A/N: I was wondering if I could get some constructive criticism on this little story? I know that there are a handful of people that have openly told me that they enjoy the story, but I'm hoping that somebody will come along and point out all the flaws and tell me how to make it better? I really want to make this story the best that it can be, but I'll need everybody's help to do this. So if you happen to be reading this story and find something that needs to be fixed/corrected, then please let me know! As I've said before, I'm writing this to help improve my writing, and feedback helps make this happen!
Thank you all so much for the support you've given me so far! I do my best to thank each and every one of you personally to show my appreciation! :D
Please enjoy, and let me know what you think could use improvement~! c:
Disclaimer: I don't own Transformers Prime, just the random OCs and plot rainbows that I barf out.
Chapter Thirty-One: Slip of the Tongue
"So, I'm Marian, your babysitter." The adult began to lead Jack to her car, and he noted that it was, indeed, a pink 'Herbie'.
"See Jack? I told you she turned out to be great! We have to keep her, especially since the Autobots-" Raf slapped his hands over Miko's mouth.
"The... 'Autobots'?"
"Miko! Fowler told us we weren't supposed to let her in on it!" Jack cried out as he got in the front passenger seat.
"It's not like I told her everything! I just let one word slip! Let's see you do better!"