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what is sin tale
Seirin: Well sintale is this au i made...but i haven't worked out any of the kinks yet...its like a more Over Powered undertale...with diffrent events and twists most of the characters follow a certain sin, but doesn't have to stick with/ multiple people can have the same sin...i show you both of the drafts...the idea is stupid though...sorry
Cannon Ver
SINTALE
By Seirin Yamai
Sei: hey guys, My 2nd story and my 1st Undertale Fanfic. Cause my 1st Fanfic was crap. I hope you guys like this one. It's my own personal AU.
Sans: Heh I guess you could say it was SINful? *ba-dump Tisk* [Insert laugh Track]
Sei: very funny…
Frisk: I Liked it.
Sei: of course you would. Anyway someone please disclaim.
Sans: I got it….
Sei: …..
Sans:….
Sei: WELL?
Sans: what?
Sei: are you gonna disclaim or what?
Sans: Nah, I would But I have a ton of work, A SKELEton.
Sei: *Sigh* I Do Not Own Undertale, An Annoying dog does.
P.O.V Frisk
"Where am I, is this hell?" I say. All around me is darkness except for a lit path. It looks like a batch of Black flowers broke my fall. I feel like a presence is watching me, but I shrug it off. I follow the path until I reach a clearing. There seems to be a single Black flower, it looks like it has a face, how cute. Then I proceed to get shocked as the flower starts talking.
"Howdy, I'm Flowey the Flower; your new around here aren't cha? Don't worry I'll show you how things work around here" It, No, Flowey says. Something weird starts happening, a Red heart pops out of my chest. "You see that heart, that's your SOUL the very culmination of your being. Now your SOUL starts off pretty weak, but it can get stronger by obtaining…" Flowey says. "..SINS, Now most humans think ins are bad but they help you survive Down here. I'll Share some with you Don't worry I'll Share some with you" Flowey then proceeds to wink, which kind of puts me on edge.
Out of Flowey these little white pellets come out and start spinning. "Down here LOVE is shared threw "Little, White, Friendliness, Pellets"" He says with a sinister smirk. I really get weary now. "Ok try to get as many as you can" he says with an all too sweet voice as he proceeds to shoot the pellets at me. Now going against my better judgement I actually stand still. The pellets hit me, and hit me hard. I feel close to death, after only 4 minutes of being in the underground. The Evil Flower starts to talk. "You idiot! Down here its kill or be killed! Doing Stupid things will get you killed! From now on I'm going to be helping you for my own personal gain.". "Oh and what will you gain?" I respond. "Well that's none of your business, but if it'll help, Excitement. Everything down here is so boring". "So I'm just excitement to you huh? Oh well as long as you guide me through here". "Deal! Welp I'll see you later! Oh and you might want to find some food!" Flowey then pops underground.
"Wow, what a jackass! Bring me to the brink of death and leave me!" I yell my frustration out. I hear some footsteps. A pretty tall goat monster looking thing walks out, it seems to be female due to the short stubby horns. The Goat-Monster is wearing White Dress with black marks on it. "Hello, my child, I am Toriel, the caretaker of these ruins. You seem to be hurt, mind telling me what happened?"
I contemplate on whether I should tell Toriel about Flowey or not? I decide not to, seeing as I don't know this monster very well. "I fell down this hole while . . . I was on the mountain" I tell her as I bite my tongue. I don't want her knowing my whole life story. She Seems to understand that and just nods.
"Come My Child, I will guide you through the catacombs" She says as she starts walking. I look out the corner of my eye and see a shadowy figure but a soon as I look its gone. I wonder if my eyes are playing tricks on me.
Sei: thus ends Chapter one and let me know what you think! I'm only stopping because this was 5 pages on word and my internet is off! If it's very short Next time I'll be sure to write more. Also you guys can put in your own Ideas. I also need a beta if I get to many complaints about grammar. No Flames. Flames are for making pie. Only Constructive Criticism
Sans: hey I wasn't in this chapter
Sei: well this is the start. You normally aren't in it till snowdin.
Sans: well I'll just have to fix that!
Sei: Fine. If any of you can spot the parts that sans decided to put in, you will get a B-Scotch and Cinnamon Pie.
Sans: I only made 2, so good luck.
Toriel: Hmm… me wearing white, while I'll admit that probably would look good on me. I would never have black on.
Flowey: your dress is just white. HE TURNED MY PETALS BLACK. NOW IM A DAMN ROSE!
Toriel: watch your mouth! Frisk is still here.
Frisk: *nods* Yes no need to plague my mind
Flowey: But you just cursed me an hour ago!
Frisk: I don't remember that
Flowey: URGH!
Sei: anyway goodnight everyone (Pellets and fireballs fly around in the background) I got to make sure they don't destroy my house! Oh yeah and SINS. to . BYE!
Non-Canon
(OC)SINTALE
An Undertale AU By Seirin Yamai
[Undertale Start Screen Plays]
Seirin: heya. I'm Back again with a Story!
Frisk: So Another Story about Me?
Seirin: Not Quite
Sans: Well Then about Me….
Seirin: Ehh…
Flowey: You Idiots...it's clearly gonna be about him.
Seirin: Yea
Sans: Oh…
Frisk: Aww….
Seirin: Anyway Disclaimer!
Chara: I'll Do it...My Buddy Sei Right here does not own us...that would be our God Toby Fox...The Dog….
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"Man This Mountain is way to big…" Said a young Boy, About 13 years of age. He is 5'4. Green shoulder length hair that spikes down, With 3 long Bangs that cover his left eye. He was wearing a Black vest and a red Under shirt, with Black Cargos and Black and white sneakers, Had A Sheath for a Sword But Nothing in it. A Book that said pun with a Bone Symbol on it. The boy's name was Seirin; and seirin was currently making his way up mount ebott to finish his training.
"I Swear to go this far just for a Special Book with Magic! Sensei is ridiculous when it comes to these things!" As the boy was walking he saw another person Walking just a few feet away. " Hey Over Here". The person jumped in surprise and turned towards seirin not expecting to see another person up here. After getting a better view of the person he noticed a girl about the same age as him. She was wearing a blue Sweater with Purple Stripes, and some grey Cargo shorts. She had a Nice shade of auburn Hair, and chocolate colored eyes.
"H-Hello I wasn't expecting anyone to be up here other than me" The Girl Stated Shyly. "Yeah I'm just trying to make it to the top for some magic Book". The Girl Looked in surprise, "You mean The Magic Book That was said To Be Able to Give you a monster's powers" Seirin Nodded. "So wanna walk with me...it's kind of lonely up here". "Sure I'd Love to...and it was pretty Boring By Myself I'm Frisk". "I'm seirin" After Introductions, the duo of explorers were walking up the mountain telling jokes until they tripped on a vine, tumbled down the mountain, straight into a hole they passed Along The Way. "OH MY GOD!" "NOOO!
They both screamed in terror of the fate they were soon to meet.
'I...DONT WANT TO DIE, NOT HERE' They both thought at the same time as they hit a bed off very soft Flowers at a large speed. The Impact was hard enough to knock the both of them out cold.
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(AN: At the divider and up is only 444 words so I won't stop there but I have school so I'll finish it tomorrow…..-Tomorrow- I'm Back And ready to start!)
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"Ugh...it Feels like I got run over by a bus…." Seirin said as he was rubbing his head. He noticed he was on a bed of black petaled flowers. They were surprisingly soft.
Speaking of soft He Noticed Frisk on top of him, He Blushed as he never was this close to a girl. "Um...Frisk...get up please". " Uhh….what happ- ….Umm...S-Seirin W-What are you doing
U-Under Me?" Frisk managed to stutter out. Seirin Panicked Causing him to stand up Quickly,Forgetting Frisk was on top of him. They both tumbled Down With Seirin's Face Inches from Frisk's. "Uhh….." By This time they're both as Red as a tomato. Seirin Slowly Got Up and Backed away. "Let's just forget about this" Frisk said. "Yeah". They both look around and realize Heaviness of the matter.
"Um...Seirin…?" A quick look towards Frisk. "We wouldn't happen to have fell in the hole have we?" Seirin Looks up and sees Only a Speck of light. "Um...Yeah" Silence. Complete Silence. They both realized they were stuck in a Hole with no way of getting out. They didn't even know how they survived the fall really. They decided that the only Thing to do was move forward. They noticed a path was illuminated, Though there were no lights. They didn't think hard on it and moved to the Next Room.
[ Your Best Friend Plays]
There was a lone Black Petaled Flower Hunched over the middle of the grass. It Seemed to have a face but they weren't sure Until the flower Sprung up and Greeted them. " Howdy! I'm Flowey! Flowey the Flower!" The flower had A Innocent smile on its face like a child. "Hi Flowey I'm frisk". "And I'm Seirin" the Flower just seemed to smile more at hearing their names. "You two are new to the underground aren't cha?" Two Nods then Flowey continued "Someone needs to teach you on how things work around here... Lucky you have little old Me!" He Winked. For a second it seemed as if his eyes were red, But it was dismissed.
Everything around Them Turn White and Black, (AN: Not Black in white.) A Light Red and Dark Red Soul appeared In front of Frisk and Seirin. "Well This is new!" "I know what you mean". Flowey looked slightly annoyed at the side conversation, But kept his smile. " Done. Ok Then. You see those Red Hearts? Those are your souls, The very culmination of Your Beings. Now your soul starts of weak...But Can Get stronger by obtaining SIS. What's SIS? Why SONGS of course. Now you're probably wondering where's the I, and why SONGS. Well the I is silent and Cause the king is bad at Names. Originally it was LV Or LOVE. But then people got confused, so we used songs. You wants some SONGS Don't You? Don't worry I'll share some with ya." Seirin was surprised that anyone could talk that long, But then realized he should be more surprised that a flower is talking. Flowey Winked and stuck his tongue out. Little Pellets things appeared above flowey. "Down here SONGS Are shared threw… little gray "Friendliness pellets" go on catch as many as you can" The Pellets Proceeded to shoot at them at a slow rate. "Nah I'll gain Songs on My own" "Seirin Be Nice" Frisk Latches on to his arm stopping him from moving. They Both get hit by the pellets Causing Small gashes to appear around their body. A health bar appears in front of them saying [HP: 1/20].
"….You Idiots. Down here it's KILL OR BE KILLED." The bullets completely surround them and start closing in slowly just to tease them. "Hahahahahahahahaha!" Suddenly the attacks Disintegrate. "Ha...Huh?" A white and black FireBall appears hitting Flowey knocking him away "Ow!".
[ Fallen Down Plays ]
A Tall Goat Type Monster walked in front of them and starts healing them. White silken fur, and Violet colored eyes. Dressed in a White robe with Black lining On. The Delta rune Plastered right on the chest of the robe. The monster had short stubby horns signifying that the monster was possibly a female.
"Hello Children, Sorry I took so long in getting here. If I would've known you was in trouble I would've gotten here quicker. I am Toriel the caretaker of the ruins" the woman name Toriel who spoke with an elegant voice motioned for them to follow her. "Come with me children, I will show you how to navigate the catacombs." She walks into the next room and waits. "Well... considering the 1st person we met tried to murder us...I'm definitely game for following Her!". "Oh Seirin stop with the sarcasm. She just saved us from Flowey!" " Oh Fine...but I'm not Gonna be nice." They were about to walk into the next room But They felt 3 Presences. One Felt Very Cold Uncaring, Another Felt Very Angry and Pissed, and the final one felt excitement at seeing something new. But a soon as they turned around there was Nothing there. They were a little suspicious but they Needed to Catch-up with Toriel. So they Continued into The Next Room Hearing Echoes as they walk past a pile of leaves and up stairs.
[*The Shadows of the Ruins Looming Above Fill You with DETERMINATION ]
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Seirin: Thus Ends Chapter 1
Flowey: that was only half-trash
Frisk: you only liked it cause you got to hurt us.
Sans: The Kiddo's right.
Flowey: oh shut up.
Seirin: Hey guys I'm kinda trying to talk to my readers.
Flowey: Oh I'm sorry- Who Gives a F-
Seirin: *Turns Flowey Blue Then Slams into the ceiling* Please refrain from cursing in front our guests.
Flowey: *Grumbles* Fine.
Seirin: Thank you! *Sets him inside his pot*
Chara: Haha. Nice Chapter!
Seirin: Thanks. Anyways Thank you all for reading. And I Have a Challenge. If you can tell me as all 3 presences and What They Felt Like. I'll Have Toriel Make you a Pie of Your Liking!
Sans: See Ya!
Frisk: Bye!
Flowey: Go away already.
Chara: Good Bye!
Seirin: Good Night and Read and Review….Who drunk My Hotsauce, and ate my sugar!?
Sans and Chara: Umm...Bye*Hopes Out window*
Seirin: *Chases after them*
Stats:
Name: Seirin
ATK: 1 (0). HP: 20
DEF: 2 (0)WEAPON: none
Gold: 0. ARMOR: Book
Name: Frisk
ATK: 1 (0) HP: 20
DEF: 1(0) WEAPON: Stick
Gold: 0 ARMOR: Bandage
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[Undertale start screen plays]