Chapter 28

AN: Kishimoto owns all except my characters-Kiminari, and Kimiko, and later characters. Also I'm probably not going to follow any of the story line except a few small things. I may take the characters outside their natural personalities, but that's because it's my story, and it'll add to it. Another thing: since I'm not following the story line of the series- All main (good) characters will start out the same age as they should be, but even though the Akatsuki will be around, the war will not happen until later; if it does at all. Again this is because I'm making up my own story line; it gets kinda boring when nothing has changed and, you readers would be able to guess what was going to happen all the time. So, enjoy, and please comment, review, rate, whatever you wanna do. :D

P.S. I don't like to go into detail to tell you things most of you already know, and if you don't already know them, then it's best I don't tell you.

PPS Kazuma and Haru will be based on friends from school. Others will be mentioned later. :D

PPPS I'll try to keep Tobi's dialogue structure as close to the original as possible. And I'm not going to put any suffixes after Deidara's either; it's really not that noticeable in the anime, and it takes a lot of time.

Madara's P.O.V.

I heard a quiet knock on the wall that hid my door and sensed Obito's son, Kazuma, outside. As soon as I opened the door, he jumped into the room, knowing that I would close the door as quickly as I had opened it. He bowed deeply and said, "Madara-sama, Kimiko is just fine, but I thought I should tell you she nearly fainted." I raised an eyebrow, questioning him. "She was frightened by one of Hidan's movies." He clarified.

"Hm. I wasn't aware she was frightened of anything like that." I stated.

"She said it was because she's never seen anyone innocent being killed." I mentioned a bit quieter. I felt bad talking about her when she wasn't around.

"She's still very innocent. She's told me that she hasn't awakened her Mangekyo yet. I think we've found the perfect opportunity." I said thoughtfully.

"How's that?" He asked confused.

"She was close to the one-tail jinchuriki when she lived in Suna. I've noticed how she easily lets things go. If we capture the jinchuriki and remove his tailed beast…" I trailed off.

"His death will trigger it." Kazuma finished. "But won't she be angry with you?" He asked

"She won't know that it was the Akatsuki's doing. I'll have Pein send Deidara and Sasori, then after it's all finished your father and I will alter everyone's memories of the event." I told him.

He nodded in agreement, then remembered something. "By the way, I'd keep Zetsu on watch down this hall tonight." He said awkwardly. "Haru stayed behind to take care of Kimiko until she feels better, but…" He trailed of embarrassed by his assumption of his friends' intentions.

I chuckled. "Don't worry, I doubt anything will happen yet." I said. "Besides, I've had him down this hall since she arrived." He laughed a little, then headed for the door.

When he had gone, I called for Zetsu through our minds. When he had appeared I asked him if he had heard anything from them.

"No. She did tell him her little secret though."

"She only told him her name. She told him she couldn't tell about you yet."

"She told him he'd find out in a year or so, though."

"She hasn't broken any rules; I never told her she couldn't tell him her name sooner, if she thought he would accept it." I replied. "How did he react?"

"He seemed slightly bothered by the name 'Uchiha'."

"He got over it quickly though. He told her he was only worried about what his brother would say."

"So, he's completely OK with this?" I asked him.

He nodded in agreement, so I dismissed him after telling him to keep a close eye on the two of them. At least I wouldn't have to worry about her heart getting broken over love, just over the death of a friend. Man, being the leader of the Akatsuki and a father, is really hard; I'm really going to hate seeing my daughter upset after she finds out about Gaara's death. I thought to myself, as I prepared to go to sleep.

AN: I know it's a really short chapter, but I started another one that's based on Red vs. Blue, though I'll probably wait to put it up until after I've written a few chapters.

To my readers, I need a little help in the love story part; I know it's sad, but I've lived seventeen years and have never dated –I asked my cousin for help but then we remembered, neither has she. The problem is most of the guys at our schools, are all either jerks or taken; we've agreed that college should weed out most of the stupid ones, so that we can pick the cream of the crop –ROTC boys; they know how to take care of themselves, and they know their place, not to mention RESPECT, which is kinda hard to get from a guy these days. Anyway, writer's block sucks; I already know what's going to happen later, I just don't know what'll happen right now.

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