" redporplez leif waz cut shurt wen rambopaw (lolostar nuw mad hur a worrior, her nam iz rainbowclowd) (sudden random warrior naming without ceremony) jummpied on redporpolz bak makin blud cum out ov hiz moth "bie... my gurly" (Jumping on his back makes blood come out of his mouth? Doesn't that only happen in anime or something?)
"da...ddy..." mooniester stutterd. she den ranny bak 2 cmp, sein hur clanmootz dey wor al fiting "MOMMI NO!" mooniester suw hur momiez ded bodi infrunt ov hur, blud comin out ov hur eys "momi... EVURIBUDDYRETRET! 2DA RIVUR!" (Moonstar suddenly has dead parents)
~moonkit098