Your Last Breath

by V.L. Cari

Shizuo falls ill after years of smoking, and is slowly wasting away. As Izaya observes from afar, he can't help but worry for his enemy. But is it from a desire to not lose his play toy? Or because of a fondness for the blonde he never knew he had?

34. AN! Why the Online Chats ended

Cari here! We've been getting a few comments about the online chats ending so fast, and I think it's a very valid point. But I do have a reason why! xD

I know we ended the online chatting fast, but we didn't want it to end up becoming repetitive. Technically, the chatting did last for a week, but if we wrote a weeks worth of chats, then it would have gotten boring (to us at least). There really is only so much you can do with the online chatting. We wanted the chats to to be a transition into the larger plot of the story. Think of it as a sub story? Something to use as a bridge to the next big thing.

Hopefully this makes sense why we did cut it off. Now we can continue on with the story and get to the next big plot bunny that appears. We have surprises up my sleeve and some loose ends and concepts to touch back on. Because everything that has happened has importance and will come back later in the story! :3 So, once again, Thank you so much for the feedback!