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GD : Sabsy pehle tu apka bht bht suwagat hai meow k story section main... Arrey bapry innay saary sawal... Thora saans tu lai laity GD...na g na ye wali moew bilkul bhi sharp/intelligent/charmer ni hai g...:-))) Baki meows ka mjhy ni pata...par ap keh rahy ho tu wo definitely hongi bht sharp...haahaaaa...GD ye mere name ka shuru aur aant hai " RK " ab inki full form kia hai ye ap pata laga lo ;-)))) waisy Ram kapoor aur Rajeev Khandewaal mjhy bhi bht pasand hain :-)))) Thank you so much GD for your constructive FB and encouraging sweet meow... GD ab meow perfect tu ho ni sakti... As nobody is perfect and I am nobody...:-))) tu errors tu banty hain na story main boss... Waisy apka jo point of view hai uski querry ki little reflection iss chapter main show hui hai :-))) Abhijeet Sir ka kia motive tha apnay baity ka naam Daya Sir k naam py rakhny ka :-)) ye ap chapter parh k read kar laina...Really I am too much honoured having such a gem in my story review box...:-)))))) Thank you so much for your precious words sweetu... May Almighty Lord keep you in His shadow, ameen... :)
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A tightest hug to you sweetu :-*
~ One Guest reviewer ask me to update my story " SAATHI REY " as today its His/Her birthday... A big sorry baccha...I can't update my that sorry...but I update this one... Hope you don't mind and forgive sweet meow ~
* HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR * Many Many Happy Returns of the Day...Always stay blessed and keep smiling...:-)))))
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" Zindagi k iss safar main hamara humsafar bhi khud zindagi hee hai...! Aik aisa hum rahee jis k peechy agar bhago gy tu serab ( illusions ) ban k apko bhagai ga... Tab tak..( pause ) jab tak ap zindagi sy har ni jao...! Magar zindagi k iss humsafar ko agar dost bana lia jai...tu ye hum raaz...humdard ban jata hai apka...Aisa dost jo akhri saans tak sath nibhata hai...Haan agar apnay hum safar ko dost bana na hai tu ap main aik hee cheez honi chaiya ( meaningfully ) Jab bhi koi apko kirchi kirchi tory ap toot kar bikharny k bajai dobara kharay hona janty ho...! "
His mesmerizing voice is spreading his fragnance in the whole auditorium . He adds more
" Aj mjhy kisi introduction ki zaroorat ni...Acp Abhijeet Shrivastava ka naam kisi k lia naya ni hai ( pauses ) Magar aj sy 35 saal pehle Abhijeet Shrivastava ko wajood main lanay wala kisi ko yaad ni hoga ( moistly ) Saath bht jald chor gaya mera wo...( smiles ) par hath na chora ussny... Aj bhi har mushkil ka solution mjhy ussi sy milta meri... Meri tooti hui himmat ko phirsy jawan kardaita apni kisi yaad sy wo...( with moist smile ) Daya mera har kaam tere lia tha aur hai...Ye mission jo tu adhoora chor gaya tha...aj poora hua ( in heart ) tu khush hai na...Har khushi meri ( looks at his son ) tere dam sy thi aur ab bhi hai ( strongly ) wo ni tu kia hua main chahta hoon usky baad jo mere lia sab kuch hain... Mjhy ye troophi unhi k hath sy milay... ( proudly ) Mere pita Retired Acp Pardyuman...! "
Retired Acp with so much proud comes on the stage,Although time and age makes him weaker but still a peculiar shine and grace is there in his body language . He gives the trophy to Abhijeet ( whispers )
" Mere lia is sy ziada fakhar ki kia baat hogi Abhijeet ( lovingly spread hands on his head ) k mjhy tum jaisa baita mila "
After the Award giving ceremony Retired Acp Abhijeet Shrivastava handed his charge to the New Acp with humble and sincere wishes . His team with soggy heart bid bye to their most loving Guru with utmost respect . The newly retired Acp with full contentment in his heart head towards their home having his Son on his right and his Wife on left...under the thousands blessings of his deary Father...CID Family on his back and in front of him HE is standing with open arms... Showing thumbs up sign...giving all okay wink...!
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He is strolling tensely in the lounge . His to and fro leg swings is showing his restless state .
Voice ( caringly ) kia hogaya hai baita kun itny bechain ho rahy ho...
He : pata ni kun Ammu dil bht ajeeb sa horaha ( looking at closed door ) Dad bhi abhi tak bahir ni niklay hain...( tensely ) Jab sy function sy aain hain study main band hogai hain...
His Mother ( calmly ) baita inka tu tumhain pata hai na jab bhi Daya g ki yaad sy distrub hojaty tu ghanton study main band rehty...tum pareshan mat ho ajaingy wo thori dair main...
He : ( disturbingly ) Hhmmm Ammi pata hai... Par najany kun aj ajeeb si feeling arahi...( stands up ) main aik baar Jaky daikh aata hoon... Dil ko shaanti mil jaigi mere...
His Mother ( softly ) jao daikh aao apnay baba ko...
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He knocks on the door " Baba " . No reply from the other side . He once again knocks on the door,again no reply makes his scare bar raise . He continuously starts striking the door one after the other ( panicking ) " Baba " .
Someone puts hand on her shoulder ( softly ) baita aisy ni kholaingy darwaza tumhary dad ( forwarding ) ye lo study ki spare key...
The panicking figure jerks loudly on this loving touch ( scaredly ) hugged his mother tightly ( mumbled ) maa darwaza kun ni khol rahy Dad...
His mother ( softly ) ap unki adat janty ho na jaan ( worriedly ) phir ye aj itna dar kun ( moving fingers in his hair ) jao apnay Dad ko bula k lai aao tab tak main khana lagati hoon...
He softly removes his tears and nodes in yes...
With spare keys,He opens the door and stepped inside . The first glance which sooths his scared heart is his Dad's moving rocking chair . He ( angrily ) Dad apko pata hai main kitna pareshan hogaya tha jab apnay mere itnay bajany py bhi darwaza ni khola tu ( pouts ) ab apka Daya gussa hai apsy...apko mana na paryga mjhy ( cutely ) ye koi baat hui bhala...na koi treat na hug ( naughtily ) bhai aj tu ap retire ho...mana k ap chachu sy hum sabsy ziada piyaar karty hain...par ye kia baat hui k khud ko kamry main band kar lia hai...He becomes quite after feeling silence from the other side...He is standing in such a way that only back of rocking chair is visible to him...He scaredly "Boss"...( running ) comes in front of his Dad and becomes paused . Red sweating face... Titled head... Almost closed eyes...He ( shouts ) Dad ( fearing ) ni... He with trembling hands holds his Dad's cold hand...as cold as like a dead body...
Abhijeet : with hand on his chest ( almost breathlessly ) struggles to opens his eyes...
He ( panickingly ) m...a...a...i...n..wo...a..b...h...i...a...m...b...u...l...a...n...c...e...k...o...call ( his words are also starts shattering )
Abhijeet ( with fingers as speaking is difficult for him ) he signals his son to sits in his lap...
He immediately places his head on his father's knee...tears silently starts dropping from his eyes...
Abhijeet ( his sinus are now playing hide n seek ) D...yana...nd ( a long pause )
He with this long gap feels scared so looks up and relax a bit after finding his father's opened eyes...
Abhijeet ( after a great difficulty places his hand on his Son's head ) d...ai...k...h...o...d..a..y...a ( breathless )
He : ( scaredly calls ) Dad...! ( like an insane ) starts searching his cell in his pockets ( mumbling ) kuch...ni..h..oga...dad...main...kuch..ni ( his words left in his mouth as )
Abhijeet ( one last time gather his all courage ) m..j...h...y...l...a...i...n...y...a...y...a...h...a...i ( pleading tone ) m...j...h...y...j...a...n...e...d..o...
He ( like a child...who cries a lot...if someone snatches his favourite toy ) Ni... ( stubbornly ) main kisi ko ni lai janay ki ijazzat ni dunga apnay Dad ko ( crying )
Abhijeet ( mumbled ) D...a...y...a...P...a...a...n...i...
He ( hurriedly stands up ) grabs the jug lying on the study table and after taking out water in glass...attaches the glass with his dad's dried lips...( lovingly ) with due care makes him drink the water...
Abhijeet ( smilingly with peace on his face ) Mera baita bht bhadur hai ( signals towards the table through his finger ) closes his eyes with satisfaction...
He wants to deny him... That he is not brave... He is still like a small child for him...but after seeing his dad closed his eyes...low shrieks comes out from his mouth "Dad"..."Boss" ( he calls him from all the names which he likes the most ) Shakes him first with care and after finding no response from him starts shaking him vigorously... He falls down on floor with a thud...holding his head...
His mother...who just come to scold them...Why they are taking so long to come ? Just paused on the door after finding her son crying like anything and husband's tilted neck...
His Mother ( scaredly ) baita tumhary papa...?
Dayanand ( looks at his mother with red eyes ) W...o...g..a..i..c..h..a..c..h..u..k..s..a..t..h ( cracked words )
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He is standing in front of a burning pyre . Around him everyone is crying like anything but he is not crying... His eyes are shining strangely . Paandit g gave his Pita's aasthiyaan ( instructed him ) baita inhain ganga main baha daina...He ( without any expression ) hold the kalaash possesively...
" DAYA...ye naam mjhy duniya main sab sy ziada aziz hai mere baity... Tumhain ye naam dainy ka maqsaad tumhara tumhary chachu sy comparison ni tha meri jaan... Main tu bus apni zindagi k inn do DAYA ki chabi ko hamesha apnay dil main qaid karky rakhna chahta tha... Aik daya wo jisny andheron sy nikal kar roshni k safar main mera sath dia... Aur aik Daya tum jisky ronay ki masoom awaz ny mjhy gir kar phir sy uthna sikhaya dia "
Water welcomes him...He emptied the whole kalaash in ganga... The ashes are absorbed in the holy water... Far away...beyond seven skies...Two friends hold each other hands and slowly walks towards the bright light... He then placed the kalaash in water... it starts floating on the low water waves...
" Baity kia hua jo dad ja rahy...Par apnay Daya py bht saari zumedari sonp k ja rahy...main janta hoon mera baita apnay Dad ki zumedari k bojh ko baht achy sy nibhai ga... Meri jaan apko Dad ka maan ban na hai aur apnay chachu ka naam zinda rakhna hai... Ye dairies daikh rahy ho... Ye apko raah dikhaingi...jab bhi ap thakny lago...Issy parh laina... Apko apnay Dad jaisa ban na hai par unki khamiyaan ni laini hain...Apnay Dad ki saari khamiyaan subtract karky nai aur achi examples set karni hai...Apko apnay Dad k saaray khuwab poory karnay hain...Tu bus bht hosly aur sabar k sath ye waqt guzar laina meri jaan...Jab ap apni saari responsiblities puri kar logy...tu Dad ajaingy apni jaan ko lainy...!
He folds the paper...and then touches it on his eyes . Through his Dad's last letter for him...he can smells his Dad . He softly spreads hand on the diaries in his lap...which once belongs to his Dad and chachu . He stands up and rubs the corner of his eyes . He looks at the kaalash which is going far ( whispers strongly )
" Dad main apki har baat manunga...( tears falls down from his eyes ) Apka acha wala baita jo hoon...Aur jab ap aingy na tu khoob larunga apssy...! "
~ Indeed it is the cycle of life... Aik aata hai tu dusra jata hai...Par kuch kahania ( stories ) kabhi puraani ni hoti...wo baar baar apnay ap ko dohrati hain...Aur kitaab k adhoory panon ko pura karti hain...apni marzi k rangoon sy ~
PANEE KUCH ADHOORY SY...!
Nishaan mitay mitay sy
Zindagani bhi kia khoob hai
Baat sirf itni si hai
Panee adhoory reh jaty hain
Zindagian tham jati hain
Par kitaab-e zeest phir bhi poori hoti
Kun k issi adhoory pan ka naam zindagi
PANEE KUCH ADHOORY SY...!
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