..dey all ran to the river. everyone was in panic
"PILLOWFART COME ON!" Yelled moonistar.
"we have to get Shadowpool!" he crid. "she was da only one who excepted me..." (aww that's kind of cute but Shadowpool just died)
treespootz flicked his hair. (THEY HAVE FUR NOT HAIR) "we gotta go." and he pickd up pillowfurt who was cring and brahht him to da river. (Aren't they already at the river?)
dey all arrived at the river. but two cats were misssing... (THIS IS THE THIRD TIME THEY ARRIVED AT THE RIVER THIS CHAPTER)
Shelfpaw and Selfiekit! (This is spelled correctly and capitalized and punctuated correctly, and it's scaring me)
"WHERES KITS MY KITS!" YELLED PHOTOBOMB. (WHERE IS KITS MY KITS THEY ARE KITS AND KITS ARE MY KITS)
And then they saw it.
they saw...
THEY SAW...
aideye with a ded shelfpaw in his jaws and lolostar had selfiekit in her jaqws.
PHOTOBOMB CRIED AND LOOKED AT MOONISTAR. "WHY! YU... YOURE A TERRBAL LEADEER!" (Didn't I say that right when she became leader?)
-Ashleygurl :''(((
such a sad chapter, sozso. :c
(This story has actually gotten slightly better, I have to say)
(SO I HAVE AN IDEA AND I WANT YOU TO TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK. Wouldn't it be fun if I made a horrible story like this, but purposely, so you can laugh and be tortured at the same time EVEN MORE? my story will probably destroy the universe but oh well haha)
(Thanks for reading)