(OH NO ANOTHER WELL-WRITTEN CHAPTER WHAT IS THIS BECOMING)

Moonstar's eyes were filled with tears. Her whole body was shaking and her claws sunk deep into the soft ground. She looked at the river, hoping to find some proof of either of her kit's being alive. Even though she has neglected her son, Rainbowcloud, she still cared about him, just not as much as Bloodpaw.

You see, Bloodpaw was much more talented than her brother, which is why Moonstar favoured her over her sibling. (You also said cats hated Rainbowcloud because he/she/it had the wrong colors of the rainbow) As kits, Bloodpaw and Rainbowcloud were best friends, however, when the two became apprentices, Rainbowcloud began to notice how much praise her sister was getting. Bloodpaw would catch a large hare and Rainbowcloud would catch a small morsel. Eventually, Rainbowcloud got sick of it and confronted her sister. The two weren't quite the same after that, and then the whole incident with Lolostar happened. So Rainbowcloud left to join Lolostar's Clan and there she received her Warrior name: Rainbowcloud. (hMmMmMmMmMm this is intriguing)

Minutes passed, and Moonstar continued to stare in the rushing water. The she-cat would of jumped into the river, but she had no ability to swim and would most likely drown, even if she was given nine lives by StarClan. (She does have nine lives though, right...? Ahh I'm really confused)

There was a silence. However, Treespots broke this silence.

"moonistur-senpai," he said, flipping his oh, so kawaii desu hair, "dey b ded 5evs get ova et" (AND THE DIALOGUE IS STILL BAD)

(IS THIS ACTUALLY WRITTEN BY A GOOD WRITER WHO'S FAKING THIS?! AHH CONFUSION WHAT)

Moonstar turned her head around fiercely, and shot her mate a terrifying tom. (Okay that sentence didn't make sense and I burst out laughing XD) "Those were your kits!" She hissed. "And you show no remorse? All you say is that they're dead?! At least show some respect for your kits."

Every cat was now looking at Moonstar (even Pillowfart had dropped his iPhone).

Treespots opened his mouth to speak, but the tom couldn't find words. He stomped back towards the Clan and began to complain under his breath.

Yet again, there was another long silence, but this time, Moonstar broke it.

(OH MY GOSH SHE'S CARING ABOUT THINGS INSTEAD OF WAILING TO THE STARS)

"Cats of my Clan," Moonstar meowed. "Bloodpaw was an honourable cat and Starclan honoured your courage and kindness. However, it is a shame she never became a Warrior, which is why I ask my ancestors to look down on her, wherever she may be, and now be known as Dewdrop."

The cats of her Clan began to chant; "DOODROOP!"

(Bloodpaw equals Dewdrop?)

(Well, Lostface did equal Brightheart)

(AAH FEELS COMING BACK *dies*)

Once the chanting had come to a close, Moonstar spoke again, "Rainbowpaw, may have betrayed us and I may of neglected him, but he was brilliant at fighting, and I should of at least recognised him for that. Like Dewdrop, Rainbowpaw never became a Warrior, not that I know of anyway. StarClan honoured his skill in battle and strength. Which is why I ask my ancestors to look down on him, wherever he may be and now be known as Spottedfang!"

And the cats began to chant again, "SPURRTTURDFURNG!"

(Rainbowpaw/cloud/I don't know equals Spottedfang? That somehow makes less sense to me)

Moonstar had not much more to say. Things were going to change in SexyClan. Especially the name of it, like goodness gracious why would you call a Clan SexyClan? Anyway, once they got back to camp, things were going to change, and for the better.

(I don't have much more to say either, honestly O-O)

(Is this story going to get better along with the Clan...?)

-Ashleygurl
Hope you enjoyed! :)
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