hi guiz moonkit098 huer alsheygurl69 wrute da lest chappi :) i write dis 1.

(so the cats were being attacked and cats died and they all ran to the river three times)

mooniestar waz rely clos da crin, she den relize... meybe she wastn a good leeder aftur al? al she try... (I don't know how to react to this, MOONSTAR YOU DO NOT TRY AT ALL TO BE LEADER)

"im..." seh grited hur teeth. sudenly aideye leped foard at mooniester, yowlinging in angiryer. (Yowling in angrier?) mooniester steppie bak, and aideye hiet Pillowfart first, lanchin hiz iphune in2 da watur, "NUUUUUUUUUUUUU!" pillowfart screemd, he den wenty besterk, leeping at aideye an pushin him to da grund, "I AVENGU MI SHADOWPOOL! AND IPHUNE." pillowfart sleshed clewz at aideye, hitin him evuryware.

(oh goodness)

(Moonstar = mooniester now I guess)

(Cats don't have phones)

(I think avenging the only cat who ever liked you is better than avenging your useless twoleg device)

mooniester watced in horar, shivoring, aideye blud evury wore, on da grund, on pillowfart, and... mooniester coulda sworn she saw... shadowpool acruss da watur... but she did duble tauk, end didnt c anyding. (wooooah I actually really liked that part she thought she saw a dead cat but it faded and we don't know if it was actually there or not) moonster cries out, leepz forwurd, end pushez pilliafart off ov allmozt ded aideye, "BROTHUR! I WUNNT LOOS U TOO! I CNT... I CANT!" moonster stendz ovur aideye, a ruther fugly lookin aideye, bludd everywor. "waiut... wot?" aideye lukz mooniester in da eyez, "i thut... u hate... me..." aideye sterts cryin blud(his teer duck iz mess up). (He's always been able to cry blood because his tear duct is broken...?) "i dunt hat u, da rest of da clan might but... ur my brothur... i cent hhate u... becuz ill alwaiz luv u, even if u r meen, ill stll... ill.. still treet u lik an oldur sis..." (you kind of switched points of view in the middle of that sentence) (moonstar is about 5 secendz oldur den him.) tearz ov sadnuess rull down hur faec and on aideye's. "ill giv u da nam u need, brother..."

"catz ov sterclen, i herby nam my brothur... eclispefire!" moonstar yelz into da sterz, aideye- i meen eclipesfire luks moonster in the eyez onse she luuks bak down, "i lov u sis... good bye..." (Aww that was really sweet but...Eclipsefire is a bit...intense...uh)

eclipesfires eyez clos... an he gos limp under mooniestar, "I... love you too." (oh my gosh that's spelled correctly)

moonster didnt undr stan... did sh...

katz arund hur gaspy. moonster lukz up frum hur ded brothurz budy.

"I understand what my destiny is now." monister ses.

moonkit098

(THAT LAST LINE SCARED ME SO BADLY I JUMPED LIKE SIX INCHES IN THE AIR)

(THE STORY IS BAD AND HAS A BAD PLOTLINE AND BAD SPELLING AND GRAMMAR)

(THE AUTHOR MENTIONED SEVERAL TIMES THAT THIS WAS HER ACTUALLY TRYING)

(AND THEN THERE'S THAT ONE PERFECT SENTENCE)

(IT'S IN ITALICS AND IT HAS QUOTATION MARKS AND A PERIOD AND EVERYTHING)

(AND IT WAS SUCH AN INTENSE SENTENCE)

("I understand what my destiny is now.")

(I DON'T KNOW WHAT MY LIFE IS ANYMORE)

(I JUST FANGIRLED [kind of] OVER A SENTENCE)

(THE LAST SENTENCCEEEE)