Heya peoples! Just doing my business writing stories to your full enjoyment and satisfaction. Okay now I just sound like a nerd. ENJOY! Continuation from part 1. And a shout- out to karateGirl77 For guessing who the screeching person is correctly.
Jack's Pov
What the heck is happening? One minute everyone was laughing, then we went to sparring and now Kim and I stuck like a pretzel. But I'm kind of enjoying it. Now some of you might start complaining that I have a girlfriend and stuff but Kim isn't like all the other girls I've seen. She's cute, pretty, smart, funny, anything just name it. But everyone is watching and it's just so embarrassing. could this get any worse?
Voice: Jackie!
Jack: (silently) oh geez.
That screech was non other than my girlfriend, Donna Tobin. We've been going slow for 7 month now but she wants our relationship to go to another level. Uh-oh. She can't see Kim and I like this!
Jack: Donna! Baby!
I immediately dropped Kim and she fell hard. I regret doing that but it's for the best.
Kim: Thanks alot Jack!.
Donna: what were you doing with her?
Jack: uh... we were just sparring.
Donna: oh. Okay. Jackie, you pwomised that you would go shopping with me for a new dwess.
She used her baby voice that is slightly annoying but there was something about it that was similar to mine. Nah.
Jack: oh yeah. that's right. Let me just say goodbye to the guys.
Kim: But Jack you can't leave. We were just in the middle of sparring. Remember?
Jack: oh. maybe some other time. Besides, don't you have a guy to spend some time with?
Kim: Apparently I do!
Milton: really? who?
Kim:um...you know...D-un-c-can. Yeah. Duncan
Eddie: Duncan? But that guy is way out of your league. Why would he go out with someone he turned down so many times.
Kim: well maybe he found something charming about me. It was love.
Jack: uh um okay. If y-you say so.
Donna: hey! how bout we go on a double date. sounds good?
kim: No!
Jack: yeah!
Kim: what?!
Donna: Great! how bout Friday night?
jack: sounds awesome. You will be there with Duncan Kim, won't you?
Kim: yeah. of course. It'll be great.(note the sarcasm)
Jack: okay! come on Donna, let's go shopping.
Donna: yay!
Kim's pov
Jack and Donna left for the mall. Immediately they left I hit a dummy so hard that it broke into two(that is naturally impossible. I think)
Milton: ooo looks like somebody's jealous
Kim: Watch it Krumpnick
Eddie: love is blind. Seriously, it is.
Jerry: don't worry Kim. someday, you'll be learning about love from a 'pro'
Kim: Keep dreaming Jerry. Keep dreaming
-Friday night. line break-
Kim's pov
I'm sitting on a park bench sobbing as Jack holds me close to him. I'm covered in falafel grease and grape juice and ketchup. Weird right? Tonight was awful and here's why:
-Flashback-
I somehow managed to convince Duncan to pretend that he's my boyfriend but only for a day. I guess he was taking it too far considering that he was constantly trying to do something bad to me. It's Friday night and I'm at Falafel Phil's with Duncan, Jack and Donna.
Jack: so...I hear you guys got together.
Kim: um...yeah. we've been going slow for some time now. Isn't that right sweetie?
Duncan: You know you're cute when you talk babe.
He winked at me but it looked kind of gross. But I had to go with it if I wanted to make Jack jealous. Did I just say that?
Kim: yeah. Cute.
Jack: speaking of cute, doesn't my Donna look adorable.
By adorable what does he mean? what I mean is what Donna looks like now. She's wearing a really tight dress that shows off a greater part of her cleavage and the dress is really short. And to top it she put on loads of makeup like a brand new doll. Is that what Jack means by adorable? If so, then that's not the Jack I know. Phil comes to take our orders
Phil: hey guys. So what would you like to eat?
Jack: um...I'll have the falafel grand basket with ketchup
Kim: I'll just have some grape juice.
Jack: really? grape juice on a date? are you sure?
Kim: yeah I am.
Duncan and Donna took their orders(i didn't put their order cause I didn't know what to write) and Phil went to it bring our food.
Duncan: Hey Kim. Here's a fact. Take out the g from grape. Guess what you get.
He winked at me again. Ewww he is sooooooooo gross. Duncan is such a pervert. I just hope that never happens to me. I looked over to the dojo and saw that the lights were still on.
Kim: hey. The dojo lights are still on
Jack's pov
Duncan just made a really disgusting joke that I didn't find funny. What if he real does that to Kim? then what will happen? NO Jack. You have to get that thought out of our mind. It can never happen to my Kimmy. Did I just call her my Kimmy?Nah Just a slip.
Kim: hey. The dojo lights are still on
Jack: what? they are?
Kim: Yeah. I'll go check it out.
Duncan: I'll come with you.
Kim: no! I mean I don't that's such a good idea considering I can take care of myself and...
Duncan:(violently) I said, I'll come with you!
Kim: okay okay! sheesh
That was harsh. There's something about Duncan that I don't like. Not that I'm jealous or anything. I watched them go out of the place and into the dojo. All through I was just staring at Kim and her beautiful blonde hair.
Donna: Jackie? Why are you staring at that low life?
Jack: who?
Donna: Kim of course.
Jack: Hey! no one talks about my Kimmy that way!
Donna: your kimmy? face it Jack, she was never yours. You were all mine.
Jack: NO! I wasn't yours. Now I realize that I love Kim and nothing can separate us. It's over Donna. Goodbye
I stormed right out of the building leaving Donna all alone. Man it felt good to let her know what's on my mind.
voice: ahhhhhhh!
Woah looks like someone's in trouble. And it sounds like it's coming from the dojo. KIM!
Kim's pov
Oh my goodness! I am currently going through torture! Duncan is raping me and I am NOT enjoying this. It would be so much better with Jack. Why am I even thinking that at this situation?!
Kim: HELP! HELP! SOMEONE HELP!
Duncan: SHUT UP YOU PIECE OF SH*T!
I felt like I had no hope. But that was about to change cause someone just entered the dojo.
Jack: KIM!
Kim: Jack?! HELP ME!
Duncan: Get out of here while you still have your head Brewer.
Jack: Bring it on!
Jack and Duncan started fighting. I used this as an opportunity to sneak away. I ran over to Falafel Phils. On the way, I hit the table we sat on and spilled grape juice and falafel grease all over me. I was a mess. Duncan ran inside trying to find me but just in time Jack came in and knocked him out. I ran away to a nearby bus top crying.
Jack: Kim!
I ignored him and sat on a bench when I reached one. I sat down letting my tears flow freely. I saw Jack running to me. I ignored him. He sat down next to me.
Jack: Kim?
Kim: what do you want Jack?
Jack: I care about you kim. I can't bear to see you like this(oh no it's getting cheesy)
Kim: you do? I thought no-one cared. Especially after what happened with Duncan.(still getting cheesy)
Jack: I care. a lot.( Almost there)
Kim: Thanks. You're really sweet you know?
Jack: I get that a lot.
we both laughed. That was the first time that night that I actually laughed.
-End of flashback-
Jack pulled me closer to himself and I felt safe and secure. I pulled away from him and looked at one side. I saw two people that looked familar. Duncan and Donna!
Kim: Jack look! It's Duncan and Donna! And they're making out!
Jack: why am I not surprised. I don't care about them. As long as you're by my side.(NOW IT'S CHEESY!)
Kim: awww. Does this mean I'm your girlfriend?
Jack: Does this answer your question?
He started leaning in and I decided to play along. We leaned in until our lips softly touched. The kiss was so good and I wished it lasted longer. We finally pulled away.
Kim: I'm guessing that's a yes.
And scene. Wow. I feel so good. Don't forget to review. And please be honest. And also, please check out my story other story called 'legend of the mirror fairies' and I am working on 'i spy, you spy'. I am also working on 2 or 3 new stories so watch out. Review!