okay I'm faced with a big decision here, I the first 4 chapters of a story on my laptop from ages ago, it's really funny but I was wondering if I should put it on fanfic. The problem is it probably has a really similar plot to this one, I really don't remember what the idea was I had when writing it but should I put it on? Please review and tell me! Xx

CHAPTER 23:

Fletcher found Valkyrie lying on a bed; Tanith was wiping the sweat from her forehead. "Hello ladies." He lay on the bed beside Valkyrie. A nurse was cleaning up blood, Fletcher decided to ignore that. "So how's my favourite girl?" She was smiling when she looked at Fletcher. "I forgot to say this earlier but happy birthday." Tanith stood awkwardly beside the bed and shuffled her feet. "I'm going to go get some grub. Anybody want anything?" She hurried away and left Valkyrie and Fletcher on their own with the cleaner.

Hayley Mirren came into the room lot long after Tanith had left with the babies and gave one to Valkyrie and one to Fletcher. They were identical, they had Fletcher's nose, Valkyrie's mouth, Valkyrie's dark brown hair but she couldn't tell about the eyes because they were closed. "Fletcher, you are holding your little boy, he weighs five pounds. Valkyrie, dear you are holding your little girl and she also weighs five pounds. Have you thought of any names? You have to name them now." Valkyrie bit her lip and looked into her daughter's little face. She felt love pouring from her like a stream. "Uh, I dunno… Darrell Tristyn Cain. How's that, too weird?"

"It's beautiful, but a gorgeous child deserves a gorgeous name, what about the boy?"

"Your call, Val. I wouldn't trust me."

"Let's see him then." Fletcher carefully passed the sleeping baby into Valkyrie's arms and took Darrell into his own.

"Em, well. Ashley Alexander Cain." Hayley nodded and wrote the names down on her papers. She put little plastic tags on their wrists saying their name and who their parents were. She had to put a tag on Valkyrie but she refused. "I'm hardly going to get lost or forget who I am, now am I?" But Hayley had done it anyway. She advised Valkyrie to sleep after checking her over.

Tanith came back in. "Guys, I can't find Ghastly or Skulduggery anywhere and the Bentley's not there. Do you think I should call the zoo and warn them about a group of idiots invading their elephant enclosure to give heed. Ooh, you named them!" She darted forward and read the tags, she picked up Ashley. "Hello my dear niece. I'm auntie Tanith."

"Tanith that's the boy, your nephew."

"But Ashley's a girl's name. Do you think Val got a little confused?"

"I can hear you."

"Sleep Val."

Fletcher put photos of Valkyrie, Darrel, Ashley, himself and Tanith on facebook. And added as his status, "Good times: I'm the proud father of Darrell and Ashley, my son and daughter. Now three hours old. Valkyrie, I'm so proud of you and I love you so much, too much to put into words xxo"

He was still smiling when Ghastly, Skulduggery, Ravel, Dexter and Shudder burst into the room singing Bohemian Rhapsody at the top of their voices. "Jeez shut up will you, Val's sleeping and so are the babies and it's a hospital."

"Val's not sleeping anymore. Where have you been Skulduggery? I could have needed you."

"You guys really know how to burst my bubble. But it's possible!"

"What's possible?" Tanith suddenly when very pale.

"Ghastly please tell me you didn't! Oh bloody hell."

"No zoo shall ever be safe again! Mwahahahahahahaha!"

"Ravel! You're the grand mage, you should have stopped them!"

"Why are you so upset about it anyway Tanith? The elephants seemed to enjoy it."

"That's disgusting Skulduggery."

"What happened!"

"You really don't want to know Val."

"Oh yeah I do."

"She does. Myself, Ghastly, Ravel, Dexter and Shudder done a little experiment."

"What experiment?"

"Don't tell her."

"We went to see if it was possible to suck an elephant's dick. And it is!"

"Tanith was right, I didn't actually want to know that. Please tell me you're joking."

"Nope."

"Oh my god."

"Oh your me."

So what did peoples think of the baby's names? And should I put the story up? And what should happen next? Please review :DDD

Skylair xxo