This story has been in my head for about half a year and I just finished the third stages of planning for the script. I can promise that some elements of the story have rarely or never been used. Before anyone decides to be a smart ass yes I know there is no such thing as new, that's why I said rare.
Main Characters
Naruto Uzumaki
Aoi Megami (surprise its fem Grimmjow)
Sasuke
Minato
Kushina
Naruko (twin 1)
Natsumi (twin 2)
In this story Naruto is all but forgotten by his family who either outright ignores him or blames him for their shortcomings. Eventually he ends up as a slave in everything but the name but one day he goes over the edge and wants to take the easy way out. Lets just sat the entity he meets has other plans for him so now lets follow Naruto on his journey through time.
Last Time
Kushina took on last look at her son and made a decision that would start the prophecy of chosen hero's. It was said this very prophecy was given to the sage of six paths and now it would start right here. This chain of events would not only affect the ninja world but also everything with two eyes, ears, a nose and a mouth.
"Ok, lets do it." Kushina said with a new resolve. After all wouldn't you rather be known for training hero's than training nobodies.
Baby Naruto let a tear drop down his eye. It was as if by divine intervention they were telling the adults that they should reconsider this decision.
Ah, oh well this way is better. We get to see more blood.
Story Start
Today is a special day. Yes it is the fifth anniversary of the Kyuubi no Yoko's defeat, and yes it is also the day of the Kyuubi festival; though those aren't the reasons why today was so special. No, today is special because it is the Uzumaki- Namikaze twins Naruko and Natsumi's birthday. Literally everyone in Konoha knows of today and they all try their best to give the twins gift, but if you didn't catch the princesses outside on their festival walk or you weren't on the parties guest list, then guess what you don't get the pleasure of giving them a present.
So on today many ask, who is this foreign boy that is always seen with the Namikaze family. Some try to friend him to get close to the family, and some just wish they were him but neither of those actions work. This child, this blond haired, blue eyed boy was none other than Naruto Uzumaki- Namikaze, Naruko and Natsumi's identical triplet brother. Some say he was just a no name that dresses up like the family to get on their good side but so far none know the true story.
Ever since Jiraiya and Minato made a public announcement about Naruko and Natsumi being the children of legend no one even knows a shred of evidence as to who this blond bastard is.
Naruto slowly walked behind his family with his head down. This is the second year he can remember not getting any recognition on his own birthday. Nope just a happy birthday Naruto from his mother and father. They didn't even call him son, but that's not the worst part. No it gets better. When his sisters get thousands of gifts, guess how many he gets. You could say that since he was the oldest he must then get twice as many, right; well no that's wrong. No you can count on your fingers how many presents he get.
The number is 2. One is from his dad and one is from his mom, and this something his sisters capitalize on. They usually end up saying this,' Ha, Naruto-ni baka, I told you, you aren't special.' That comment comes from Naruko while Natsumi the red headed one that tries to somewhat be friendly makes it worse. She'll say, 'Sorry, Naruto-ni kun but I guess you'll have to try again next year. Maybe then people will think you're special.'
Yup life was great. Chores, barely getting leftovers, being the most punished because your sister blames stuff on you, yeah that's the life. You really couldn't ask for a better one.
'Doesn't matter if I did ask because no one is going to grant it,' Naruto thought to himself as he walked forward with his head down. Since he wasn't really watching where he was going at the moment he crashed into a man who was running after his pet dog. On impact Naruto fell backwards and Minato and Kushina turned around to see their oldest on the ground.
Kushina being a mother rushed to her downed son and tried to deduce if he was ok. Naruto knew not to cry, since he found out the crying wouldn't make it any better. Minato finding out that his son was fine turned to the merchant, one Wisabi Biskue stopped and apologized frequently.
"Hey, don't just stand there take out your check book and offer to pay for my son's yukata, that thing was very expensive." Minato said glaring daggers at the man. The poor merchant gulped and nodded earnestly seeing the dirty yukata.
"I'm terribly sorry for hitting this child, lord fourth. Of course I will pay for all the cleaning and damages for the yukata and then I will send you another one as compensation." He said pleadingly but inside he was freaking out.
'I just hit a boy, and not any boy the fourth Hokage's supposed son,' he thought sweating bullets. People all around were having similar thoughts, many questioning if the boy was legitimately the fourths son. Many saw the resemblance and were shocked at the identity of the boy. He wasn't well known so he mustn't be that special.
Naruto stood up and dusted himself off while his mother stared at him to see if he was fine. Finding he was she smiled but then she heard a snicker behind her which later turned into full blown laughter.
"Haha, look at Naruto-ni!" Naruko said with Natsumi joining in the laugh. People all around joined in as well to get on the twins good side while Naruto felt an invisible tear snake from his eyes. Kushina not really being such a great judge of character heard his hollow laugh and genuinely thought it was one of joy. The laughter subsided and the family walked off with Minato question Naruto on what was going on.
"Hey, Naruto how did you hit him, were you not looking where you were going?" Minato asked in a 'fatherly' tone.
Naruto looked over to the man he calls father and answered his question truthfully. "No father, I was lost in my own thought so I wasn't exactly paying attention to the road," Naruto said.
Minato thought he was at the point where he could joke around with his son so he did. "Well then runt, next time look where you're going or are you going to pay for a 100,000 ryo yukata that the man from before can't possibly afford." Minato said with a tone that meant trouble.
Naruto couldn't sense the joke so he did the one thing his dad said he didn't like seeing him do. A stray tear dropped from his face and he said, "No, I'm sorry father," but it was too late. The tear hit the floor and Minato glared at Naruto getting serious.
"What have I told you about crying," Minato demanded seeing his eldest son let loose the water works. Kushina was too far ahead to notice what was going on and come to Naruto's rescue and his sisters were in the same predicament.
"You said- huff- you don't like seeing your oldest son- huff- cry. That I half to –huff- stay strong to protect my sisters," Naruto said breathing in from strained intervals. Minato had enough of the water works and he got pissed at Naruto.
"Look stop crying or you'll be in your room for a week again," Minato said frowning at Naruto. By now Naruto couldn't control his tears and they kept sliding making Minato madder. "Ok, since you don't want to stop you're in your room for the rest of the night so don't come down stairs for you birthday. Keep at it and you won't get any resents to," Minato yelled. Kushina turned around just to see Naruto cry out a no to his father and his tears automatically stop.
"Come on dad please, I don't like going to my room," Naruto said tugging on the man's yukata but Minato wouldn't have it. Kushina tried to come to Naruto's rescue but it the damage was already done.
"Dear, don't you think you're being too rough on him, he isn't as resilient as Naruko or Natsumi," she said making Naruto's inner turmoil boil over to a new point. Minato looked at Kushina and sighed while putting his foot down. "Kushi-chan, if he is the oldest and my only son he needs to learn to toughen up. Ahh the boy will get over it in about a week," Minato said walking off with Natsumi. The girl gave Naruto a sad smile as he continually wept tears.
Kushina stood Naruto up and took his hand before not long after she let go feeling him slightly tug away from him. She took this as a sign that he was good so she walked forward leaving Naruto and Naruko to their own devices.
"See, I told you Naruto," she said rubbing ionized salt coated in lemon juice in his wounds, "Not! Special!" she said making Naruto start to break.
She walked ahead and Naruto just stood there staring at his family as one of his latent tears dripped from his face. Unknown to Naruto these would be some of the last tears to ever grace his face, for after today he would be a different boy. Let's just hope this change is for the better.
(Later that night)
Minato felt kind of bad for how he had treated Naruto earlier so he decided to end his punishment early and let him go down to the party, but unknown to him this would only serve to make things worse. Naruto sat in a corner alone and reading a picture book while Naruko and Natsumi went around and conversed with their friends. These friends where asking who was the blond boy always around them.
'Seriously, how could you not think this was our brother,' thought Natsumi as she explained that Naruto was her brother again. This just lead them to thinking that he wasn't anything special and though Natsumi didn't want to she agreed Naruto wasn't all that special either.
Time passed and eventually it was time to get presents. Naruko was nearing the hundreds while Naruko just reached her eighty seventh box for her. Minato seeing Naruto look down decided to give him his present. Naruto shocked seeing his father in front of him saw he had a box wrapped up and giving it to him. Naruto told his father thank you as he ripped the paper open to find another box. He opened it excitedly only to see that it was a stupid toad shaped wallet. Naruto being the grateful child he was told his father thank you even though he thought the gift was absolutely lousy.
Kushina came up after him and gave him a slightly bigger box and Naruto unwrapped this one with slightly more gusto. Her gifts did always seem better than his dads anyways. As Naruto got to the box he noticed it was the same size as the one his dad got him. Fearing the worst Naruto opened it hoping for something different only to sigh in his head at the sheer ludicrousness of his mom. It was the exact same frog wallet, but the only difference was this one had a few ryo bills inside of it. Naruto closed his eyes and did his notorious big fake grin while thanking his mom.
In honesty Naruto thought both gifts to be last minute gifts and actually he was slightly wrong, no try last second. They literally bought those at the same stand while they were out walking not noticing they both bought the same thing. The only difference was Kushina put a bit more thought into hers stuffing a meager amount of money inside of it.
'Great another rotten year of me not being special enough,' Naruto thought with his inner turmoil raising into critical levels. Just one slight push in the wrong direction and he would snap. 'Well at least I'm still the heir to both clans, at least they can't take away my birthright. I can finally start training next year as my right. If they did take it though well I don't really know what I'd do,' Naruto thought.
"Everyone I have a very special gift that goes for both of my dear daughters, the saviors of this world," Minato said with everyone cheering before letting it die down as he went up to his two girls. He put on two familiar rings one on each girl's finger. Naruto wondered why those rings looked so familiar but his question was answered by Minato's next announcement.
"I give you Naruko the sole heir to the Namikaze clan, and Natsumi the heir to the Uzumaki family," Minato said with loud cheering and the crowd broke out in screams. Kushina herself was extremely proud; in fact she was too proud so she forgot her oldest child who was in the corner wide eyed.
'Those were mine. He… he told me that only I can be the heir since I was the oldest and it was my birthright. My birthright, my line, my right of age and mine alone. So why… why did he just give it to my sisters," Naruto thought tearing up slowly. He suddenly heard many voices in his head at the same time pushing his grief higher.
'Kill yourself boy, your father doesn't love you. Ha see boy your mother hates you. You are a failure, you're not special. Hmph even in your own parent's eyes you are nothing, a nobody. Go one stick yourself in the heart, jump off a cliff. Yeah that's right jump off a cliff and join the other world your parents said all dead people go to,' the voices said continuously.
Naruto couldn't take it anymore and he ran out the side door of the house that was left open. He ran right past the guards and up to the Hokage face mountain. He kept going, he couldn't look back now. If he did he was sure something bad would happen to him, though being four he didn't question running with his head down and tears in his eyes. He just kept going until he was knocked unconscious by a couple of low tree branches. He would stay sprawled out like that until morning time.
(8 am)
Naruto woke up and looked around. He saw that he was in his special play ground as he called it. Here he would come every morning at around 7 am to about 9 am before one of his parents found him and told him not to leave without permission. It was his birthday yesterday and as a five year old he would be off the hook for the rest of the day. Then however he was reminded of yesterday's events and those same voices came back.
'Why stay boy, you're practically dead to them. Just jump off the cliff ahead of you and be done with it,' they said making Naruto edge towards the cliff. He looked over it and shook his head trying to boost his will but it just wouldn't be.
"As much as I don't like my predicament I don't want to die. I can still get my parents to acknowledge me as special." Naruto thought to himself. He was doing good fighting the urges but the voice came back and this time driving him insane to just end his suffering. He was too far gone already, and he soon realized if he did die nobody would really miss him. They'd grieve for a day and then after a while they'd get over it.
'See you're thinking it so it must be true. Why don't you just jump, that way you can see if your father and mother really care,' it said causing Naruto to cry a few tears at the truth behind the words.
Nobody would miss him, a nobody; so by jumping he would just free himself from his restrictive cage and be done with it. God it would be so easy, all he had to day was take a step further and then it would all be over. Just one step and no more blaming him unjustly, or stupid week long punishments.
As Naruto's depression sky rocketed he started putting one foot forward subconsciously and soon he would lose his balance and fall forward. Just as his mental barriers had weakened enough for him to go through with it the ground below him loosely fell apart making Naruto and part of the cliff fall down the back side of the kage stone mountain and into a strange ravine.
'I'm falling, am I going to die,' Naruto thought as he fell through the ground and closer to the ground. Just as his body was surely going to splatter against the hard granite flooring some godly force stopped his fall causing Naruto to open his eyes. 'I fell from up high, so am I dead, well I'm not touching the ground so maybe I've become a ghost?' he thought to himself.
Naruto looked and noticed he wasn't able to see through his skin like the transparent ghosts in his story books. 'Ok not a ghost, and probably not dead, so why haven't I hit the floor yet?' Naruto asked himself looking up at what was stopping his fall. The answer was amazing and Naruto knew that whatever this entity, whatever this being was that was holding him was some kind of other worldly force. Naruto could almost feel the aura that the entity exuded and he was sure that this being was super powerful.
The being holding Naruto was ghastly in appearance like the shinigami years ago, yet strangely it looks nothing like him. Where were the purple horns? Where was that pale purple face that reeked of death? This being surely didn't have them. No in fact this being glowed a bright blue and had no definite body. For eyes it had two azure glowing pools of light that had a radiance that could attract any being into them. You couldn't really see in the cave but the being didn't have a head, in fact it looked like it was wearing a hood that only showed its eyes. The body was the same way as the entity floated above the ground. He was holding Naruto with a strange blue arm that you could see through yet you couldn't. All over the body of this being were trillions, upon quadrillions of lights floating around in no particular fashion. The entity touched Naruto's head with his other arm and instantly Naruto went wide eyed.
"Wow, I get it now!" Naruto said jumping out of the semi massive blue hand.
"You're… you're the thing responsible for it all. You're like… you're god aren't you. You are the creator," Naruto said seeing the entity do a semi nod. It then snapped the two blue fingers attached to the arm that used to be holding Naruto. Around Naruto and the entity the cave lit up and he saw, well he saw the universe but he didn't know it yet.
"Uzumaki- Namikaze Naruto, I am a being of many names, Allah, Buddah, Jacob, Elloheim, Kami, Father, and even God. You may call me the name I give myself, call me the creator," the entity said in a voice that was neither masculine nor feminine. Naruto could only nod dumbly as he stared at the reason he and everything in existence was here.
"Naruto, my boy I have just finished watching you're small life and I want you to know that despite you're parents and everyone else you are special. You just don't know it yet, but you will. You are one of the children of prophecy," the creator said causing Naruto to have a mini heart attack at this revelation. The being of creation said he was the chosen child, well that was amazing.
"Listen my boy, for I must leave to go to another matter after this. You are special and this room you see before you is called Alpha Prime A, or as your people know it, this is the universe," the creator said making Naruto go wide eyed. Those lights before, they weren't ordinary lights, they were stars. The creator was literally the walking universe, but if he was what would happen if Naruto hit a star.
As Naruto tried to touch a star, not knowing that it was the very sun in the sky the creator stopped him. "I wouldn't do that my boy. That's you're sun. Put it out, and I won't be able to recreate another for a while, so you'll unknowing doom everyone," the creator said stopping Naruto in his tracks.
"As I said earlier you are special, how do you think you unconsciously found me. Who do you think made the Uzumaki god, who do you think made him tell you to go to the cliff. It was I, the creator and now it is time to give you your belated birthday gift," the entity said causing Naruto to slightly cry.
"Child do not cry. It pains me to see my own creation in such sadness and I'm sorry for how things are going so far, but I'm here to make your stronger because it is going to get a whole lot worse," the creator said while Naruto stopped crying and looked down. Naruto was reeled into a hug by two glowing blue arms that comforted him giving him serene thoughts.
"Now my child, before I go here take my hand, and I shall bestow upon you my wonders. You shall receive the powers that belong to a now extinct warrior race. As you're birthright and as you're free gift as savior of the world, I shall bestow upon you a special skill that will unlock deep inside you in time. I'm very sure you will get training today just like your significant other, in fact the training just arrived in Konoha. I must go to the other savior, please hurry," the creator said holding out the blue glowing hand.
Naruto took his hand and fainted as an influx of information hit him. He saw several men and women dressed in black shihakusho wielding swords with massive power. These blades used and energy unlike chakra but Naruto was sure when he used it they would radiate with pure chakra. He saw them all fighting giant monsters with white mask but one word that most of them said stuck out to him.
'What's a BANKAI?' he thought falling fast asleep.
"Yes sleep my child for you will need your energy to save the world. You now have the power to create, I hope you can use it to save the world, because it is going to get a lot tougher from here on out. Better hurry to the other savior, but first let me drop Naruto boy off on the surface," the creator thought floating up with Naruto sleeping in the two glowing arms.
As he set Naruto down a strange sword appeared behind him making the creator sigh.
"And now it begins huh. Well I hope this is enough to stave off that evil, or else my entire creation, my universe is done for. For now I need to head off to the second savior and bestow upon them their birthright even though they will end up taking a darker path in life," the creator said with a sigh.
With that the being just vanished into nothingness and Naruto slowly awoke to see a pair of unfamiliar sandals standing over him. His shakily looked up to see a greying elderly man wearing samurai armor look at him. Naruto smirked before letting darkness embrace him again and the old man gazed at Naruto.
'This kid, where did he come from? All evidence says he just came from that gorge, could he be the one that fortune teller told me to teach. He has blond hair and blue eyes, and I meet him by a strange gorge, maybe I shall train him,' the man though while leaning Naruto against a tree and setting up a place to make some outdoor tea.
(With the creator, other chosen savoir)
"But, why, why choose me… why not my other sibling? Why am I destined to save the world," a voice said standing behind the creator. The creator itself was now red a compliment the aura of the person in front of him.
"You were made because of the need. That need was the one to eradicate you ancestor before she can come back and destroy the world, you must or it will be the end. Listen my child, take my hand and I shall bestow upon you all the power you will ever need. I know you will walk a dark path but be sure to protect your significant other ok. You two are my last resort to stop her," the entity said reaching out with a red arm.
The person in front of the entity contemplated before taking the beings hand and they were filled with knowledge the previously didn't have.
People were moving the elements as if they were one with them. Four races of people that desperately needed to unite under one banner and yet they did eventually. They breathed fire like most ninja do, they willed water, made the very earth crumble, even made the air subject to their will. Yet one of these stuck out to the person. This person could do it all and probably more. 'What's an avatar?' the person said falling out.
The entity caught his other child before they could hit the cold hard tatami mat. The creator laid them down gently and spoke.
"Now be good my child for now you have been bestowed a gift just like your helper. One has with shape manipulation that puts all others to shame, and the other has elemental manipulation that even the gods couldn't dream of. You two are my pride and joy, my children now go and follow your own paths. Though you may both end up hating your place of origins and even your deepest origins you shall come to accept them and in due time forgive them but for now my angels rest and I shall take care of thee until it's your turn to take care of something for me," the creator said vanishing from the child's room.
Just what is going on?
Why is the creator of even the gods doing these things, and what are those threats the chosen two must deal with? One thing is for certain things will definitely get tougher from here on out.
(Back with Naruto)
Naruto woke up to the smell of Jasmin tea with a hint of honeydew. He looked around and noticed the elderly samurai man from before sitting in front of him sipping tea, with his eyes closed. 'Strange' Naruto thought before trying to slip away, however the man spoke without even opening his eyes. He could tell by the change in Naruto's breathing that the boy had awakened.
"And where are you going my young friend. Do you not wish to drink your cup of tea," the man said speaking to Naruto.
The blond whirled around to see the man still sitting with his eyes closed so he thought he was talking to himself. With that in mind Naruto tried to leave again only for the man to stop him once again this time with the same verbal request fro before.
"Are, you sure you don't want any tea my blond friend. From seeing you earlier expression you seemed in a troubled emotional state, tea will calm your mind," the man said speaking directly to Naruto. "The tea is directly to the right of you, take a sip and let the energy with in you flow peacefully," the man said once again.
Naruto was stunned thinking the man was blind but he was proven wrong when the stranger opened his left eye and looked before closing it again. Naruto sensed that the man was very wise so he did as asked and took a sip from the tea. As he did he could quite literally feel a weight leave his mind and chest and he relaxed.
"Ahh, see tea makes it better. My young friend I have a question for you, well actually two and I will ask them one at a time. Is this ok?" he said while taking a slow sip of his own tea.
"Sure… yeah I'm ok with that mister..." Naruto said leaving it out for the man to finish.
"Please lad, call me Mifune" he said making Naruto relax.
"So Mifune-san, what would you like to ask me?" Naruto asked him trying to see if this guy was some kind of rapist or something, because if he was his mother taught him to run and loudly scream for help.
"First I will ask you a personal question blond child, would your name happen to be Naruto Uzumaki?" Mifune asked trying to see if that fortune teller was correct. Naruto looked at Mifune skeptically before nodding which Mifune smiled at.
"Good, and assuming you came from out of that gorge did you have that sword before you went down there?" causing Naruto to go wide eyed. 'What sword?" he thought looking around surprised to see a weapon like that leaning on a tree next to him. Naruto was genuinely shocked as he didn't have anything to say on that.
"You don't need to answer any more Uzumaki-san I have my answer, but now answer me another question. Would you like me to train you in the way of not only the sword but also the scrolls left inside of the sleeve of your shirt?" Mifune asked seeing Naruto look and grab the scroll too.
'What this Uchū-ken and Uchū no Mai,' Naruto thought. (Universe fist, and Dance of the Universe)
Naruto thought over the question and realized that the creator must have slipped him the sword and scrolls seeing that they were all universe themed. Question was why, but then he realized that I was simply because he needed to save the world. So with that Naruto knew, his parents wouldn't be training him anytime soon since he was no longer the heir and he couldn't really learn sword techniques alone, plus he had nowhere to train without prying eyes. Yup he made up his mind.
"Mifune sensei, I thank you for this humble opportunity. When may we begin?" Naruto asked seeing his sensei nudge him towards a slip of paper that a strange seal on it. 'Teleport'
"Naruto-san, around the world in the various countries there are a few of these teleport slips of paper that high class individuals such as myself use to travel long distance in short time. Today I will help you unlock you're chakra and then you shall learn to push it into this papwer so you can teleport to and from the iron country without any suspicion. For now let's begin lesson one," Mifune said sitting down in a meditative pose.
"Chakra, is the essence, that all living things give off constantly no matter what. So guess what everything living, you, me, the tree's, even that colony of ants behind you possess chakra and it grows with experience and time. Today's lesson is a basic ninja and samurai skill and that is drawing out your chakra and learning to direct it into these twelve hand signs." Mifune said while Naruto felt something appear and he felt Mifune's power.
"It is impressive you can still stand with the amount of chakra I'm putting out but I am only putting out about five percent. Now watch closely these are the twelve hand signs and how to draw out chakra. Most beginners form the ram sign and then try to feel a pull in their gut but with experience you will no longer need to do this so now you try," Mifune said showing Naruto the ram sign. Naruto accidently put his left hand above his right, but Mifune quickly corrected him and Naruto concentrated deep with in him.
He felt a massive pull and the a calming yet strongly embracive aura extrude from himself.
"This boy, in one try not only unlocked it but…" Mifune gaped as he felt Naruto get closer and closer to calling out his chakra and Mifune could honestly say his energy had a very comforting feeling to it.
(With Sasuke Uchiha 2 hours later)
"Now Sasuke, since you did so well unlocking your chakra and since you have so great control I think I shall teach you your first technique. Call it the Uchiha rite of passage if you will but mastering this technique will let you earn the ability to wear our insignia proudly on your back. Watch for I shall demonstrate once and then my little brother I want you to try," a raven haired teen said while his brown haired father stood quietly behind him.
The child Sasuke nodded seeing his brother go through several hand seals at a pace slow enough for Sasuke to follow. Though it wasn't his fast speed nor did he put much chakra into his jutsu, the result was still amazing.
Tora- Saru- I- Ushi- Tora: Fire style: Fire Ball Jutsu
Itachi inhaled a large gallon of air before building up the chakra in his chest for an amazing burst of energy, then using fire manipulation he pushed the flame chakra in his throat before igniting it at the top of his throat. Sasuke watched as his brother exhaled a flame the size of a desk. The continuous flame kept going until Itachi cut his chakra flow ending the technique.
"Now don't get upset if you mess up the…" Itachi's words died in his mouth when he saw what Sasuke was doing. Sasuke flew through hand seals before stopping on Tora. The speed was easily high genin borderline chunnin speed, and that deadly accuracy, Itachi just knew his brother would pull the jutsu off when he saw that.
Tora- Saru- I- Ushi- Tora: Fire style: Fire Ball Jutsu
Sasuke's fire ball was significantly bigger than Itachi's kid size flame ball. Though Itachi only put 1 /10 of his chakra into the attack it still paled as he sensed that Sasuke put the exact same amount as him into the fire ball. He knew Sasuke had 1 third the chakra he did so Sasuke only put a third of his strength into the attack. Still the result was amazing, Sasuke spat out a house sized fireball which made Itachi's seem like the moon compared to the earth.
Fugaku Uchiha whom was both of the brothers' father was not only impressed but stunned that his younger son was so in tune with fire manipulation to that degree. Sure there was pretty much no shape manipulation to the fireball jutsu but still the fact that a five year old can put 1/3 his own strength into an attack and it be significantly bigger than his oldest was amazing. This boy was a prodigy, and he was shaping up to be better than Itachi.
Sasuke cut the flow of chakra to his attack and the jutsu ended with him huffing out in exhaustion, a small wisp of smoke coming from his mouth as he gathered his strength again.
"Sasuke that was amazing, you definitely mastered…" Itachi was cut off by Sasuke's hand going up.
"No nii-san as you can see my control was deplorable, I put more chakra in than I wanted so my ball came out bigger than yours. No I suspect in two more tries I will master this technique," Sasuke said analyzing his faults. Itachi's eyes went up in surprise. He easily pointed out his own mistakes, and they were all the same ones Itachi himself was going to say. Fugaku to was impressed but his amazement rose when he saw his boy going for the hand seals again.
Tora- Saru- I- Ushi- Tora: Fire style: Fire Ball Jutsu
This time Sasuke put in the correct amount of chakra and he breathed out a ball of chakra that was slightly bigger than Itachi's. '1/6 this time, he mastered a C rank jutsu in two tries,' Itachi thought while Fugaku two was seeing money bags and mission scrolls in his eyes. This boy would surely bring the Uchiha back to the pinnacle of its life cycle and he could even help in the revolt. These dark thoughts laced Fugaku's mind unaware of the events to unfold in 3 years.
Sasuke this time got a feel for his chakra before gathering it just like he did the previous two times. His control shot up rapidly so of course now the need for seals has become almost moot. With that in mind Sasuke carefully shaped his chakra before igniting it at the top of his throat. He then inhaled life sustaining oxygen before getting ready to exhale. Itachi and Fugaku had miniature heart attacks at what Sasuke was doing but for Fugaku he soon saw more money and mission scrolls.
Fire Style: Fire Ball Jutsu
Sasuke exhaled a fireball that was slightly smaller than Itachi's first one yet this one had more flare and heat to it. Itachi fainted while Fugaku gave a hearty laugh. Oh yes his plans would be perfect, all he need do is corrupt Sasuke's mind and he has a mini weapon that can demand what he needs done.
Sasuke cut the flow of chakra to his technique before falling back while thinking. 'Is this the extent of my power? No it's not I need to refine it and improve my control, and then I will make my dreams come true,' Sasuke thought to himself. Fugaku caught his younger son before he hit the ground and held him while going over to his oldest.
He never saw the air slightly distort behind him nor did he see the dainty black fog the seemed to vanish like cotton candy.
(Naruto 10 minutes later)
Naruto had trained for a while and well his control of his chakra was not where he wanted it to be, but strangely he felt very in tune with his chakra but he summed it up to it being extra weak. That was not the case as he soon realized he was doing things that he heard ninja and eve Mifune-sensei say were nearly impossible. His shape manipulation was amazing for anyone, especially a kid his age who just unlock his chakra that day.
Naruto just finished using his chakra to spell out his name. His chakra had a slight green tint to it as Naruto wrote his name but it soon went back to its default blue. Naruto's name shone brightly above Mifune's head and Naruto laughed as his teachers mouth just went lower and lower.
"This kid is so young, yet he can do shape manipulation like he's had years of practice. Man I just know he's the one I'm supposed to train. Well at least he cant send chakra into the tag, that way we can work on his control back in the iron country. All he has to do is hide a tag in his room and poof easy access to and fro each place." Mifune thought seeing his pupil play around with his chakra.
"Ok Naruto, that's enough for today. Rest up and tomorrow remember what I told you. At nine on the dot push chakra into the slip of paper and it will teleport you to the iron country for more training. If your parents ask just tell them you are playing for a while and if they don't believe you the seal has a sensor that tells when foreign chakra is entering your room. We can just send you back and boom no suspicion. Now remember we go from nine to seven got it," Mifune said packing up his tea kit.
"Yes Mifune sensei, got you loud and clear. I shall see you tomorrow," Naruto said picking up his blade. He was going to take it and the scrolls home but Mifune stopped him.
"Wait Naruto, I know you just got the sword and scrolls but let me take them. You may get mad but I have a good reason. See if your parents see you with them they will ask questions and you don't want that do you," Mifune said seeing Naruto sahke his head.
"Good, don't worry you have my word as a samurai that nothing bad shall happen to your scrolls or your sword and I promise no one other than you shall ever view the scroll," Mifune said bowing to Naruto. Naruto bowed back to his sensei before looking at the sun. Mifune taught him to read to time of day just off of the location of the sun and Naruto approximated that it was 10: 20. Yup his parents were going to be mad.
"Bye Mifune sensei, see you tomorrow," Naruto said running off with the tag I his hand. As he went over the horizon Mifune quietly thought to himself.
'That boy, he will change the ninja world. I just know it will be in a good way,' he thought before pushing chakra into the tag and teleporting to the iron country.
End
Ok so this story was my try.
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Next time on Naruto Bonds of Hate
Naruto has been learning from Mifune and Sasuke from his family. The two children both will reach their objects but just what are they. Another thing, why does Naruto have a strange cat?
Find out next time on Naruto Bonds of Hate.
