Review answers;

Starsinger04; Thank you for leaving a comment for Nina it means a lit to me. Owlpaw was mean because he really thought he was fighting a ThunderClan apprentice. I think Mousekit is going to grow out of the greedy thing, yeah I made him the odd one out for a reason. Thanks for reviewing!

Breezetail; I like the names you posted and the kits names will be announced next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

Shadow765; I would love to have you beta read it! Thank you, I hope that the people that read my story love it as much as I do.

On with the story…

Back in the ThunderClan camp

Swiftkit opened her eyes after what felt like only a heartbeat, she looked to her side to see Mousekit and Ravenkit.

"Ravenkit I'm scared. What if Swiftkit won't wake up?"

"I'm already awake silly."

Swiftkit rasped to Mousekit. The screeches of battle were gone by now. Tallfeather rushed to the silver kit's side.

"Hi Swiftkit, you got pretty banged up huh?"

Swiftkit's eyes were laced with the pain coming from her wounds. She let out a weak laugh, surprised to find the medicine cat able to make her laugh.

"Yeah, some dumb apprentice decided to attack a kit. Although he kind of thought I was an apprentice myself."

"Swiftkit I think you should go to sleep now. I know you just woke but you need to rest."

"Ok Tallfeather."

Soon after the kit closed her eyes she was greeted by sleep. Swiftkit was in a huge green meadow filled with the scent of prey. A huge tom with large paws padded up to her.

"Hello Swiftkit, you may not know me but I know you. Let me introduce myself. I am Thunderstar, the first ever leader of ThunderClan."

"You are the Thunderstar?"

"In the flesh. You see that other big cat over there?"

"That would be ThunderClan's third leader, also my adopted sibling Owlstar."

Owlstar ran over to the two cats, yellow eyes shining with humor he spoke.

"Why if it isn't the amazing Thunderstar! May I have the pleasure of meeting the Swiftkit?"

Swiftkit tilted her head at Owlstar's words, Thunderstar's eyes flashed with fury as he spoke.

"Oh don't listen to Owlstar, he is just kidding around. Would you like to meet some cats?"

"Yes please!"

Secretly Swiftkit hoped he meant her father and aunt.

"Come with me then…"

Back in the waking world (Still in the ThunderClan camp)

Outside the medicine den the ThunderClan camp looked like it had had a visit from the Dark Forest. Blood splattered the camp walls and stained the once soft green grass a deep red. In the middle of the camp Shinestar and some senior warriors were arranging hunting patrols. WindClan had stolen every piece of prey in the fresh kill pile. WindClan had lost no cats, the same went for ThunderClan. Though many good warriors were heavily injured in the battle.

Russetfang was in the medicine den along with the deputy Heatherstrike. The russet warrior had suffered a large shoulder wound, and Heatherstrike had a fairly deep wound in her neck. She had gotten it when she stopped Owlpaw from killing Swiftkit. The vicious apprentice had lunged for her neck and sliced his claws, almost killing the deputy.

WindClan had been so brutal that it was a blessing from StarClan that no cats had been killed on the ThunderClan side.

Meanwhile in rouge territory outside of ThunderClan

A gray tom with white paws prowled through 'His' territory. A young cat had passed through, a she-cat and she carried the scent of a clan. The tom could be no older than four moons, he followed the scent trail until a pitch black she-cat came into view.

"WHO ARE YOU!"

The young tom boomed, the she-cat turned quickly. Her head snapping around looking for the source of the voice. Not knowing about the young tom in the tree above her.

"I_ I am just passing through_ Please don't hurt me!"

The tom jumped down from his perch. Landing square on her, the she-cat's legs crumpled with the sudden weight. The tom hissed.

"What is your name?"

"M_M_My name is Insanity. What is yours?"

"YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO KNOW OF MY NAME! LEAVE MY TERRITORY BEFORE I KILL YOU!"

The tom stepped off of the she-cat and as she ran away he leapt into the trees. Quickly catching up to the fleeing she-cat he leapt down purposely missing her. Unsheathing his claws the tom cut deep into her shoulder.

"Never intrude into the territory of Jay. Or next time you WILL be killed."

With that the tom leapt back into the trees and was gone. Leaving Insanity to crawl back to ShadowClan, or to her makeshift nest near ShadowClan.

Thanks for reading this chapter of The Rise of Swiftstar

Question of the day: Ok so my friend Nina is moving and she has always wanted to be known, so I'm asking you guys to please leave a comment dedicated to Nina and mention what country you are from. Please and hopefully, thank you! (It is going to be the same until chapter 9)

Bye for now

Swiftstar Out