catspats31 chapter 2 . 10h ago
Question #1 for Papyrus: Can you please tell the author that the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken?
Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.
6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.
Question #2 for Papyrus: Can you please help the author accept the following suggestion to fix this story so that it doesn't break the site rules?
"Since you used Onyx Fowl's request in chapter 2, someone can use it as evidence in their abuse report. Please delete and reupload so that you'll only use requests sent by PM. Please use dialogue similar to: "Sans!" yelled Papyrus. Try to add some description and detail behind what's going on. The admins frown upon stories in chat/script format because it erases all of the artistic choice and technical skill from writing and reduces it strictly to events without any sort of prose or emotion. It shows they're more impressed by what rather than how, and how is the most important part of any creative endeavor.
Please note that the rule against interactive entries as stories is in place because the story page isn't rightly set up to do interactivity. In a forum, one can ask and respond to the original post as many times as one feels like and go off on different tangents, editing and adding more info as necessary, but in a review, you get one shot per chapter per penname to give all the info and feedback and get it right, then you're down to PMs that no one else can see. That kind of ruins the interactive portion. Therefore, this site keeps interactive fics to forums where they can truly be interactive
Papyrus: Umm.. .I'm not sure what exactly all that means...
Sans: Don't worry about Paps...
Papyrus: And who's "The Writer"
Sans: I don't know paps
-in a alternate plain-
Seirin Looks at the post with distaste"tl;dr...I don't write for admins...I write for Viewers, There's tons of pics like these , Why...Why be that guy. I Post here to entertain and instill my views. My headcanons, and you have to be that guy. Come on Nobody Likes that guy" Next Question.