Hey guys/girls I have decided that I will make the place I 'Talk' at the top instead of at the end of the chapter… please tell me what you think about the change
So the news for this chapter is
1; You have 2 chapters left to vote for the BtB chapter
2; The BtB chapter will be released on the 12th chapter
3; Next chapter Swiftkit and her siblings will get their mentors!
On to the reviews!
Starsinger04: I am sorry that the chapter wasn't as good as the other ones, I had to show that Swiftkit is in a fairly bad point of her life. Next chapter her mentor will be revealed… Thanks for giving me your opinion. As I said in earlier chapters any and all constructive criticism is welcomed!
King James10158: Thank you!
Ravenwing of ThunderClan: Ok your vote has been counted!
Breezetail: Thank you for the compliment! Your vote for the BtB has been counted, I am trying to update ASAP!
Destinyheart: Well I thank you for reviewing, better late than never! :D Thank you, I am so happy to hear you readers love this story as much as I do! Also I thought it was high time Nightflower and Snakefang had their kits!
Let's get back to the story…
Back in the ThunderClan camp…
Jaykit held his head high, proud of his new name. The large tom-kit looked over to see the black she-kit that had defended his coming his way.
"Hey Jaykit, how does it feel to have a new name?"
"I think it is nice, by the way thanks. Oh and who might you be?"
"I am Ravenkit, the sister of Swiftkit, Whitekit, and Silverkit."
"Thank you for standing up against the white tom, by the way what is his name?"
"Well the tom that captured you is Darkfrost, and the leader is Shinestar. The ginger queen is Gingerfur, the gray and white she-cat is named Tallfeather. If you want to know about who anyone else is come fine me… cause I got to go check on Swiftkit. Bye!"
With that Ravenkit ran off thinking about the dreamy tom, little did she know Jaykit shared her thoughts.
The black she-kit burst into the den, only to be greeted by an unfamiliar and horrid smell. That and her older sister, who now looked like a two moon old kit instead of the five moon old kit.
"Swiftkit is that you?"
The form of her sister turned to Ravenkit, the bright blue eyes that had been shining just a day ago were almost unrecognizable. It was obvious that the fight had forced Swiftkit to grow up.
"Oh hello Ravenkit, you know you look a lot like this tom I once met…"
Ravenkit gave her sister a confused look as Swiftkit remembered the secret of her mother.
"Mother said that you met father somehow, is that who you are talking about?"
"Um, no I am talking about father's mother…"
Stripenose, her name was stripe nose…
"Stripenose if I remember correctly."
"Oh that's cool, so did you hear about the rouge?"
Swiftkit thought for a second remembering hearing the name Jaykit being called, and the growls of an unrecognizable tom.
"Yeah only a little… Jaykit right?"
"Yup, ew what is that icky smell?"
"That would be Heatherstrike's infected wound."
Ravenkit wrinkled up her nose before continuing.
"So we are going to be apprentices soon, who do you want as a mentor?"
A shadow cast over the entrance of the large den as a large kit walked in. He had a shining silver-gray pelt and eyes that looked like carbon copies of Swiftkit's.
"I think I want to have Tallfeather, that cat needs help or she will die. As a member of this clan I need to help her, I feel like I was born to do so…"
Ravenkit's eyes filled with a sudden distress that confused her nearby sister.
"Well you must be Jaykit_ I am Swiftkit the eldest sister or Ravenkit, nice to meet you."
"Your voice is messed up, oh and so is your flank, and your… basically whole body."
Swiftkit jumped to her feet, anger making the stab of pain vanish.
"How dare you talk to me like that? I could have died fighting to protect what belongs to this clan! Then you waltz in after what could have been a deadly battle and have the nerve to talk to me like that! I will have you know that once I am well enough Shinestar will make me an apprentice…"
A few silent moments before Swiftkit finished.
"One apprentice that he actually wants."
With a gasp of pain Swiftkit fell back into her nest, Ravenkit looked at the two. Trying to decide who to side with.
"Come on Ravenkit, let's go Swiftkit isn't good enough for us."
A new shadow cast over the entrance. As a furious growl sounded.
"I knew that a rouge doesn't belong in ThunderClan! I should report you to Shinestar, you too Ravenkit!"
The two pleaded together.
"NO! PLEASE DON'T!"
The medicine cat thought for a second.
"I won't kick you out I guess, I need an apprentice… but the two of you won't become apprentices until a moon after Swiftkit!"
Tallfeather entered the rest of the way, allowing Ravenkit and Jaykit to leave. Before leaving Jaykit stopped at Swiftkit's nest and whispered an apology.
Meanwhile in ShadowClan
After Smokekit taught Nightkit the Snake Strike it was only a matter of time before it was taught to Blackkit and within about an hour ShadowClan warriors were getting attacked by the kits non-stop. But the clan was not mad at the kits or their father, ShadowClan was proud that the young kits had mastered the difficult move.
"Smokekit I can smell you! Don't even think about trying to attack me!"
The gray she-kit stepped out of the shadows, head drooping sadly.
"Sorry Stormstar…"
"I think you should start asking your father for more moves… Who knows what you will add on to them!"
The ShadowClan warriors were buzzing about the little gray kit, had made a change to a difficult battle move. Perfected it, and got praise from the leader.
"So who do you think is going to get Smokekit as an apprentice?"
"Blackheart go run to your mate, my daughter is not an item to be gambled on."
The black tom hissed at Snakefang before walking out of the den making his way to an ice white she-cat with drop dead green eyes. No cat didn't want to be around her but unfortunately the beautiful she-cat was with Blackheart. No one could figure out how he managed to get her to say yes.
"Hey Blackheart, how is everything going?"
"Everything is fine, I think I'm the top contenders to mentor that fighting prodigy Smokekit."
The beautiful warrior smiled, she gave her stomach a pat with her tail and responded.
"I have some contenders from her possible mates, I have great news!"
Blackheart looked at her with excitement dancing in his eyes.
"Are you expecting kits?"
"YES!"
"I am going to be a father? I can't believe it! This is great, they are going to be the best fighters and they will look just like us!"
The tom kept rambling about being a father, after a minute or two a clan meeting was called.
"All ShadowClan cats gather for an announcement!"
The clan gathered, Smokekit, Nightkit, and Blackkit were brought into the center of the cats.
"It is time for the placing of apprentices! To explain to those who don't remember this is when everyone is told who will mentor the current kits that are three moons and above! First up is Blackkit!"
The black kit stepped forward, his kit blue eyes shining in fear.
"Y_yes Stormstar?"
"Blackkit when the time comes your mentor will be…"
In ThunderClan
"Cats of ThunderClan gather for a ceremony of five kits!"
Swiftkit, Ravenkit, Whitekit, Silverkit, and Jaykit lined up before high-rock. Ravenkit was supporting her sister, who hadn't made a full recovery and would have to wait a half-moon until her training could begin.
"First up is Swiftkit. From now on until you become a warrior you will be known as Swiftpaw! Your mentor will be…"
Boom cliffhanger!
I do already have her mentor picked out (Sorta…)
Time for a vote recap!
(Remember this is the last chapter you can vote on the BtB)
From ThunderClan: Shinestar and Heatherstrike; The one that got away
Vote Number= 0 votes (Insert picture of Shinestar crying :*(
From WindClan: Archtail in StarClan
Vote Number= 0 votes (Sad Archtail is sad…)
From RIverClan: Creekstar's time in WindClan
Vote Number= 0 votes ("Oh yeah? I will rip all of you foxdungs apart!" –Angry Creekstar)
From ShadowClan: Savagetooth's banishment
Vote number= 1 (Insert gloating Savagetooth…)
From the Rouges: Jay's disowning
Vote number= 3 (Happy Jay is Happy… ish)
So right now Jay is in the lead
Bye bye
Swiftstar out