Hey, wassup! I come with both good and bad news. I have hit a point where I realized that I really don't like how I set up this one.
Now, calm down I'm not going to abandon it I just figured out that I don't really have it set up in a way that will make a whole lot of sense once we get down into it.
The plan is as follows:
1. Adjust beginning chapters to fit.
2. Post the adjusted beginning chapters on my other profile.
3. Post chapter on this one that says come check this out the story.
4. Continue on with story as if nothing happened.
But before I do go work on those chapters I will give you a snapshot of what the new one will look like:
Twilight was doing the same thing as always, reading.
She was totally engrossed in the story of The Great Discord War, she had just reached the part where the two alicorn sisters were moving to face discord with the elements of harmony. She shifted in her chair trying to get more comfortable, she was in a small study in the golden oaks library, her home. That was when it happened.
A sudden bright light flared to life behind her making her turn wing flaring in suprise, only to have to shield her lavender eyes from the light. It was as if Celestia had taken a part of her sun and put it straight into the study only it was in the shape of a tall bipedal figure. Slowly the shape of the mini sun changed to the shape of a pony before extinguishing entirely. What fell to the floor was a zebra with a unicorn's horn, he had a black coat with lime green stripes running horizontally across his barrel. His tail was black with a green stripe running through it, his short mane followed suit. He let out a groan semi concious.
Twilight's mouth fell open at this and she stared incredulously. Her mouth worked up and down a few times before she said the first thought that came to her mind,
"INTRUDER!"